Fridays http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01 Thu, 02 May 2024 03:49:01 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Adults Ahould Follow Their Traditional Culture, Nikoo Mohamad http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1095-adults-ahould-follow-their-traditional-culture-nikoo-mohamad http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1095-adults-ahould-follow-their-traditional-culture-nikoo-mohamad  

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Some people believe that adults should follow their traditional culture. Others, however, think that it is not necessary in the modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Culture, an inevitable part of human beings, has passed down to throughout nations over the centuries. Some consider Following culture traditionally as an essential part of their life, while others presume that we should entirely eliminate it. Nevertheless, In this writer's view, a more effective approach would be to bring culture into the twenty-first century . As previously indicated ,culture is inherited from our ancestors. Consequently, some humankind human kinds wants it to be authentic as before. However, this strong belief may give rise to a disruptive extremism. In other words, any change in it or even a little inattention to it would be considered to be a disrespectful behavior by the advocates of this side(devoted group). On the contrary, those who support the champions of the idea of the civilized society without any conventional views tend to look at the bright side of this issue. They claim that the next generation should entirely get familiar with these deep-rooted beliefs, but in terms of lifestyle and the manner of living, they should go beyond the restrictions. Therefore, this unrestricted upbringing method could contribute to the stimulation of these juvenile's creativity. In conclusion, while some are entirely opposed to any change in an indigenous culture, others consume that in the matter of having a sophisticated example for a long life, heritage s/lifestyles/attitudes should be changed or even eliminated in order to take the interest of each and every one into account.

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Automatic Translation, Faegheh http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1094-automatic-translation-faegheh http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1094-automatic-translation-faegheh  

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Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translator and interpretors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Although people use their devices cell phones to translate some words or vocabularies, they know those applications have made human translators redundant.created to necessary needs because and they are it is not reliable for providing the exact equivalent.meaning. We should redress the imbalance of using humans who can do the job.these kinds of apps. Over the past few years, cell phones particularly smart phones and computers technologies have started to change many aspects of our lives. It is quite common these days for people in many countries to have a mobile/ an application for translating. However, despite the availability of these kinds of applications, they are not trustworthy. All they do is giving us a rough/approximate equivalence of the original text.We can benefit from applications' rapid pace in translating and we need to constantly adapt to it/the high speed. From point of my view, in scientific texts or articles, we need someone who has graduated in that especial course and has mastery domination in translating. The task issue of people who translate is a complex and sensitive one. The strong point of this kind of translation is the reasonable accuracy. For example, nowadays, there is a university course that is named is "The English language translation"., not only does it show the importance of precious and scientific translation, but also it reminds us of the value of translating. In conclusion, regardless of what users they are using the cellphone for, the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations/ imaginations due to functions which have been designed or created to make bring lives easier. For example simultaneous translation application/form is one of the great examples of this phenomenon. Besides, we should not neglect of a literal translation.

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Brain Drain, Saeed Shokravi http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1093-brain-drain-saeed-shokravi http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1093-brain-drain-saeed-shokravi  

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Page 200 of Saadaat Jozveh: More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.  What is your opinion?  Do you think rich countries should pay poorer countries for the people they encourage to come?  What other measures could rich countries take to encourage qualified people to stay and develop their own countries? In today’s world brain drain is being described as a major disturbance to developing countries. In fact, although poor countries spare no efforts in order to achieve higher and better standards of living, loss of intelligent people losing intelligence is one of the most crucial impediments these countries are being faced with which has caused them huge amounts of damages. Despite stealing smart people or specialists is neither is it a crime, nor is it illegal, a majority of people have reservations about this phenomenon and think of it as a crime which is being committed by rich governments. For instance, they may claim that while a nation is suffering from inadequate health care facilities, having the full benefit of a knowledgeable genius surgeon like Prof. Sami’ee, iran's best neurologist, is definitely unfair. Moreover, some of these/such critics them blame both 3rd world governments- by not providing promising infrastructures-, and the immigrants themselves for since their lack of patriotism. either. On the other hand, most of the elites and skilled workers living in underdeveloped countries are not only are they being paid in low salaries, but also they are facing with limited career prospects. As a result, they become attracted to overseas life where they might find their dream job, opportunities for higher qualifications and above all greater income. As a matter of fact, rich governments are capable of taking measures such as tightening their migration plans to help poor countries prevent brain loss, yet expecting subsidies from them is not realistic intellectual at all. The way I see it, even though despite brain drain has have brought destructive detrimental issues for developing countries, it is still up to individuals to choose how they desire to build their own future. As a result of that, governments should try as much hard as they can to assure their genuine qualified people a prosperous future and prevent/keep avoid them from leaving.

