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Ali Khaleghifard, Agricultural Advancements and Hungriness

2018-10-30T05:05:21+00:00

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Recently, with the rise in farming improvements, inadequate food has not been a concern in many countries. In others, however, many families have been facing undernourishment owing to depriving from those advancements. Unfortunately, spreading agricultural developments has not happened accurately on the earth which has been cited as the main culprit of lack of food in some regions, hence undernourished phenomenon. Whereas cultivating advancements in developed countries have increased markedly and their people have been benefiting from them, rarely have those in other countries happened, so they have been denied required meals and subsequently human beings have been suffering from malnutrition. Therefore, it is up to developed countries to help others, especially poor ones, by investments in their agricultural industry and teaching them how to have more beneficial farming. Another factor that has been quoted as the cause of obviously unfair hungriness in some quarters in the world is that although there are many improvements in farming, they are not seemingly adequate in comparison with population growth. Overpopulation and also increasing life expectancy cause food shortage. Thus, there is an undeniable need for exerting additional efforts at this area to fulfil further developments and thereafter it (advancements) can pave the way for providing more and more people with proper dishes, thereby combating malnourishment. Consequently, whilst, in some countries, the hunger problem has been solved by virtue of some improvements in cultivation, in some locations, locals have been dealing with starving. Therefore, only when developed countries collaborate with poor ones, is addressing this worryingly lethal hardship attainable.

Amir G, The Role of the Youth

2018-10-30T05:05:06+00:00

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The role of the youth in a modern society is not something negligible, and by passage of time this role is becoming more and more impressive that in some parts of life only the youth can be involved. The reason and consequences of this change will be discussed in the following lines. Over the last five decades our world has changed dramatically, and with the advent of recent changes in science and technology the relation between people has also changed in myriad of ways that the youth have a pivotal role compared with their previous counterparts. Perhaps one of the main reasons of this dominant role is the power of technology, and its followers who are mostly the youth. In fact, not only is the youth generation more competent using the new solutions we use in everyday life, but they are also pioneers in these fields. Unable to work with new facilities, most of senior citizens are partially depend on the youth. That in this day and age most the youngsters are not dependent to their parents, and by and large to previous generation, rarely respect older members of their society. This respect, however, can lead families to weaken their emotional bonds which are one of the major problems people in all walks of life are dealing with in this day and age. Rarely can we see a prosperously new business managed by an individual over 55. To sum up, I hold the idea that although this change in the youth’ influence made us face with catastrophic results. Entering a new era demands passage of this undesirable period. Only after we pass through such a terrible path, and experience its deleterious impacts can we expect finding its deficiency to build a better future for humanity.

Azadeh, Foreign Language

2018-10-30T05:04:53+00:00

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. There are widely different views about the main reasons of learning a new language. While some believe that it is just applicable to travels even for working or relaxation, I personally content that this positive trend can be beneficial in more situations and needs. On the one hand, it is undeniable that knowing the language of a host country is a necessary element for communicating with its people either to accommodate in settle or talk with foreign colleagues in a new workforce. Moreover, if you are familiar with the new country’s language, It should be more convenient to order your demands in malls or restaurants than count on a translator or communicate with gestures. Therefore, when you can almost speak their language, you would feel less alienated with people in a new place. On the other hand, in my belief by picking up new languages, there are some additional merits that we can fully take advantage from. Speaking various languages, people are likely able to reach mutual understanding among different nationalities. which would mean that since language is an integral part of every culture, this positive trend virtually tend to unite people from all nations. Hence we would live in a peaceful and friendly world. Finally, in global trade, like importing and exporting goods, acquaintance with other languages would soften the hardship of making relationships and would potentially expand transactions between business societies. In conclusion, I think it is an essential necessity for every individual to learn useful languages especially international ones. As the borders between countries become increasingly blurred, it demands out further consideration.

Beheshteh, Children and Work

2018-10-30T05:04:40+00:00

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility While some may completely disagree children’s paid jobs, others, myself included, may consider it of value in their development and future life. Therefore, that children’s working is completely wrong cannot be totally claimed. Even it might not be right in all circumstances, though. Since the entrance of children in the professional world is inevitable, how beneficial would it be if they could acquire enough of knowledge and experience as well as peripheral responsibility is of importance. Consequently, parents and teachers might persuade children to undertake duties in some part-time jobs or other useful tasks as to learning benefits. As a result, many of a child would become able to place value on the earned money in comparison with the pocket money. Moreover, they are to learn that working means being no more depended on parents and honing the problem solving skills, hence becoming well prepared for a profession. Nevertheless, there still might be a vision of misusing, since some employers prefer hiring children instead, to pay less. In addition, some arduous and repetitive tasks such as working in a factory producing line are better to be discouraged because not only does not it teach them anything new, but it also is a waste of time. In such cases, the jobs are not valuable anymore, but rather some sort of exploitation that I entirely go against it. As far as it concerns the purpose of learning and developing skills, it would be beneficial for children to work, from my point of view. While turning into other purposes such as financial exploitations, we should be fully aware of the type of life perspective which we are characterizing for our children.

