Fridays http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22 Fri, 03 May 2024 04:34:54 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Aida Mofakhami, Hunger Problem http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3117-aida-mofakhami-hunger-problem http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3117-aida-mofakhami-hunger-problem  

جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Despite the enhancement of cultivation and agricultural improvements over the last century, hunger is still remained remains as a major problem which many people are encountered with worldwide; that is, there are millions of people who do not have enough food to eat. This essay will discuss the causes of such a problem as well as the respective solutions. First, there is not the same possibility for all countries to have good-conditioned agriculture with good conditions due to their soil quality or lack of suitable weather for cultivating. For example, in some parts of Africa, whose which are mostly parts are covered with desert and poor soil, plants there are unlikely to grow anything compared to most parts of Europe. Therefore, this disparity in farming resources would affect the inequality of food distribution. Another thing reason is, the economic crisis crises which could result in the poverty of some people, mostly the worker class, could occasioned them severe hunger because this these walks of society are more vulnerable to lose losing their basic needs than the others. A good solution for this problem would be to educate the public to manage their daily needs in order to reduce their consumerism consumerist behaviors to be able to help the poorer class. Another option which is incumbent to on the government, is to dedicate subsidy subsidies for some basic foods like bread, rice, and meat only for people who receive the minimum amount of wage to fulfill their initial demands. Exporting foods from rich countries to those places which have poor agriculture facilities is also a good action which provides support for other nations too. Overall, food crisis does exist. therefore, there it is everybody’s responsibility to care about it quicklyseriously. We should not lose sight of the fact that we could make radical changes in our surroundings only by small habitual changes like using properlyproper consumption in order to amend this consumerist culture with simple steps that can be practiced from today because we, humans, need each other in order to make the world a better place to live and this practice would not be possible unless we cooperate together. Duration:40 min

]]>
hamedjafari1374@gmail.com (Hamed ) Writing Workshop Friday 98.06.22 Sun, 15 Sep 2019 18:07:18 +0000
Bita, Take Care of Old People http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3116-bita-take-care-of-old-people http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3116-bita-take-care-of-old-people  

جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.

Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retirement, others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reason… Roughly in all of the countries throughout the world rarely can you find a person without any anxiety for the retirement period, so whether individuals should face this era alone or by the companywith the aid of the government is brought into question, although I think the government latter should help people retiring under any circumstances. To begin with, it can be said people who were employees could save money for their own retirement, so that they can overcome their financial needs without any supports, ;having said that, there are some aspects which should be considered. First of all, dedicating the optimum time of their life span to the government agencies or private sectors, the staff provide their country with a vast range of services. Many of a service that has affected the growth of the economy, so the staff play a crucial role in the improvement of their society’s situation economically, socially and even culturally. Subsequently, it seems fair that retirement retired communities can receive the patronage of the government when they retired. Because during this period of life not only are they likely to see a drop in their income, but also they may suffer from a lack of physical abilities and also struggle with some diseases which renders the an increasingly vulnerable situation to them. On the other hand, some of the aging population who has have had low revenues might have spent all of their earning on necessary needs, such as housing, foods, clothing, so there is may be no money to save and to plan for the future. To taking everything into consideration, I personally opine that although saving money during their working years seems necessary provided that they can, the governments should undertake the responsibility of retired individuals and put into action some meticulously planned programs to be apatron of them by which they will be financially solvent enough to meet and fulfill retirement prerequisitesneeds.

]]>
hamedjafari1374@gmail.com (Hamed ) Writing Workshop Friday 98.06.22 Sun, 15 Sep 2019 18:07:02 +0000
Iman, Parent PlayT ask http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3115-iman-parent-playt-ask http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3115-iman-parent-playt-ask  

جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.