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Buying and Using Cars, Hossein Talebi http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1092-buying-and-using-cars-hossein-talebi http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1092-buying-and-using-cars-hossein-talebi  

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More and more people buy or use cars and it makes an impact on the environment. Discuss the consequences of this trend. What could be a solution to this problem? Nowadays a remarkable number of scientists consider pollution the most important problem which humankind has is encountered, inasmuch as many individuals tend to purchase and use cars which are adversely affecting our surroundings. Critics assert that the more we use personal cars, the more crowded streets we will have, and as a result the more polluted cities we would be faced with. Humans are destroying their environment by polluting it more and more every day. In fact, they are ruining their living planet by emission of green-house gasses which leads to ozone layer depletion, and eventually leading leads their habitat to destruction/vanish. Although much many effort has been made to decrease the number rate of polluting causes, their number is remarkably increasing day by day. The newly manufactured cars are added to the stuck stocked ones in traffic, and making noise and smoke. Experts believe that to diminish this disadvantageous trend it is the government’s responsibility to implement plans to encourage people to use public transportation for their daily inter-city journeys. To this end, authorities should spend more money in the field of the passenger transporting infrastructure. People might use buses and trains to commute if they find them convenient and economical. In addition, people should be persuaded to use other means of transportation which do not need fossil fuel such as bikes/bicycles. Besides, individuals should notice that they can walk to some of their destinationssome paths, for example for shopping in markets which are located in their neighborhood. To summarize, although people have the right to use private transport, they had better gravitate towards public transport so that less pollution is caused through their fuel burning functioning, thereby giving the earth the chance to breathe again. . in spite of the right that people have to buy cars, inasmuch as using these facilities which burn fuel is destructive/baneful, they should try to change their transportation method to reduce the rate of carbon dioxide production and let the earth to breath once again.

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Children and Leisure Activities, Boshra http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1091-children-and-leisure-activities-boshra http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1091-children-and-leisure-activities-boshra  

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT CHILDRENS LEISURE ACTIVITIES MUST BE EDUCATIONAL, OTHERWISE THEY ARE A COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME. Due to do the high speed of technological progress in our society over the last half century, there are is a variety of toys available to children. The matter is that which kinds of them are is appropriate to these this underage under-aged people. Some scientists think that children should play with some informative things and just concentrate on educational activities instead of wasting time on some other hobbies. However, some others strongly asserted that children should be free to choose their favorites. The first group of scientists maintain the belief that by allocating our babies time to raise their information about some fundamental facts of life and teach learn them to keep their time table, they become more independent. In this way we can recognize their talents better and trigger their sense of creativity. This leads them to be more successful. The second group of scientists say that if we persuade our sons and girls to choose a limited number of the restricted kind of activities, we will would make their life completely monotonous. I personally share the same view with the second idea that insists on paying attention to our offspring's s needs/demands/requests appeals, and the more focusing on educati education ng, the more isolated the generation. Although some researchers assume that some other kinds of activities which are not does not considered scientific are detrimental, most of them are definitely effective for to this under aged generation. On the whole, not only should we be careful about children's preferences but also we can help them to manage their time and avoid wasting it. Boshra

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Children and School, Snanz Nasr http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1090-children-and-school-snanz-nasr http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1090-children-and-school-snanz-nasr  

