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Writing an article about the origin of hydrothermal fluid of zeolitic minerals by stable isotopes (H, O) Dear Sir or Madam I recently read that you wrote the an article about stable isotopes (H, O) in order to discovering the origin of hydrothermal fluids of zeolites in Japan. I have a master of science and graduated from university of Tehran. I worked on green tuffs of middle Eocene age in Hesarbon area (east of central Alborz). I did chemical analysis (XRD, XRF, and ICP). There are major and secondary minerals in the groundmass of the rocks, whereas. Whereas extensive tectonic activities have created a variety of structural features including numerous folds and faults and therefore, have caused the green tuffs to be crushed and convert to breccia tuffs in many parts. Veins and cavities are filled by considerable amounts of zeolitic minerals including heulandite group, clinoptilolite and natrolite group with calcite and secondary quartz that show they are precipitated by hydrothermal fluids with neutral pH to acidic. The existence of secondary minerals in the groundmass demonstrates that these rocks have undergone some degree of low grade metamorphism. I separated/isolated zeolitic minerals from calcite and secondary quartz, then I sent them to Actlab laboratory for stable isotopes analysis (H, O). The results of the stable isotopes analysis show the origin of the hydrothermal fluids is meteoric water and saline shallow marine water. I have a three articles, two of which. Two of them are for conference and another the other is has been published in university of Esfahan (journal of petrology). I make a decisionintend to write an article about this subject. It would be helpful if you could guide me about writing an article. Best sincerely Shiva Bahrami

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You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter  Describe the problem with the equipment  Explain what happened when you phoned the shop  Say what would like the manager to do Dear Sir/Madam: I bought a dish washer from your company last month, but since the very first second that your colleague delivered it to our house, it has not worked properly. Actually, when we turn it on, it even does not start to wash. Unfortunately, I have called many times your support team many times. The lines were always busy, and at last that when I succeeded to talkin talking to your technician and described him my problem, he told me that he will would call me back, but It has been 2 two weeks and I still did have not received any call from your company. Which made me really disappointed. To solve this problem I would really appreciate a refund of my money, if you need any extra information, I have enclosed attached all the purchase documents to this email. I am so sorry for you that you have lost a big fan of your company, and now I look forward to your quick reply. I wish to hear from you before seeking help from consumer protection agency. You can contact me by the phone number which has been written in the receipt. Regards Mahta.Tk

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? In today's world we have the possibility of enjoying a variety of musical styles. It is obvious that the presence of music in people's life is an important factor for a range of reasons. Personally, I feel that all kinds of music are beneficial, the traditional one is by far more valuable, though. Listening to music has positively psychological impacts on humans' brain. Firstly, according to some scientific researches, exposure to cheerful tunes, when people feel sad or depressed in their lives, could be effective in helping them release their stress or tension, inviting them to be relaxed, not to mention that recently in many countries music therapy has been using being used as a treatment not only for mental problems but also for physical disorders. Furthermore, it is proved that music broadens the humans' mind, thereby absorbing new information and learning some sciences sooner than usual. For instance, the children growing up in the an environment in which music tracks are being frequently played, are more likely to be highly intelligent, so they tend to learn mathematics, in particular, more easily in comparison with other individuals rearing reared outsideout of that context. Similarly, having background music while people study, would increase the level of their concentration in the learning process. Regarding whether to the importance between international orand traditional music is more important which is that we a commonly encountered question today, based on the merits of music as a whole concept, it seems that both types of music would be beneficial for human beings, although keeping the traditional style alive, namely folkloric songs, which are our musical heritage, appears to be vital, for these pieces of music convey cultural aspects of one nation or a tribe. That means they are inspired by previous generations' lifestyles, joys and sorrows, which have been passed on posterity over time. Therefore, we can protect our cultural values and identity through listening to folkloric songs . In conclusion, I would argue that not only does music play a key role in our life since music meets our spiritual needs, but also it entails many advantages for our daily activities as mentioned above. Although these days we have the chance of listening to other nations' music styles, which is nice/pleasant in turn, in my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international type.Arefeh