Humped overwhelmed byunder the pressure of this rapid-paced modern life-style, rarely can you families be foundfindwho a family shareing a lot of time with each other. Both parents and childrensides have many activities to struggle with. Due to this fact, parents should become able to manage the remained remaining time trying to meet their children's needs. Experiencing the world through the playing, children are seeking the situations which bring them these types of experiences, as psychologic psychologists claims. In fact, not only does the childhood playing serve as an emotional way for parents and their offspring to get along with each other, but also it can help children to learn many of a material. Even to the extent that an Italian teacher invented a teaching method based on such a phenomenongames. Therefore, parents should not lose this very opportunity. My memory, taking as an example, is loaded with the glimpse of those childhood games. On the other hand, considering the new systems of schools, playing with children is an adequate activity to help our children in their path to flourish but not sine qua none. Actually, demanding lots of cooperation from parents, schools are trying their utmost to define an active role for them in their children's life. I can count the numerous tasks bringing brought by my nephews to their home which require their parents’ hand to be handled. Moreover, this cooperation can make/develop a more serious relation between family members especially in a the purely trusted trusting eyes of a child, though these homework assignments seem childish for adults. In a nutshell, I do not think of a harshly deterministic concentration on a specific aspect of a child’s life as a sensible affair. Only when you learn the ability of time management and divide it into various sections to strike a balance between THEM, can you meet different types of your charges' needs.

]]>
hamedjafari1374@gmail.com (Hamed ) Writing Workshop Friday 98.06.22 Sun, 15 Sep 2019 18:06:48 +0000
Mehdi Ozarian, Computer and Children http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3114-mehdi-ozarian-computer-and-children http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3114-mehdi-ozarian-computer-and-children  

جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. These days the computers are an essential part of our life. It isthey are useful for every member of the family in day to day life. In many countries children often use computers them from a very young age. In my opinion, such children who use the computer daily are actually developing critical skills for their futures. For from a personal point of view, computers are an invaluable resource to help children and young people explore the world around them. For instance, children who use the internet to satisfy their curiosity about various topics are already becoming independent learners. On the other hand, the negatives of using too much computer cannot be denied. Many children are likely to be addicted to computers, to video games in particular. Spending too much time on computer games, children will lose their interest in studying as well as communicating with their peers. Young children who play games more than 7-8 hours or do unproductive tasks in a computer are actually bringing more negative points that than learning to use the miracle machines. But think about a child who learns programming, plays games, learns advanced computing 3-4 hours a day; she would become a great computer professional someday. In conclusion, if the young people are spending their time for entertainment purposes in front of a computerscreen, then he/shethey had better be utilized in somewhere else. Parents should either supervise their children while using computers, the internet and encourage them to use it them for benefits or do not allow their children to waste their time with on computers.

]]>
hamedjafari1374@gmail.com (Hamed ) Writing Workshop Friday 98.06.22 Sun, 15 Sep 2019 18:06:33 +0000
Mohamed, Demolition of a Historical Building http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3113-mohamed-demolition-of-a-historical-building http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/435-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-06-22/3113-mohamed-demolition-of-a-historical-building  

جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.

Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say:  Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.  Suggest a future use for this building.  Recommend a way to raise money for repairs. Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my bitter regret for what the local council has evidently decided to conduct to the old Ferdows Mansion. Having recently completed its bicentennial, the building has almost been the permanent fixture of our city. This historical site which belonged to the royal family of the Qajar dynasty used to provide accommodation for more than five generations. Albeit deserted and derelict for a nearly a decade now, it is a fine construction which consists of a palace, a pool and a garden surrounding the entire area. The two minarets on both sides of the palace from which one can get an astonishing view of the whole city certainly add to the beauty of this magnificent mansion. Although admittedly the entire area has been abandoned, and maintaining it might impose an extra cost for on the city council, I strongly believe there are viable measures to save this domestic asset. The open courtyard, filled with different kinds of lovely flowers and plants such as lilies and Daisiesdaisies, has been used by locals as a place for family gatherings which is a shared memory among many of the residents and visitors. This creates the opportunity to convert the building into a tourist attraction, providing enough revenue through advertisements. Should the city officials manage to draw attention to this site, raising sums of money would be easy. My friend and I, as local residents truly in love with our city, have already made attempts to make the old Ferdows Mansion a listed building, sending letters to national authorities and meeting with them, and this can bring the building under the spotlight once again. I hope our effort will achieve the desired results and that you will ponder over my request and take the appropriate action. Yours sincerely Reza

]]>
hamedjafari1374@gmail.com (Hamed ) Writing Workshop Friday 98.06.22 Sun, 15 Sep 2019 18:06:19 +0000