FridaysGMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم
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It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial topic amongst many people about giving advice to the youths. While many a
person believes the priceless experience of the older generation is well worth listening to, others hold
that the millennials had better consult with their peers/contemporaries/same-age counterparts.
Though in many cases it may differ and we cannot generalize this important subject to all subjects,
this short essay elaborates on both sides discussing the merits and demerits of both viewpoints.
Perhaps an overwhelming majority of individuals subscribe to the view that our world has changed
dramatically compared to even 50 years ago, hence the importance of consulting with the youths. I
believe this is not a reasonable argument since many aspects of our life such as social values,
respecting the moralities, and the concept of family as a basic pillar of human society have not
changed by the passage of time. This is why I think our senior citizens can give priceless pieces of
advice to the young generation because they once lived what their children are living.
Having said that, we have to accept that due to the recent development in science and technology our
ancestors are unable to give advice on the subject they do not have any experience about. Distance
relations, epidemic diseases, and weapons of mass destruction are typical examples that the old
generations either did not have or could not manage it properly. Such cases are the ones I
wholeheartedly argue that the young generation had better consult about with the younger
advisors/consultants.
To cut a long story short, I must say that depending on the subject, the youths have to choose their
consultant, but at the end of the day they have to learn that they have to accept the consequences of
their decisions. Bearing in mind that no one is complete a combination of both the old and young
consultants can pave the way for making an informed choice.
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It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial topic amongst many people about giving advice to the youths. While many a
person believes the priceless experience of the older generation is well worth listening to, others hold
that the millennials had better consult with their peers/contemporaries/same-age counterparts.
Though in many cases it may differ and we cannot generalize this important subject to all subjects,
this short essay elaborates on both sides discussing the merits and demerits of both viewpoints.
Perhaps an overwhelming majority of individuals subscribe to the view that our world has changed
dramatically compared to even 50 years ago, hence the importance of consulting with the youths. I
believe this is not a reasonable argument since many aspects of our life such as social values,
respecting the moralities, and the concept of family as a basic pillar of human society have not
changed by the passage of time. This is why I think our senior citizens can give priceless pieces of
advice to the young generation because they once lived what their children are living.
Having said that, we have to accept that due to the recent development in science and technology our
ancestors are unable to give advice on the subject they do not have any experience about. Distance
relations, epidemic diseases, and weapons of mass destruction are typical examples that the old
generations either did not have or could not manage it properly. Such cases are the ones I
wholeheartedly argue that the young generation had better consult about with the younger
advisors/consultants.
To cut a long story short, I must say that depending on the subject, the youths have to choose their
consultant, but at the end of the day they have to learn that they have to accept the consequences of
their decisions. Bearing in mind that no one is complete a combination of both the old and young
consultants can pave the way for making an informed choice.
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Children Overweight2020-10-02T13:08:22+00:002020-10-02T13:08:22+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/526-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-07-11/3744-children-overweightHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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The best entertainment all of over the world is food and for children it’s it has become so interesting,
well for machining mechanical life this these days achieve toa variety of foodchow is so easy. Advertising
is targeting children with musical and colorful plays of fast food and …. How children have overweight in
as a result of overeating are is going be discussed.
Technology and modern life have been played the main role in changing habits especially that habit
the meal of children, in the family wherethat parents have to work for over long hours, children should
eat fast food, they learn in the first years of life tothat become crazylazy. The apartment life, online
games, and watching TV lead to overweight. It became turns them into couch potatoes. Advertisements
which to achieve aimes use athe variety of foods, Chicletschocolate, and meals. Children are watching
the playsprograms wherethat they are exposed to temptation. They think just of earning money without
their plays are considering the influence of these programs on health and overweight of children.
When I compare my childhood with today’s children, I can recognize they don’t have any job to move
them. The Mobile phone is one of the means that they can set sit for hours and play. But in the passpast,
went going out of the door and playing with friends was mobility an activity for them.
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The best entertainment all of over the world is food and for children it’s it has become so interesting,
well for machining mechanical life this these days achieve toa variety of foodchow is so easy. Advertising
is targeting children with musical and colorful plays of fast food and …. How children have overweight in
as a result of overeating are is going be discussed.
Technology and modern life have been played the main role in changing habits especially that habit
the meal of children, in the family wherethat parents have to work for over long hours, children should
eat fast food, they learn in the first years of life tothat become crazylazy. The apartment life, online
games, and watching TV lead to overweight. It became turns them into couch potatoes. Advertisements
which to achieve aimes use athe variety of foods, Chicletschocolate, and meals. Children are watching
the playsprograms wherethat they are exposed to temptation. They think just of earning money without
their plays are considering the influence of these programs on health and overweight of children.