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Elham Ekrami, [08.01.18 19:07] Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is essential for each society to teach children how to be good citizens. Moreover, it is vital for possitive outlook of each powerful society to invest in teaching moral values to the next generation . However, it is a debate among many who should take this task on shoulders, Schools or parents. Both sides of this debate will be analysed in this essay before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. On the one hand, parents are the first members of society that children interact with them. Even children often mimic their parents' behaviour. Although parents sometimes don't tend to teach children their manner, they learn quickly because they are in their early ages. Therefore, teaching being how to be a good member of society, first of all, is a must at home. On the other hand, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society at school. Also children think school is a place that where they should be learnt taught every important subject. Furthermore, children are more serious about their school subjects. Then they should have textbooks about moral values besides mathematics, biology and physics. In addition, teachers should value good manners and behaviours more than getting good marks. This way, teachers indirectly make students aware of how good manners and moral features are more valuable. It is obvious that such actions happen only at schools. To conclude, I think both parents and schools are responsible equally to teach children to be good members of any community. It is a matter that should not be ignored by anyone. Also governments need to take more actions to train the next generation of citizens. Elham Ekrami, [09.01.18 07:31] Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Nowadays, the co-educational system is considered as the best option in many countries. Some believe that it is better if young females and males study separately, while others mention that studying together can be more beneficial. I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.(they had better study separately) Some experts believe that single-sex schools are more efficient because this environment reduces distractions. Moreover, students face less gender prejudice in this model of schools. For example, a girl maybe like a subject that teachers think it is the natural domain for boys. Therefore, she thinks who that she does not possess/have has not enough talent to follow her interest. On the other hand, some educationalists believe mixed schools give more opportunities to children for learning. First of all, students can learn how to interact with the opposite gender and this matter leadsthem to work and live together easier/more easily in the near future of their lifetime. This type of schools also has have advantages for governments. For example, they can fill seats in female schools with males. In other words, authorities don't need to build a new school and pay more teachers' salary because children just should be separated from the opposite gender. As a result, the education budget is significantly reduceds obviously. Personally, I think both models of schools have their benefits. I myself prefer single-sex schools because I at least experienced that and I'm satisfied with the outcome. To some extent, it is due to personal taste and it is up to the parents and children which model is preferable.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crimes is to apply longer prison sentence, other people think that there are better methods of doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion Going to prison is one of the most famous common ways to punish felons. Although it is an extremely easy way to discipline villains, it is not the best way to change them into a better person, hence uselessness of jails. In my opinion, there are way/far better approaches to bring lawbreakers to book. The first disadvantage of jails incarceration is that it is just a kind of punishment and it does not help criminals to evolve. When we throw a felon into a prison, we give him a chance to meet other criminals and in some cases when a criminal goes inside a lock-up, he turns into an even a more dangerous person. So, we should be concerned with a new person that he has become who a person become after/once they come out of there. The other drawback of prisons is that it they cost a lot for the governments. We are feeding and providing many free facilities utilities such as water and electricity for these lawbreakers and all these facilities will be costly for us. The administration is responsible to pay them. The longer criminals stay in jail, the more budget is spending spent on them. Therefore, we cannot afford the cost of these places anymore. The best replacement for lock-ups might be forcing criminals into doing public community services. Not only does it aids criminals in going inside society and meeting ethical people and following their examplemake idol from them, but also this solution would assist our city in reducing some costs like hiring some employees to do these kinds of activities. In conclusion, putting people into prisons is not a very useful solution to help the rate of criminals decrease. Lock-ups do not guarantee that turning criminals into unchangeable law-abiding/ lawful citizens and they cost us too much. Besides, there are better approaches like making felons do some public services.

