FridaysGMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم
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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this statement?
Investing in railways more than roads would result in considerable benefits and advantages not only for
the environment and ecosystem but also for the society and public health. In this regard, I believe that
extending the railways and train transport can be a better option than developing roads.
First of all, travelling by trains and subways instead of other vehicles results in a remarkable reduction in
greenhouse gases, which are produced by cars and busses. Hence, by extending the railways and
promoting the use of trains, particularly the modern once ones which use non-fossil energy, the rate of
using fossil fuel and air pollution will decline.
Secondly of all, travelling by trains is a great deal/by far safer. The rate of train 's accidents in the world
is extremely lower in comparison to that of other vehicles. Using GPS and other communications
equipment, along with moving on one-way-roads have has a significant impact on reducing crashes in
this type of transportations. Specifically in unreliable weather conditions such as rainy or snowy days.
Finally, modern trains move with high pace, about 300 kilometers per hour. As a result, travelling by
trains and subways is not only is safer, but also is faster. Moreover, there is no traffic congestion in
subways which leads to not wasting time. Instead, individuals can use their time by reading a book or
relaxing.
To sum up, according to the aforementioned discussion, I think due to the benefits of using trains rather
than the other vehicles, governments should expand the railways and train stations more than the roads
by allocating the proper budget.
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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this statement?
Investing in railways more than roads would result in considerable benefits and advantages not only for
the environment and ecosystem but also for the society and public health. In this regard, I believe that
extending the railways and train transport can be a better option than developing roads.
First of all, travelling by trains and subways instead of other vehicles results in a remarkable reduction in
greenhouse gases, which are produced by cars and busses. Hence, by extending the railways and
promoting the use of trains, particularly the modern once ones which use non-fossil energy, the rate of
using fossil fuel and air pollution will decline.
Secondly of all, travelling by trains is a great deal/by far safer. The rate of train 's accidents in the world
is extremely lower in comparison to that of other vehicles. Using GPS and other communications
equipment, along with moving on one-way-roads have has a significant impact on reducing crashes in
this type of transportations. Specifically in unreliable weather conditions such as rainy or snowy days.
Finally, modern trains move with high pace, about 300 kilometers per hour. As a result, travelling by
trains and subways is not only is safer, but also is faster. Moreover, there is no traffic congestion in
subways which leads to not wasting time. Instead, individuals can use their time by reading a book or
relaxing.
To sum up, according to the aforementioned discussion, I think due to the benefits of using trains rather
than the other vehicles, governments should expand the railways and train stations more than the roads
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Change is Always a Good Thing2020-12-26T21:06:35+00:002020-12-26T21:06:35+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/538-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-10-05/3806-change-is-always-a-good-thingHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change .Others , however
,think that change is always a good thing .
Over the past few decades,the changes in the life of human beings have dramatically increased .These
changes have been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs.Some people tend to to live
with routine habits and prevent avoid getting involving involved in new things/developments
.Meanwhile ,some people who are willing to experience the changes in life and implement them in their
lives to move forward into the modern life .
Firstly ,some people believe the change is not crucial in life as it causes lots of hardships and exclude
deprives them ofto have peace in their Lives .Indeed ,they are not willing to get into new things and step
outside from their comfort zone . People would like to be in on the safe side .it can not be denied that
they feel more comfortable with routing habits .For instance ,in my country the adults are not interested
into new devices .they prefer to be informed about news by TV than other devices like tables tablets
.The primitive methods would be more desirable for them.They claim implementing old methods makes
their lives safer.
On the other side,there are various aspects against these arguments .Some people are confidante
confident that changes are inevitable and help them to get talented more capable .Also ,they will be
able to have fantastic special/rare opportunities in different fields and make their lives much better .In
addition,it helps them to acquire significant knowledges in different areas .It is explicit obvious the
changes are the essential factor in people’s life .
To conclude, both views seems decent .However,I personally think the changes are vital in life and make
people’s lives more successful .They are able to move forward into a better future and have a better
perspectives of all matters around the world .
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change .Others , however
,think that change is always a good thing .
Over the past few decades,the changes in the life of human beings have dramatically increased .These
changes have been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs.Some people tend to to live
with routine habits and prevent avoid getting involving involved in new things/developments
.Meanwhile ,some people who are willing to experience the changes in life and implement them in their
lives to move forward into the modern life .