When I compare my childhood with today’s children, I can recognize they don’t have any job to move
them. The Mobile phone is one of the means that they can set sit for hours and play. But in the passpast,
went going out of the door and playing with friends was mobility an activity for them.
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Farkhondeh, Social Views of Teachers2020-10-02T13:08:07+00:002020-10-02T13:08:07+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/526-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-07-11/3743-farkhondeh-social-views-of-teachersHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the
classroom.
The important role of teachers is not limited to the educational issues but rather they can affect
and modify the children’s beliefs in a variety of ways. One of the most important contentions in
this regard is whether they should not express their political or social perspectives to their
students. I personally believe that every person with any inclination have has a right to exhibit
her viewpoints and teachers also are not no exception, however; they should be cautious about
imposing their opinions on the students. In the following paragraphs, I, as an opponent to this
topic, will outline my reasons.
Firstly, schools and specifically teachers should prepare the students for complicated
communities such as colleges, universities and occupational environments. The more students
facing face various perspectives at school, the more likely they can later tolerate the various
opinions, which are in contrast of to theirs. Forbearance, liberality and critical thinking ensue
from listening to diverse attitudes. Only when a child encounters different or even opposite
standpoints in the childhood, can she effectively adjust to discrepancies in the future. One of
the vital roles of teachers is to train the unprejudiced students and the major way toward this
point is the freedom of expression in schools.
Secondly, one of the most important factors in the process of identity formation is the
confrontation with divergent perspectives. Through the discrepancies, you can compare
different ideas, compare various values and finally adopt your position. Psychological studies
have shown that the adolescents whose relationships are limited to a few small number of
people, which possess the same viewpoints, in the long term have more difficulty to
communicate communicating effectively to with their co-workers and they will have identity
foreclosure status- accepting passively the values of their parents with high commitment
without exploring other ideas. On the other hand, empathy and openness are the results of
listening to diverse views and two factors, which guarantee the a successful relationship in
adulthood.
To sum up, schools are the miniature/microcosm of a big community, which is comprised of
mixed and dissimilar perspectives. The more the teachers present their perspective and allow
the students to express their opinions and teach them to accept these diversities, the more the
communities and societies accept other nations and notions, the less we will face war and
conflicts within and between countries and the more beautiful and peaceful world we will have.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the
classroom.
The important role of teachers is not limited to the educational issues but rather they can affect
and modify the children’s beliefs in a variety of ways. One of the most important contentions in
this regard is whether they should not express their political or social perspectives to their
students. I personally believe that every person with any inclination have has a right to exhibit
her viewpoints and teachers also are not no exception, however; they should be cautious about
imposing their opinions on the students. In the following paragraphs, I, as an opponent to this
topic, will outline my reasons.
Firstly, schools and specifically teachers should prepare the students for complicated
communities such as colleges, universities and occupational environments. The more students
facing face various perspectives at school, the more likely they can later tolerate the various
opinions, which are in contrast of to theirs. Forbearance, liberality and critical thinking ensue
from listening to diverse attitudes. Only when a child encounters different or even opposite
standpoints in the childhood, can she effectively adjust to discrepancies in the future. One of
the vital roles of teachers is to train the unprejudiced students and the major way toward this
point is the freedom of expression in schools.
Secondly, one of the most important factors in the process of identity formation is the
confrontation with divergent perspectives. Through the discrepancies, you can compare
different ideas, compare various values and finally adopt your position. Psychological studies
have shown that the adolescents whose relationships are limited to a few small number of
people, which possess the same viewpoints, in the long term have more difficulty to
communicate communicating effectively to with their co-workers and they will have identity
foreclosure status- accepting passively the values of their parents with high commitment
without exploring other ideas. On the other hand, empathy and openness are the results of
listening to diverse views and two factors, which guarantee the a successful relationship in
adulthood.
To sum up, schools are the miniature/microcosm of a big community, which is comprised of
mixed and dissimilar perspectives. The more the teachers present their perspective and allow
the students to express their opinions and teach them to accept these diversities, the more the
communities and societies accept other nations and notions, the less we will face war and
conflicts within and between countries and the more beautiful and peaceful world we will have.
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Milad banaei ,Fees for University2020-10-02T13:07:48+00:002020-10-02T13:07:48+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/526-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-07-11/3742-milad-banaei-fees-for-universityHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think
that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by
society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive the government
funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
In the developed country countries the attractive job opportunities provided for well-educated and
university graduated people lead to growing number of people who are choosing to study a
university course. However, there are always some fields which are more crucial and needed by the
society. Therefore, the government should take a comprehensive action in order to encourage
people to choose the more required courses among the vast accessible choices. There are some who
believe that the government should provide grants and scholarship for students who choose to
study the courses that are essential for the society. This essay deals with some opinions both for and
against this matter.
