Fridays http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04 Fri, 03 May 2024 16:05:59 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Teachers' Role in Upbringing, Sanam Maghsoodnia http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/834-teachers-role-in-upbringing-sanam-maghsoodnia http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/834-teachers-role-in-upbringing-sanam-maghsoodnia  

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Good teachers are more important to a child`s development than good parents. In this era, education is one of the most important factors in human`s life. For being a successful person, a good teacher can help us strengthen our the motivation and knowledge. However, good parents raise their children from birth and they spend more time with their children than teachers. In the first place, parents can guide us better than anyone. Because they know our weaknesses and emotional conditions. For example, when I had an exam my mother always sat beside me and tried to keep me calm and helped me to understand my lessons. In my opinion, mothers have the most important role. On the other hand, some parents expect their offspring's interests to be similar to their own. A group of parents always try to keep their children in an educational environment and as a result it reflects on their attitude. For instance, the father of the family is an engineer and an educated man. They insist that their boy that he must go to university and become an engineer too, but the boy is more successful in playing piano and literature. This boy can't be successful in university because he does not like to be an engineer. In addition, the most important duty of a teacher is subjective knowledge. But good teachers who are capable of teaching what students need to learn and have a sense of responsibility try to help pupils’s academic questions. Moreover, a good teacher has the capability to become a hero or a model for students. For example, a teacher who had has a sense of responsibility humor saved his students in a fire. Furthermore, Children are mirrors of their parents. Some parents take show their aggressiveness, frustration, and temper out on their child and these affects their behavior. These things are reflecteds on in their behavior as they grows up. Sometimes it crosses the linebarrier and strikes reflects on the society as a crime. In a nutshell, parents are important teachers in our lives, but they are not always the best teachers. I believe that most people can think and choose the correct way/path/ approach forming. Besides, good teachers are also important for a child to grow up and become successful.

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Starting School in Early Ages, Hosein Talebi http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/833-starting-school-in-early-ages-hosein-talebi http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/833-starting-school-in-early-ages-hosein-talebi  

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree or disagree with either of these views? In this day and age, the importance of literacy literation is undeniable not unapparent to anybody, whereas doubts about the age of starting pupils’ nurturing have raised controversies regarding this issue. Some people believe that instructing children from early ages, around four or five years old, would open their eyes to the new horizon of words earlier, and it might open them a gate to the world of science and knowledge. Besides, attending at classes and interacting with their peers would hone their social communicationg skills. Therefore, starting children’s education as soon as possible will help them to know their world earlier and nurtures a the sense of collaborating inside their souls. On the other hand, critics claim that children start to know the world which surrounded them by touching, smelling and even tasting its pieces. They must have enough time to accomplish their recognition. The sooner you send them to school, the weaker their knowledge about physical world will be. In addition, experiences of adults whom have been sent to school earlier than their mates reveal that they all have regrets about the childhood playing. In my opinion, although education is the most important and valuable part of every child’s nurture, starting it from early ages might adversely affect their attitude toward pedagogical programs. I certainly believe that if there is an educational plan for very adversely affect their attitude toward pedagogical programs. I certainly believe that if there is an educational plan for very young children, some conditions should be considered. Firstly, these types of educations would not be shaped in formal classes and should be fun and mixed with games. Secondly, they must improve their cooperating ability among children. In conclusion despite the fact that schooling in early ages might appear to have some benefits, some certain circumstances should be prepared so that they enjoy the benefits.affect beneficially.

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Mohsen http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/832-mohsen http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/832-mohsen  

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The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Estimated maximum population of Asian elephants Vietnam India Malaysia Sri Lanka Cambodia Laos Myanmar Thailand China 0 2000 4000 6000 8000 10000 12000 1997 2004 The bar graph illustrates/compares the estimated maximum population of elephants in some Asian countries in 1997 and 2004. At first glance, it is clearly obvious that the number of elephants decreased in all countries included in the graph except Cambodia and Laos. To begin with, it is evident that most elephants existed in India. In 1997 their number of elephants in India was just below 10000 and then it decreased before increasing to approximately 7200 in 2004 which was far higher than that (the number) in the other countries. With a similar pattern, elephants' population declined noticeably in Vietnam, Srilanka and china between 1997 and 2004. Malaysia and Thailand experienced a dramatic drop and the population of elephants in these two countries decreased to half in 2007. The number of elephants in Laos remained stable just over 1000 over that period and Surprisingly Cambodia was the only country where that elephants' population rose gently to around 1200 from 1994 to 2007. In conclusion, the number of elephants in most countries went down while three places followed a different trend.