Firstly ,some people believe the change is not crucial in life as it causes lots of hardships and exclude
deprives them ofto have peace in their Lives .Indeed ,they are not willing to get into new things and step
outside from their comfort zone . People would like to be in on the safe side .it can not be denied that
they feel more comfortable with routing habits .For instance ,in my country the adults are not interested
into new devices .they prefer to be informed about news by TV than other devices like tables tablets
.The primitive methods would be more desirable for them.They claim implementing old methods makes
their lives safer.
On the other side,there are various aspects against these arguments .Some people are confidante
confident that changes are inevitable and help them to get talented more capable .Also ,they will be
able to have fantastic special/rare opportunities in different fields and make their lives much better .In
addition,it helps them to acquire significant knowledges in different areas .It is explicit obvious the
changes are the essential factor in people’s life .
To conclude, both views seems decent .However,I personally think the changes are vital in life and make
people’s lives more successful .They are able to move forward into a better future and have a better
perspectives of all matters around the world .
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Countries Are Becoming More and More Similar2020-12-26T21:06:26+00:002020-12-26T21:06:26+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/538-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-10-05/3805-countries-are-becoming-more-and-more-similarHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products
anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In our today’s contemporary world, thanks to the widespread cross-border trade in goods and services,
individuals are able to access whatever product they wish for from every corner around the globe, giving
rise to the reduction of cultural and social diversity. Even though beneficial implications of such a
phenomenon cannot be overlooked, from my perspective this is more of a detrimental issue rather than
an advantageous one.
First of all, globalization of international markets has imposed enormous effects on job prospects. As
opposed to some advocates who might insist that globalization this trend has led to increased
employment opportunities throughout the world, it evidently acts rather differently in that it could shift
production from high-cost countries to their lower-cost counterparts, thereby reducing occupational
positions in the former. Moreover, owing to the loss of interest in traditional and local merchandise, the
aforementioned phenomenon could create havoc in local markets and render their economies stagnant
as well. Besides, local products such as traditional medicines, clothes, and handicrafts are part and
parcel of a country’s culture and customs. With more and more people purchasing goods form
international corporations, the loss of countries’ distinct customs and traditions are, without a shadow
of a doubt, on the horizon. Last but not least, how would someone feel should wherever they travel look
exactly the same? There would be no unique souvenirs or ware to buy apart from those in your home
country.
The main conclusion to be drawn is that in this writer’s view the drawbacks of the mentioned issue
outweigh its merits, and that this uniformity can cause a serious harm to the(?) culture and the local
market of each country.
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products
anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In our today’s contemporary world, thanks to the widespread cross-border trade in goods and services,
individuals are able to access whatever product they wish for from every corner around the globe, giving
rise to the reduction of cultural and social diversity. Even though beneficial implications of such a
phenomenon cannot be overlooked, from my perspective this is more of a detrimental issue rather than
an advantageous one.
First of all, globalization of international markets has imposed enormous effects on job prospects. As
opposed to some advocates who might insist that globalization this trend has led to increased
employment opportunities throughout the world, it evidently acts rather differently in that it could shift
production from high-cost countries to their lower-cost counterparts, thereby reducing occupational
positions in the former. Moreover, owing to the loss of interest in traditional and local merchandise, the
aforementioned phenomenon could create havoc in local markets and render their economies stagnant
as well. Besides, local products such as traditional medicines, clothes, and handicrafts are part and
parcel of a country’s culture and customs. With more and more people purchasing goods form
international corporations, the loss of countries’ distinct customs and traditions are, without a shadow
of a doubt, on the horizon. Last but not least, how would someone feel should wherever they travel look
exactly the same? There would be no unique souvenirs or ware to buy apart from those in your home
country.
The main conclusion to be drawn is that in this writer’s view the drawbacks of the mentioned issue
outweigh its merits, and that this uniformity can cause a serious harm to the(?) culture and the local
market of each country.
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Farkhondeh, Play With Children2020-12-26T21:06:17+00:002020-12-26T21:06:17+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/538-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-10-05/3804-farkhondeh-play-with-childrenHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with
their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other
believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to
schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Nowadays, in this modern era, parents are preoccupied with innumerable responsibilities
influencing the amount of time they can allocate to their children. As a result, because they do
not have much time, it is inevitable to spend their time on higher important issues. In this
regard, some believe that it would be better if they devote their time to playing with their
children. Others, however, assert that they should help their kids in their academic matter if
they have any free time. Personally speaking, I agree with the former idea for some reasons.
Firstly, there are other people that can be a better resource for children in their school issues.