It is completely evidence evident that one of the vital and effective decisions during every person’s
life is choosing the major for university. There are some parameters which are mostly affect this
decision, for instance, the level of the income of the graduated graduatespeople on in that field, the
difficulties of studying and graduating on in the related discipline and so many factors that make this
decision one of the most demanding challenges for everyone. In addition, there are always some
areas which are needed by the society and having qualified specialists on in those areasthem is one
of the basic requirements of any governments in order to develop and advance goals. However,
although the governments could not directly affect the people’s decision about their major, they
could propel the public opinion to the more required fields which are more needed by the society by
providing grants and scholarships.
The issue is not only how proper such methods of providing university fees for studying the required
subjects are, but also what long-term effects this trend may have on the other fields of study and
other jobs. Opponents of this approach argue that this approach will lead to people's attention
orientate orientating to the fields that not only may they may not be interested in but also do not
match their abilities.
To conclude, although I see nothing wrong with considering some sort of facilitator for paying fees
for some fields of study, governments should pay special attention to the people who seek to study
in their favorite fields in which they are talented.
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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think
that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by
society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive the government
funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
In the developed country countries the attractive job opportunities provided for well-educated and
university graduated people lead to growing number of people who are choosing to study a
university course. However, there are always some fields which are more crucial and needed by the
society. Therefore, the government should take a comprehensive action in order to encourage
people to choose the more required courses among the vast accessible choices. There are some who
believe that the government should provide grants and scholarship for students who choose to
study the courses that are essential for the society. This essay deals with some opinions both for and
against this matter.
It is completely evidence evident that one of the vital and effective decisions during every person’s
life is choosing the major for university. There are some parameters which are mostly affect this
decision, for instance, the level of the income of the graduated graduatespeople on in that field, the
difficulties of studying and graduating on in the related discipline and so many factors that make this
decision one of the most demanding challenges for everyone. In addition, there are always some
areas which are needed by the society and having qualified specialists on in those areasthem is one
of the basic requirements of any governments in order to develop and advance goals. However,
although the governments could not directly affect the people’s decision about their major, they
could propel the public opinion to the more required fields which are more needed by the society by
providing grants and scholarships.
The issue is not only how proper such methods of providing university fees for studying the required
subjects are, but also what long-term effects this trend may have on the other fields of study and
other jobs. Opponents of this approach argue that this approach will lead to people's attention
orientate orientating to the fields that not only may they may not be interested in but also do not
match their abilities.
To conclude, although I see nothing wrong with considering some sort of facilitator for paying fees
for some fields of study, governments should pay special attention to the people who seek to study
in their favorite fields in which they are talented.
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Negar, Work2020-10-02T13:07:29+00:002020-10-02T13:07:29+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/526-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-07-11/3741-negar-workHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than
about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
Factors that affect people’s working efficiency vary from financial issues to their personal preferences.
While some believe that money is the ultimate motivation for one’s hardworkinghard work, I believe
that public recognition plays a considerable role in one’s hard trying/diligence because in that case they
will establish a better reputation for themselves, receive admiration and set a great example.
First of all, carving a niche in a working environment is something that needs to be taken care of, since
individuals should show their true potential to others, especially managers. The case is seen clearly for
those who work as an apprentice. Although working as a trainee does not bring any financial benefit,
many other advantages will come along. Hardworking, being disciplined and responsible are among the
factors that will impress everyone. In that case, if the person apply applies for this job as a formal
employee, everyone in the company will confirm his/her capabilities. Besides, the more a person makes
a name, the better working positions he/she will be offered. As a consequence, not only higher positions
will be available for them, but also they will establish a deep rapport with their colleagues.
Moreover, not all the motivations for one’s working is limited to money. Part of our human nature is to
show off in a way that we receive admiration from our surrounding area. That even explains all the
educational methods which are based on providing powerful incentives. The same goes for the working
environment. Receiving a compliment, not only can bring more opportunities, but also results in deep
happiness and more satisfaction. The examples are seen even in our daily lives, where one is playing an
instrument in the middle of the street without asking for any money. Receiving loud applause for their
sensational performance brings high joy and satisfaction, making them work harder to improve
themselves. As a result, one’s self-confidence will boost dramatically in the long run.