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In Many Countries Children Engaged in Some Kind of Paid Work http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/831-in-many-countries-children-engaged-in-some-kind-of-paid-work http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/831-in-many-countries-children-engaged-in-some-kind-of-paid-work  

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In many countries children engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this? Child labor is totally wrong. In an age when children need their time playing and training, when they are forced to work they are damaged psychologically and some physically hard works inhibit the child's growth. In from my perspective, children should not work for earning money because they should only concentrate on their study instead of work. Moreover, I think childhood is the only time when they can enjoy anything with their parents or friends instead of earning money because during that time they should not need to think about the responsibility of paying bills, or fees. etc. In addition, children are not capable of doing all types of work in their childhood. Most of the work would be proven to be risky for them. But if they do so, I think they may face a lot of problems regarding study or knowledge which is very useful to improve their career goals. Some people think that children should work for experience which is helpful to improve lead their career. Moreover, they think that it also plays an important role for in learning and taking responsibility. It is not usual that many children are dropped out from their schools because of their need to work and earn money. The jobs done by children are often risky and unsuitable for health. The owners often offer fewer less lower wages to child laborers and behave badly toward with them. This has a very detrimental effect of on children’s psychology. In conclusion, I believe that the disadvantages if of paid work overweigh outweigh its advantages. Governments should take the necessary measures to eradicate this ill/problemsin from society; youth are the future of any country and should not be deprived with of their basic rights.

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In Many Countries Children Engaged in Some Kind of Paid Work, Maryam Pourian http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/830-in-many-countries-children-engaged-in-some-kind-of-paid-work-maryam-pourian http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/830-in-many-countries-children-engaged-in-some-kind-of-paid-work-maryam-pourian  

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In many countries children engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this? Child labor is totally wrong. In an age when children need their time playing and training, When they are forced to work they are damaged psychologically and some physically hard work hard to make the child physically do not have good growth. Some derelict family and miss managed like drug addicted parents or lose one of them need money so they are forced to send their children to work for this kind of problems, the government and social institutions requires should help this families economical and spiritual, so that they can have a better life. Other than they didn’t need to send their children for working. Research findings show that social factors such as input suppliers such as family and school failure, poverty, street children, families and their inability to adapt to the lifestyle in big cities, pollution and urban fringe areas being harmful, lack of supervision the organization responsible enough, and incorrect patterns of interaction between citizens and street children, all hands have the phenomenon of street children (who are mostly street children), continue to be a problem impassable in many large cities truly shine.

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Children Punishnemt, Narges Manouchehri http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/829-children-punishnemt-narges-manouchehri http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/829-children-punishnemt-narges-manouchehri  

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Punishment is one of the major subjects always debated between people leading to several strong arguments and counter‐arguments. It is unanimously acknowledged that children learn how to deal with the world from early ages. Various genetic differentiation and different parenting styles result in inheriting several characteristics including some misbehavior. From one point of view, children in the golden age era start to realize the environment around them, observing and imitating the behavior of people. Then, they try to socializeing with the others. In such vital age range, if they don’t understand the impacts of their fault, they will get spoiled. Permitting them to do whatever they want makes them gain/develop/form a misjudgment about themselves. There are strong beliefs that they need to attain certain etiquettes in life by parents introducing punishments whilst misbehaving. On the other hand, childhood life prepares mankind towards adulthood. Children’s confidence and selfesteem is built from the moment they are born. Therefore, it is important to bringing them up wisely. Sever punishments as a reply to their inappropriate behavior weaken their personality and bring undesirable and irreversible impacts to their life in the long run. There is always a question raised about the mode and severity of punishment. It seems that some light types of that could hint the child to improve his manner. This can be illustrated by some examples. If a child doesn’t brush his teeth before sleeping, we could disallow him to eat a cake or chocolate or lesson reduce his pocket money in case of wrongdoing. In conclusion, for essential decisions like this issue, psychological considerations deserve to be foremost in our mind.

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As Children Become Adults, Amir Gilani http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/828-as-children-become-adults-amir-gilani http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/161-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-04-04/828-as-children-become-adults-amir-gilani  

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As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behavior and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good? As children grow up many changes happens in many aspects of their life during their growth. These changes are including include physical and emotional development of which these two main changes result in key differences in social behavior and psychological changes differences between children and adults. In this essay I am trying to give my viewpoints in this regard along with some related examples. One of the main bold characteristics of a child is his honesty. Children most often freely talk about their needs, feelings and emotions while adults are unable to express themselves as of like children. In fact adults in most cases of course have several masks that prevent them from behaving naturally. As an example most probably we can remember a occasions when a child wants to talk and ask for something but his parents stop him in any way. I myself was witness in many occasions a child just wanted to ask for another glass of coke and his parents and even an older sibling stopped him. The other difference in social behavior of adults in comparison to children is that children easily fall out and reconcile with in a way that nothing has happened, while I believe this is a complicated case for adults. We, as adults, definitely can remember such cases in our personal and professional life let alone cases the case which have lasted for a life. To show a very clear example of such behavior is the cold relation between Iran and the United States during the last 38 years in which the Iranian leaders cannot forget about what happened in 1332 and some other forgivable cases that to me are not that unforgivable. To make a long story short, I can say that I personally believe that the changes I mentioned above are destructive attitudes. I wish adults could retain most of their childhood social behaviors. I believe if adults could treat others like children, the world would be a better place to live in.

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