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In many countries, students must leave school because of their poor behaviors. Some people think it is a good idea, while others argue that there are other ways to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. In some nations, disruptive students are expelleding from school due to their misbehavior. While some opine that unruly pupils have to leave the school, many others are opposed to this point of view and claim cited it might be possible to approach the problem in a different way. First and foremost, some people argue that disruptive schoolchildren should expel be expelled from institutes because they would undermine the valuable time of the class and disturb others' learning process by making noise during classes. Thus, teachers should be able to ask them to leave in order to prevent them from wasting teachers’s time on trying to maintain classroom order rather than in spite of teaching the given lesson. If the unruly pupils leave, the class will would gain its peace and also edify other students by this action. On the other hand, in many people's view there are means to address this problem for example, there are psychological methods which assist teachers in controlling those misbehaviors in a proper way, one of which is giving mischief responsibilities in the class and keeping getting them busy plus helping them grow growing a sense of responsibility in them. Hence, those methods can mend their indiscipline and above all, they can continue their study in the institute. Therefore, the challenge could be settled rather than getting worse by asking them to leave. By way of conclusion, there are strong arguments on both sides. After analyzing I believe that schoolchildren deserved to be given a chance, because they have the ability to be a useful person and expelling them will not make them compliant versatile.

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In Many Countries the Amount of Crime is Increasing, Sarang Rose http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1089-in-many-countries-the-amount-of-crime-is-increasing-sarang-rose http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1089-in-many-countries-the-amount-of-crime-is-increasing-sarang-rose  

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Task: In many countries the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How we can deal with those causes? One of the most important issues which many countries are struggling with is the crime wave. There are numerous number of causes in this regard some of which besides some solutions will be discussed in this essay. My personal conviction is that poverty is first and foremost reason why we observe the crime rate is increasing. Many offenders commit an offence because they cannot provide for their family, so carrying out a felony is their only chance to settle their financial issues. Moreover, it is believed that a proper education plays a vital role in preventing individuals form turning to crime. Last but not least, it is claimed that the gangs have easy access to the Internet where they can easily seduce individuals who are morally susceptible to carry out a crime. In spite of crime rising, there are an enormous number of solutions which can be taken into account in order to reduce this trend. The majority of experts claim that by creating job opportunities we can cut the number of criminals. In other words, the more job vacancies, the less fewer offenders. In addition, every sensible person asserts that it is incumbent on the education system to raise awareness against the adverse effects of committing a crime. Also, governments should introduce laws by which delinquents will be penalized if they try to attract juveniles to crime through the Internet or any other ways. In conclusion, we should consider that perpetration of committing a crime/wrongdoing/felony is not a novel phenomenon, so it is quite impossible either to eradicate it or decreaseing the rate in short run a short period. However, I believe that statesmen have a pivotal role in reducing the offence crime rate not only by legislation/introducing laws, but also educational activities.

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The Poor, Arefeh http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1088-the-poor-arefeh-2 http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/190-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-11-01/1088-the-poor-arefeh-2  

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Although many countries are becoming richer, these societies still have members who are poor and struggle each day to survive. Why do you think this happens and what can wealthy societies do to help their poorer citizens? Despite the fact that many countries are getting wealthier, there are still many people in these communities, who live below the poverty line, and they quite literally cannot afford their essential needs. Undoubtedly, numerous factors can be considered the underlying reasons in this regard. First and foremost, unfair/unequal distribution of wealth among different classes of society is the conspicuous reason. In many communities, a great deal/a large number of financial resources are concentrated on beyond some sections of society. As a matter of fact the upper class involves such arrogant individuals who tend to exclude others benefiting from budgetary considerations. Although they have even more than enough money, they are too such greedy to fail to assist the poor financially. There are some proper ways to aid the people who cannot meet their needs. The most obvious solution is paving the way for teaching them some practical skills in order to that they could benefit from them for making more money. A further step is for the government to provide/create some job opportunities so that the rate of unemployment will decrease, which leads to them meeting their essential demands much easier than before. In conclusion, if the government and some relevant organizations should introduce laws to give the financial provisions out equally, thereby narrowing the gap between the rich and the poor. However, people, especially the well-off can take action of their own accord so that they can help their fellow citizens having have/lead/to have/to lead more comfortable life. Arefeh

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