Finally, what guarantees a society’s survival comes from its citizen’s citizens’ alliance. The one clear
example is the presence of charities for various purposes. Many join such institutions to make their
contribution to those who are in desperate need. Volunteer members, not only do make a huge
difference, but also set a great example for other people who are impressed by their deeds. When/once
such people realize that their actions has have drawn public attention, they become more encouraged
to do their best, making a difference which will benefit the whole society. If only each member of
society exercised his/her responsibility toward others, the world would be a nicer place to live.
Therefore, the general standard of people’s life will increase.
To sum up, I believe that in general, people care about their public recognition more than earning
money. because in this way there will be strong relationships, higher confidence and better welfare.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than
about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
Factors that affect people’s working efficiency vary from financial issues to their personal preferences.
While some believe that money is the ultimate motivation for one’s hardworkinghard work, I believe
that public recognition plays a considerable role in one’s hard trying/diligence because in that case they
will establish a better reputation for themselves, receive admiration and set a great example.
First of all, carving a niche in a working environment is something that needs to be taken care of, since
individuals should show their true potential to others, especially managers. The case is seen clearly for
those who work as an apprentice. Although working as a trainee does not bring any financial benefit,
many other advantages will come along. Hardworking, being disciplined and responsible are among the
factors that will impress everyone. In that case, if the person apply applies for this job as a formal
employee, everyone in the company will confirm his/her capabilities. Besides, the more a person makes
a name, the better working positions he/she will be offered. As a consequence, not only higher positions
will be available for them, but also they will establish a deep rapport with their colleagues.
Moreover, not all the motivations for one’s working is limited to money. Part of our human nature is to
show off in a way that we receive admiration from our surrounding area. That even explains all the
educational methods which are based on providing powerful incentives. The same goes for the working
environment. Receiving a compliment, not only can bring more opportunities, but also results in deep
happiness and more satisfaction. The examples are seen even in our daily lives, where one is playing an
instrument in the middle of the street without asking for any money. Receiving loud applause for their
sensational performance brings high joy and satisfaction, making them work harder to improve
themselves. As a result, one’s self-confidence will boost dramatically in the long run.
Finally, what guarantees a society’s survival comes from its citizen’s citizens’ alliance. The one clear
example is the presence of charities for various purposes. Many join such institutions to make their
contribution to those who are in desperate need. Volunteer members, not only do make a huge
difference, but also set a great example for other people who are impressed by their deeds. When/once
such people realize that their actions has have drawn public attention, they become more encouraged
to do their best, making a difference which will benefit the whole society. If only each member of
society exercised his/her responsibility toward others, the world would be a nicer place to live.
Therefore, the general standard of people’s life will increase.
To sum up, I believe that in general, people care about their public recognition more than earning
money. because in this way there will be strong relationships, higher confidence and better welfare.
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Sahand Shirani, Visiting A New Place2020-10-02T13:07:16+00:002020-10-02T13:07:16+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/526-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-07-11/3740-sahand-shirani-visiting-a-new-placeHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Most people agree that it is important to spend our leisure time properly. There is
a great debate about as to how to spend our free time. Many people like to stay
indoors and relax whereas some may spend their time visiting other places. I
personally prefer to join a guided tour of popular attractions. There are several
noticeable reasons two of which I will aptly elucidate in the following paragraphs.
The most significant reason is that I want/wish to find out more and more about
my country. Tours usually visit beautiful landscapes or ancient places such as
buildings. Most of these placeswhich contain fascinating anecdotes and
interesting stories. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I visited
Naqshe Jahan Square in Isfahan, I learned a lot about past rulers of Iran like what
kind of weapons they had or what kind of plates they used to eat. If I had not
visited this venue/Naqshe Jahan, I would have missed such valuable information
about my country’s history which I really like to read about.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting my choice is that these tours
provide a great chance to meet new people. Visitors can socialize on the way to
their destination in the tour’s vehicle and on the site they are visiting. My friend’s
story is a compelling example of this. Three years ago, he joined a tour to travel to
Rasht, a city in the northern parts of Iran, and the tour’s vehicle was an old bus. It
takes so much time to get to Rasht by bus and it is a six-hour ride. So eventually,
he started talking to a girl who was sitting next to him. They got along really well
and stayed in touch after the tour. Now they are engaged and they are getting
married next month. This example demonstrates how these tours can help people
find new friends and partners.All in all, I personally prefer to go on a guided tour because I can obtain important
information about my country’s past. Furthermore, these tours are great
opportunities to meet new people and make new friends.
Questions:
1-It takes so much time to get to Rasht by bus and it is a six-hour. (Hyphen needed
or not???)
2- So eventually, he started talking to a girl who was sitting next to him. (Or the
girl sitting next to him???)
