Fridays http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22 Tue, 30 Apr 2024 19:53:16 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) International Travel, Maryam Mohamadtabar http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22/1726-international-travel-maryam-mohamadtabar http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22/1726-international-travel-maryam-mohamadtabar  

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International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? Today's world is the era of communications, of which one of the most important is the tourism industry. A huge number of people all over the world go to traveling for many reasons. I believe that the benefits of foreign travel outweigh the downsides as these travels have a lot of advantages to both tourists and local communities. First and foremost, travelling abroad opens people's mind and it is a useful way to gain new experiences for them and also they can get familiar with different cultures .Furthermore, knowing about other countries with different cultures, customs and much more besides have has a positive impact on visitors so that they will have a new attitude to their life. Secondly, travel is quite beneficial to avoid stress. For example, some elderly people who are professional travelers have a great life expectancy and they are to some extent healthier and more joyful than others who are in at the same age. Moreover, travelers can speak other languages if they want to have relationship with local people that arewhich is useful to boost their knowledge. On the other hand, tourism is vital for the economy of some countries. Some areas rely on tourism for their income because visitors spend money in these places. Tourism helps to improve the standard of living for local people in remote areas as they do did not have any facilities before this. Also, tourism brings jobs which is useful for younger people who they are encouraged to stay in their city or village instead of seeking jobs in big cities. For instance, the Masouleh village as a one of the most spectacular places in Iran is a successful example for the influence of tourism on locals. They can sell their local products and can rent their beautiful houses to tourists for making money. In conclusion, I opine that international travel that has expanded in recent years has/plays a key role in quality of life of many people like tourists and local people which is very beneficial for them both.

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House or Apartment, Amir Adel http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22/1725-house-or-apartment-amir-adel http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22/1725-house-or-apartment-amir-adel  

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? In the past, the concept of living in a shared and compressed area never comes came to people's mind and most people were living in private houses. By introducingwith the introduction of modern life and human ability in construction of skyscrapers, however, the apartment was added to house buyers' or renters' options. Now, the question is which one is more suitable for us, living in a concreted capsule or possessing a quietly small house? The first and foremost, when we own a house, we will have the privacy. Consider a crowded apartment that where/in which you have to deal with unfamiliar people and you do not have the freedom to do what you like. For instance, you cannot simply listen to your favourite music loudly or host large parties until one or two of in the morning, or in most apartments having pets is prohibited. Actually when we decide to live in a residential complex, we have to obey many red tapesrules and regulations. Moreover, usually apartment residents have to share resources together, and they are not permitted to alter them by their own decision. For example, yards and gardens are shared, and some restricted rules ban you from growing up your vegetables in there. In addition, it seems when you buy a private house, you own a piece of land, not a space on other roofs. Owning a land gives people a feeling of peaceful; but if, owing to any natural disasters, your house is destroyed, you will have a land to build it again and these ownership conditions induce feel of confidence to the landlord. In conclusion, while living in an apartment has some undeniable benefits like low costs in services and maintaining, a secureity feeling, more chances for communication and getting help and support by more neighbours, it would be more pleasure pleasant for humankind, the sense of possession, freedom and solitude in their territories.

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Debt, Sahar Beiglou http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22/1724-debt-sahar-beiglou http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/278-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-10-22/1724-debt-sahar-beiglou  

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem. Today's fashion world, is going toward making specific stereotypes that tell us what kind of lifestyle is better, that is what body, clothes, foods and anything else is are necessary for our life, otherwise we are would be living in the wrong style. In this respect, people get into some difficulties in order to buying things for themselves. Nowadays, excessive and unnecessary shopping turns into an important problem in developed societies. First of all, blindly following of fashion trends and getting into that deeply can cause some problems. In fact, being impressed of with patterns that mostly is generated in movies, music videos or promotional teasers can be a factors of in provoking people to pursue these patters. Furthermore, this leads to appearing psychological disorders appearing and it can intensifyies the condition. On the other hand, not only psychological disorders but the wealth gap can be another reason to strengthen aggravate/compound this problem. Getting assimilated into societies that drown in these stereotypes, compels people to chase the patterns that give them a pleasant feeling and satisfaction about their life. It is a commonfamous mental illness called self-deficiency. Actually, in this matter lacking of in self confidence increases the appetite of for shopping and leads the purchasing procedure in the wrong path. It means/simply put, people involve themselves in some economical obstacles while they really don't need goods that they already bought. In my opinion, this is a political and governmental ideology fault that leads people to more purchasing in order to extract more money from them. But in this case the rule role of education and mass media is very important to in learn teaching people to have more self confidence and select their own best career in life.

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