To explain more, all people have some duties and responsibilities in their life. Teachers are
more specialized than parents to help children in their schoolwork and try to solve their
academic obstacles. Although parents are able to guide their kids and address their scientific
issues, teachers, on the other hand, are not capable to of spending their time playing with
students. As a result, if parents do not allocate enough time for their children to have fun with
them, nobody can do this. As an example, when I was in elementary school, we had some
financial problems so that my parents had to work most of their time. Whenever my mother
found some free time, we went out together. In these situations, I had a chance to speak with
my mother and counsel consult with her about my frustrations. As a result, in spite of her
professional occupations, I had a chance to communicate with my hermother, which
strengthened our relationship.
Second, parents can boost their children’s skills through/during paly play more efficiently. To
clarify, as children represent their emotional needs and problems when they are playing,
parents have an appropriate opportunity to address such desires. In addition, they can teach
numerous abilities to their kids by playing. For example, when children lose a game, naturally
they should be upset. However, sometimes some kids suppress their emotions instead of share
sharing them with others. In this situation, children have a chance to learn how they can
effectively regulate their negative emotions if their parents allocate time to them to play
together.
In sum, I believe if parents are too busy and overwhelmed so that they should choose between
having fun and practicing school matters with their kids, it would be more beneficial to play
with themtheir children. They can educate their kids how to manage their feelings effectively.
Meanwhile, they can spend their time on speaking about their children’s problems in their life.
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Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with
their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other
believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to
schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Nowadays, in this modern era, parents are preoccupied with innumerable responsibilities
influencing the amount of time they can allocate to their children. As a result, because they do
not have much time, it is inevitable to spend their time on higher important issues. In this
regard, some believe that it would be better if they devote their time to playing with their
children. Others, however, assert that they should help their kids in their academic matter if
they have any free time. Personally speaking, I agree with the former idea for some reasons.
Firstly, there are other people that can be a better resource for children in their school issues.
To explain more, all people have some duties and responsibilities in their life. Teachers are
more specialized than parents to help children in their schoolwork and try to solve their
academic obstacles. Although parents are able to guide their kids and address their scientific
issues, teachers, on the other hand, are not capable to of spending their time playing with
students. As a result, if parents do not allocate enough time for their children to have fun with
them, nobody can do this. As an example, when I was in elementary school, we had some
financial problems so that my parents had to work most of their time. Whenever my mother
found some free time, we went out together. In these situations, I had a chance to speak with
my mother and counsel consult with her about my frustrations. As a result, in spite of her
professional occupations, I had a chance to communicate with my hermother, which
strengthened our relationship.
Second, parents can boost their children’s skills through/during paly play more efficiently. To
clarify, as children represent their emotional needs and problems when they are playing,
parents have an appropriate opportunity to address such desires. In addition, they can teach
numerous abilities to their kids by playing. For example, when children lose a game, naturally
they should be upset. However, sometimes some kids suppress their emotions instead of share
sharing them with others. In this situation, children have a chance to learn how they can
effectively regulate their negative emotions if their parents allocate time to them to play
together.
In sum, I believe if parents are too busy and overwhelmed so that they should choose between
having fun and practicing school matters with their kids, it would be more beneficial to play
with themtheir children. They can educate their kids how to manage their feelings effectively.
Meanwhile, they can spend their time on speaking about their children’s problems in their life.
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Milad Banaei, New Stories On TV and Newspapers2020-12-26T21:06:07+00:002020-12-26T21:06:07+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/538-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-10-05/3803-milad-banaei-new-stories-on-tv-and-newspapersHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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New stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these
pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
During the last few decades, the methods of showing and presenting stories and information have faced with
significant changes. Nowadays, modern technologies have brought about certain benefits in many fields. Therefore,
TV programs and newspapers are not far from these improvements. That is to say, nowadays TV programs and
newspapers are more covered by flashy pictures compared to the past. There are many who believed that this new
trend has a rewarding impact on capturing the viewers’ attentions.
It is notable that the lack of sufficient technology and poor-quality equipment in the past was the major reason
for/behind using fewer pictures in TV programs and newspapers. Having said that, nowadays due to the
comprehensive improvements of modern technology and new devices which are available for everyone, we can see
that TV programs and newspapers are fully covered by pictures. For instance, TV producers now have great access to
various professional devices such as high-tech digital cameras, powerful computers, and a variety of designing
software which would help them to produce more picturesque programs. Additionally, the new generation of
industrial printers contributes leads the press to add more colorful pictures in their pages rather than using simple
texts.