Mahta, Women in Society and Child's Crimes

2018-10-30T05:04:26+00:00

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Previously, women used to be housewives after marriage, especially when they gave birth to a child. It was their main responsibility to foster the child. But this trend has changed in the past two decades. Participating in different spheres of society, women have entered to the worldwide job market stronger than ever, which brought a controversial discussion up that the mother’s longhours absences from home can cause many harmful consequences for children’s upbringing. In contrast, I am of the opinion that not only do working mothers not affect their offspring negatively, but also they can teach them many life lessons more effectively. In this essay I will elaborate this statement more clearly. On the one hand, some people believe that mothers have a pivotal role in their child’s future characteristics. To make my point crystal clear, they consider father’s role to be a breadwinner. Therefore, all other nurturing matters seem to be on the mother, which is why they think when this mother leaves home for following her ambitious career and social position, she is obviously neglecting her children’s training. From this vantage point, not having an adult supervision on their activities, children, more specifically in their adolescence, are more prone to commit illegal activities, Whilst I think in today’s world both parents must pay serious attention to their children’s nurture steps. In other words, they can both have a job and share the parenthood’s duties at the same time. On the other hand, statistics have shown that educated mothers, who have high positions in different businesses, are considerably more capable of negotiating with their children about their daily issues, as they are in contact with most of these problems themselves. To exemplify, an unemployed mother can barely give a solution to her child who is confronted with a problem at school with his teammates. Besides, there are many jobs outside whose requirements are more fitted to women, two of which are teaching inkindergartens or working in nursing homes, hence the importance of women in society. At last, although the vital role of mothers in children’s rearing is undeniable, were I to choose I would definitely vote for a high-position modern mother rather than an unexperienced homemaker one. However, there must be always a balance between their motherhood’s duties and their professional jobs.

Mosadegh, Crime Increasing

2018-10-30T05:04:12+00:00

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Nowadays, with growing population around the world, all countries will face enormous variety of issues than they had in the past. Offence or crime is one of the important issues which many countries must cope. It is inevitable that the possibility of felonious actions or matters will be increasing by soaring in population of human beings according to simple calculations. In this essay major reasons and results and how to cope with them will be discussed. It is obviously clear that every small and huge communities challenge their minor or major crimes. For instance, in a small community like school, there are some bully students who easily contravene school codes and obviously this is a responsibility for schoolmaster to train them cautiously. Also in a big community such as city or country which is seen lots of lawlessness among people. A primary reason due to people become criminal is poverty. Poor people who cannot afford their basic needs may choose some easiest approaches to earn money which are not legal. Another reason for people committing a crime is an absence of moral obligations and values. Although the lack of moral values cause the number of criminals rise, schools and governments can address that with educating people ethic and imposing strict laws, respectively. In the other hands, government can play considerable role in this matters, by investing money to the large industries and paving the way for people to have proper career. In conclusion, I must say that economic issues are one of the most strategic matters of each country as some countries which have been imposed economic sanctions, have enormous issues in their preparation of their essential needs like Iran. Not only are governments and schools responsible for eradicating crime from society, but also there is a necessity to public effort for resolving these difficulties and making their city atmosphere peaceful.

Parinaz Kajabadi, Country Develops its Technology

2018-10-30T05:03:58+00:00

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- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. - To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Development of technology in a country and its effect on traditional skills is controversy. I broadly subscribe to this opinion that technology development in a country can affect the traditional skills in case local people tend to substitute them with new skills. First, every country has its own traditions and cultures regardless of highly developed technology being used in daily life. It is true that emerge of new technology and new inventions may contribute to practicality and even existence of traditional skills. In an instance, new sewing machines, which developed every day, simply substitute the hand-made sewing; however, the symbolic, traditional clothes that are referred to a specific culture are not vanished due to development of technology in sewing. In addition, local people play critical role in keeping their culture and traditional skills alive. Local people can deliberately decide to benefit from the new technology to spread their culture and their customs more. For example, in spite of highly developed technology in a country like India, Sari the traditional clothes of Indian did not die out since the technology is used in order to export the culture and custom all over the world. In overall, I restate my opinion that development of technology not necessarily can destroy the traditional handicrafts or skills. It overtly depends on how new technology and development in country being used and practiced. In some cases, new technology can even aid the growth and spread of traditional skills which could not be known worldwide before.

Saleh, Technology and Relationships

2018-10-30T05:03:43+00:00

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? In this day and age, the reason why the way of people’s interactions has changed is that technology has developed increasingly. By expanding the usage of technology into the whole world, the types of making relationship among people gradually have become various. Although, in many cases development of technology has made life easier for people, in some others it has created some problems. I am going to considering both advantages and disadvantages. I prefer, however, to follow the positive side of it, as a fan of technology developers. Actually, that technology has some negative effects is obvious for everyone and no one can argue about it. For instantinstance, by growing technology day by day, people’s face to face interaction have has become less in comparison to the past and people prefer to contact each other with via social networks applications instead of meeting face to face. Moreover, some hackers steal people’s private information such as pictures, letters or information of bank accounts and use them against those. Thus, if people do not keep their information safely, it may become a serious threat for them. On the other hand, I believe, the benefits of using technology are rarely nearly more. For example, when it comes to talking about the advantages of technology, mobiles play a key role because many a parent is living far away from their children and are is not able to meet them from near, so they can use social media to contact them, even to have video call providing face to face contact from long distance. Furthermore, the internet which is a new part of technology, lets doctors to have some surgeries in the worldwide from long distance by cameras and other instruments, hence my positive opinion about the existing and growing technologies. Consequently, having extremely developed during these ages, technology has both pros and cons like everything. Not only do people achieve some benefits by using technology, but nowadays people’s lives are more dependent on it, somehow, if people cannot use it, they will face many problems in the society.