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Whether to agree or disagree with the given statement is quiet hard. In my opinion, it depends on the situation and the way it is done. Today, people who are spending most of their time and energy with children, including teachers and parents are struggling with finding the best approach of to educating children. There are numerous methods around the world to train and teach children. If they do something wrong there are several ways to guide them onto the right path. For instance, using the talking method to enlighten them. This would be a good chance to explain to them and make them understand/realize the reasons,. another way is to encounter/behave/to deal toward with them as a mature person. This would help them feel special, because you see them as a grown-up person, so they act like one, and the last resort is to punish them. In fact punishment has always been an inevitable method to for people who are dealing with children. If we intend to use this method, it is better not to be corporal, of course this method is out of the question and should be totally banned at/from schools. A variety of techniques can be used to punish children in order to tell them that they are at fault or they are hurting people's feeling by their manners/behavior. For example we can discipline a child who is not studying, with video game's sanctions or treating them the same way they have treated us to show them how it feels.(give them a taste of their own medince) The attitude of using physical punishment might teach the children, that bullying others is fine as long as you are stronger and in the lead. This way they might get develop lack of self-confidence, and in some cases they might turn into shy, fearsome and isolated person/people, so it is important to mull over mull-over the methods of punishment and to assess all of the aspects before using them on the child. In conclusion, I would say it is better to be a friend to your child rather than being a strict parent/teacher, because children are our greatest treasure in life and how we are treating them would affect the whole society. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people? Throughout history, regardless of nation and location, talking about a wise one brings to mind an old one who is with wisdom and full of peace and calm, but undoubtedly today, this role is not in the elders' hands anymore. Also the world is impressed by today's young ones' abilities and knowledge in contrast to their young counterparts. As one fact, nowadays, technologies have been advanced rapidly, and by this development people's lives have been facilitated. For instance, on the one hand, with using the internet, many different experiences are accessible for young people so they do not need to go around the planet to visit, for example, a scientist to benefit from him or her. This facility encourages many people to follow education, thus youths have a big contribution to improvinge the level of society's knowledge. On the other hand, old people's experiences become obsolete quickly, and they are not useful any longer. Unfortunately, that becoming less valuable grandparents' experience is becoming less valuable experiments causes to elimination of trust to in their advices. Not only does this make create a the generation gap, but also this leads to old ones being to be forgotten. Furthermore, young ones by getting involved in technologies too much did do not learn how to communicate with and respect the elders. Finally, ignoring a generation can head lead a society to be destroyeddestruction, so preserving society from taking place such a disaster is of critical importance, and thiswhich can happen by respecting previous generations who based this modern world as legacy for their future generation.

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In countemporary days, there are a lot of peers people suffering from poverty which is pradoxical with authorities' speeches who claim that there is relatively minuscule precentage percentage of citizens who are living in slum houses. To be honest, some of these adverse conditions have been brought about by states. There are enormous factors causing poverty some of which that which some of them are unknown. However, scoisalist socialist experts' researches had have cited many of these some of which I will mention some of them in the following paragraphs. One of the major reasons for poverty might be lack of education. As It is vivid, employers mainly prefer to hire well-educated individuals who studied a major associated with the filed of their career. Since having an occupation will be a essensial economic aid, the employees could live in sufficient decent property with a proper wealfare. The next item for making people poor would be natural disasters. Earthquacks, volcanic eruptions, flood etc are some cases in point. When this incidents happen, this would make people lose their accommodation and assets. In these critical and insurmountable situations, it is most of the time a large quantity of the masses are not able to make up for/compensate this up and it would be impossible to renovate their property or buy or rent a new one. To address poverty problems, promoting in the educational system might be a solution. These days going to university or even college and schools is not affordable for many pupils. If this becomes free or less costlypaid, a lot of students may grow educationally and actualize their potential enhance in their latent jobs. Also I has been advised to the governments to widen job opportunies for numbers those who have not had adequate education degree or job expreince who are have been failed to be taken into acount. These Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some the reasons for world poverty? What can we do to help the poor?strategies could help either poor communities and the government to overcome poverty. All in all, poverty may be caused by numrous resons which some of which have been the mentioned in this essay. Furthermore, factors like wars, sangtions etc could lead people to this catastrofic phenomenon. Although it is not straightforward for executives and peers, It can be solved with intensive efforts implemented implimented by authorities, and by the same token, done by people themselves.