This approach has become really popular not only due to its possibility of new technology but also due to its decent
feedback from the viewers. It seems that the number of viewers and spectators of TV programs and newspapers
which were used more pictures in their stories and pages has increased considerably. Consequently, the producers
had no other choice in order to become prosperous in this close competition to capture their share from the market.
Meanwhile, there are many who are opposed to this trend and argue that this approach has weakened the reading
habits among ordinary people.
In conclusion, although there is a significant tendency to watching images rather than reading texts, the important
role of texts and words in conveying deeper concepts should not be disregarded. Therefore, we have to take the
balanced approach of collecting information from the media, not only by the images but also by words.
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New stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these
pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
During the last few decades, the methods of showing and presenting stories and information have faced with
significant changes. Nowadays, modern technologies have brought about certain benefits in many fields. Therefore,
TV programs and newspapers are not far from these improvements. That is to say, nowadays TV programs and
newspapers are more covered by flashy pictures compared to the past. There are many who believed that this new
trend has a rewarding impact on capturing the viewers’ attentions.
It is notable that the lack of sufficient technology and poor-quality equipment in the past was the major reason
for/behind using fewer pictures in TV programs and newspapers. Having said that, nowadays due to the
comprehensive improvements of modern technology and new devices which are available for everyone, we can see
that TV programs and newspapers are fully covered by pictures. For instance, TV producers now have great access to
various professional devices such as high-tech digital cameras, powerful computers, and a variety of designing
software which would help them to produce more picturesque programs. Additionally, the new generation of
industrial printers contributes leads the press to add more colorful pictures in their pages rather than using simple
texts.
This approach has become really popular not only due to its possibility of new technology but also due to its decent
feedback from the viewers. It seems that the number of viewers and spectators of TV programs and newspapers
which were used more pictures in their stories and pages has increased considerably. Consequently, the producers
had no other choice in order to become prosperous in this close competition to capture their share from the market.
Meanwhile, there are many who are opposed to this trend and argue that this approach has weakened the reading
habits among ordinary people.
In conclusion, although there is a significant tendency to watching images rather than reading texts, the important
role of texts and words in conveying deeper concepts should not be disregarded. Therefore, we have to take the
balanced approach of collecting information from the media, not only by the images but also by words.
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Punishment in Children2020-12-26T21:05:58+00:002020-12-26T21:05:58+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/538-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-10-05/3802-punishment-in-childrenHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Melika Jameie
Some people consider punishment an effective method for upbringing of well-behaved children
as opposed to some other ones who strongly believe there is no use punishing young children
whatsoever.
The former group, might have faith in the saying which goes “spare the rod, spoil the child.”
The latter, on the contrary, discusses there are ways more reasonable and beneficial
alternatives to bringing up a child who is confident, courteous and successful. To my mind,
moderation is usually the best course to take.
Believing in imposing out punishments, the first category draw attention to this fact that
children should receive punishment for their misbehavior and disobedience lest they grow up
tactless and unsuccessful. To put it simply, imagine a situation when a child should make a
decision between hanging out with their his/her friends and studying for their upcoming exams.
The responsibility lies with both parents and teachers as to how children would behave in such
important conditions. Nevertheless, it is worth stating the fact that inflicting corporal
punishment is not an iota of an accepted strategy.
When it comes to the alternative strategies, it is worth mentioning although there is a wildly
held belief that there is not merely one effective approach to raise raising a child, evidence
based research suggests some healthy discipline strategies to parents such as giving
consequences and calling a time out.
To bring the first approach to light, consider when your child resists collecting their toys from
the floor and you tell them if they don’t listen to your commands, you will take their toys away
for the rest of the day. This situation was an example of giving consequences to children.
Another strategy is calling a time-out, that is to say, when children disobey rules they should go
to a time-out and come back when they feel ready and in control.
However, it is important to memorize that not only could harsh and strict punishments render
the child unconfident and much too wary, but also it prevents the child from experiencing new
activities and situations.
The main conclusion to be drawn from this discussion is that it is incumbent upon parents to
raise well-bred children, hence the importance of learning positive discipline strategies and
establishing a fine balance between punishing and rewarding our children.
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Melika Jameie
Some people consider punishment an effective method for upbringing of well-behaved children
as opposed to some other ones who strongly believe there is no use punishing young children
whatsoever.
The former group, might have faith in the saying which goes “spare the rod, spoil the child.”