3- Furthermore, these tours are great opportunities to meet new people and
make new friends. (Or to meet new people and to make new friends?)
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Most people agree that it is important to spend our leisure time properly. There is
a great debate about as to how to spend our free time. Many people like to stay
indoors and relax whereas some may spend their time visiting other places. I
personally prefer to join a guided tour of popular attractions. There are several
noticeable reasons two of which I will aptly elucidate in the following paragraphs.
The most significant reason is that I want/wish to find out more and more about
my country. Tours usually visit beautiful landscapes or ancient places such as
buildings. Most of these placeswhich contain fascinating anecdotes and
interesting stories. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I visited
Naqshe Jahan Square in Isfahan, I learned a lot about past rulers of Iran like what
kind of weapons they had or what kind of plates they used to eat. If I had not
visited this venue/Naqshe Jahan, I would have missed such valuable information
about my country’s history which I really like to read about.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting my choice is that these tours
provide a great chance to meet new people. Visitors can socialize on the way to
their destination in the tour’s vehicle and on the site they are visiting. My friend’s
story is a compelling example of this. Three years ago, he joined a tour to travel to
Rasht, a city in the northern parts of Iran, and the tour’s vehicle was an old bus. It
takes so much time to get to Rasht by bus and it is a six-hour ride. So eventually,
he started talking to a girl who was sitting next to him. They got along really well
and stayed in touch after the tour. Now they are engaged and they are getting
married next month. This example demonstrates how these tours can help people
find new friends and partners.All in all, I personally prefer to go on a guided tour because I can obtain important
information about my country’s past. Furthermore, these tours are great
opportunities to meet new people and make new friends.
Questions:
1-It takes so much time to get to Rasht by bus and it is a six-hour. (Hyphen needed
or not???)
2- So eventually, he started talking to a girl who was sitting next to him. (Or the
girl sitting next to him???)
3- Furthermore, these tours are great opportunities to meet new people and
make new friends. (Or to meet new people and to make new friends?)
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Zakariaee, Money or Gift2020-10-02T13:07:01+00:002020-10-02T13:07:01+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/526-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-07-11/3739-zakariaee-money-or-giftHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Today more and more people give money rather than gifts in on specials occasions. Why do you think
it is? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, people have tendency to give money instead of other types of present. That is why they do
not know what kind of gifts is are suitable and let other sides to buy what they are need. Also I
personally approve of this method.
People select money as a gift because they cannot decide what kind of gifts are suitable. Individuals who
want to buy presents are faced with a broad range of items such as clothes, electronic gadgets, flowers
as well as books and they cannot decide which of them is better. Moreover, they have to spend time in
markets or online- shopping websites while they are busy and do not have enough time. That is why
people prefer to give money rather than buy special things.
Although sometimes individuals who are gifted cash think that it shows they are not as important to
spend time for selecting gifts which can impressive them, it lets them to buy what things they need. For
example, in my countries country it is common to gift children presents in the New Year, and most of
the children prefer to get money and collect all of them in order to buy what they need after the
holiday. Furthermore, some gifts are not useful for the recipientother sides. Everybody have has had
thean experience about getting a gift which wasare not useful for themselves.
In conclusion, there is an increasing increase in the number of people who have the tendency to gift
cash because they cannot decide which kind of presents are useful for themselves others and they do
not have not enough time in order to looking for gifts in markets. I think it is a positive development
which allows individuals to buy what they need.
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Today more and more people give money rather than gifts in on specials occasions. Why do you think
it is? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, people have tendency to give money instead of other types of present. That is why they do
not know what kind of gifts is are suitable and let other sides to buy what they are need. Also I
personally approve of this method.
People select money as a gift because they cannot decide what kind of gifts are suitable. Individuals who
want to buy presents are faced with a broad range of items such as clothes, electronic gadgets, flowers
as well as books and they cannot decide which of them is better. Moreover, they have to spend time in
markets or online- shopping websites while they are busy and do not have enough time. That is why
people prefer to give money rather than buy special things.
Although sometimes individuals who are gifted cash think that it shows they are not as important to
spend time for selecting gifts which can impressive them, it lets them to buy what things they need. For
example, in my countries country it is common to gift children presents in the New Year, and most of
the children prefer to get money and collect all of them in order to buy what they need after the
holiday. Furthermore, some gifts are not useful for the recipientother sides. Everybody have has had
thean experience about getting a gift which wasare not useful for themselves.
In conclusion, there is an increasing increase in the number of people who have the tendency to gift
cash because they cannot decide which kind of presents are useful for themselves others and they do
not have not enough time in order to looking for gifts in markets. I think it is a positive development
which allows individuals to buy what they need.
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