The latter, on the contrary, discusses there are ways more reasonable and beneficial
alternatives to bringing up a child who is confident, courteous and successful. To my mind,
moderation is usually the best course to take.
Believing in imposing out punishments, the first category draw attention to this fact that
children should receive punishment for their misbehavior and disobedience lest they grow up
tactless and unsuccessful. To put it simply, imagine a situation when a child should make a
decision between hanging out with their his/her friends and studying for their upcoming exams.
The responsibility lies with both parents and teachers as to how children would behave in such
important conditions. Nevertheless, it is worth stating the fact that inflicting corporal
punishment is not an iota of an accepted strategy.
When it comes to the alternative strategies, it is worth mentioning although there is a wildly
held belief that there is not merely one effective approach to raise raising a child, evidence
based research suggests some healthy discipline strategies to parents such as giving
consequences and calling a time out.
To bring the first approach to light, consider when your child resists collecting their toys from
the floor and you tell them if they don’t listen to your commands, you will take their toys away
for the rest of the day. This situation was an example of giving consequences to children.
Another strategy is calling a time-out, that is to say, when children disobey rules they should go
to a time-out and come back when they feel ready and in control.
However, it is important to memorize that not only could harsh and strict punishments render
the child unconfident and much too wary, but also it prevents the child from experiencing new
activities and situations.
The main conclusion to be drawn from this discussion is that it is incumbent upon parents to
raise well-bred children, hence the importance of learning positive discipline strategies and
establishing a fine balance between punishing and rewarding our children.
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Re-Offender, Shaghayegh2020-12-26T21:05:48+00:002020-12-26T21:05:48+00:00http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/538-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-10-05/3801-re-offender-shaghayeghHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this
happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
These days the number of people committing crimes has been increasing, particularly those who
had been in jail. Many reasons can be considered why they tend to carry out itthem, but it is more
important to know how to address such problems.
There are several main reasons why offenders commit more serious or violent crimes. Foremost, recent
surveys have been carried out to determine that thousands of re-offenders who were young with
no criminal background but they were charged to prison where considerable dangerous criminals live
there minor offenses; as a result, new ones acquire a broad range of criminal activities that
means they have adequate time to exchange their information about the methods have already been
used. Furthermore, they are in an environment that requires pushes them to be able
to protect themselves in order to survive; consequently, they become more violent
and dangerous. Secondarily, a growing number of offenders come from poor background families where
they are mostly uneducated and unskilled children; hence, they tend to commit crimes to live.
To solve this phenomenon the criminal justice system should focus on rehabilitation rather
than punishment. A straightforward solution would be to separate inexperienced offenders from
those having serval committingpriors. This trend might avoid prevent the various methods they carry ou
t crimes. In addition, governments could provide a proper situation in which criminals obtain suitable
acquisitions of skills in order to find an occupation. Moreover,the executive officials/authority
figures can encourage offenders to read books and take notes
to reduce the amount of punishment since reading is regarded as a way in which we can shift attitude.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that re-offenders are one of the semost severe verest problems that many
countries face. However, there are various measures that can be taken to mitigate this issue.
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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this
happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
These days the number of people committing crimes has been increasing, particularly those who
had been in jail. Many reasons can be considered why they tend to carry out itthem, but it is more
important to know how to address such problems.
There are several main reasons why offenders commit more serious or violent crimes. Foremost, recent
surveys have been carried out to determine that thousands of re-offenders who were young with
no criminal background but they were charged to prison where considerable dangerous criminals live
there minor offenses; as a result, new ones acquire a broad range of criminal activities that
means they have adequate time to exchange their information about the methods have already been
used. Furthermore, they are in an environment that requires pushes them to be able
to protect themselves in order to survive; consequently, they become more violent
and dangerous. Secondarily, a growing number of offenders come from poor background families where
they are mostly uneducated and unskilled children; hence, they tend to commit crimes to live.
To solve this phenomenon the criminal justice system should focus on rehabilitation rather
than punishment. A straightforward solution would be to separate inexperienced offenders from
those having serval committingpriors. This trend might avoid prevent the various methods they carry ou
t crimes. In addition, governments could provide a proper situation in which criminals obtain suitable
acquisitions of skills in order to find an occupation. Moreover,the executive officials/authority
figures can encourage offenders to read books and take notes
to reduce the amount of punishment since reading is regarded as a way in which we can shift attitude.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that re-offenders are one of the semost severe verest problems that many
countries face. However, there are various measures that can be taken to mitigate this issue.
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