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Amir G, Junk Food

2018-12-21T05:11:57+00:00

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Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. These days people from all walks of life are used to have a lot of fast food which in fact, is not beneficial to their health according to many research conducted by nutritionists. While many maintain that educating the populace play a crucial role in lowering this trend, others, however, believe the attraction of such food is so high that even educated people cannot resist it let alone the ordinary consumers. That an overwhelming majority of people in this day and age have fast food at least once a day is an undeniable fact. Spending most of their time at work, most people living in modern metropolitan areas rarely find appropriate time to cook. Educating ordinary people can certainly reduce this high consumption of unhealthy food, hence the importance of enlightening people’s knowledge. This is of high importance especially amongst children and other vulnerable groups. Having said that, many hold the idea that raising social awareness is not an effective solution preventing individuals from enjoying junk food. Trained in medical profession, many a general practitioner not only has fast food, but also smokes. Undoubtedly, the mentioned groups are completely aware of the life-threatening illnesses consuming fast food can lead to. Perhaps the hectic pace of life besides palatable taste are the two major factors in growing fast food industry. By way of conclusion, not only do I believe that educating people is quite a good idea, but I also argue that introducing suitable laws can pave the way for reduction of fast food consumption. Applying progressive tax on individuals’ junk food expenses, along with subsidization of healthy food is a highly effective way to address this widely prevalent issue.

Anahita, Crime Rate

2018-12-21T05:11:42+00:00

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes being committed each year. While some think that the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides of view. Over the last years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of crimes committed in different countries. While there is a wildly held view among some people says that death penalty is the best way to be enacted as a deterrent, others are of the opinion that other methods should be practiced to tackle this problem. In this essay, both sides of the argument will be discussed. There is no doubt that capital punishment will certainly reduce the human's tendency to commit the crimes. Based upon recent statistics, the rate of serious crimes being punishable by death is far lower than those bringing out low fines. Consequently, applying an execution to crime, deters the potential criminalsrarely the people prone to carry (it) out (the crime). This indicates the fear of execution helps to reduce the crime rate. Although, capital punishment has been being performed in both developed and developing countries, heinous crimes as are being reported every day in news. This fact should be taken into close consideration that other measures had better be implemented, too. To illustrate, the possession of firearms is legal inside the United States. Therebyhence, having no hesitation that crime rate is considerably higher among Americans. If the US government restricted the rules and regulations, perhaps American's society would witness a fewer lower crime rate. Furthermore, not only are the government required to revise their laws, but also they had better investigate the indicators complying compel citizens to carry out the crimes. To exemplify, unemployment and poverty are the main causes of increasing\ rising crime rate. The poorer a society is, the more crime is reported. To put in a nutshell, there are several reasons behind increasing the crime rate. I, for one, do not subscribe to the theory that execution penalty should be regarded meted out/delivered so as to overcome the problem. In contrast, other measures should be applied. It is essential to improve the community's infrastructure to stem the tide of crime.

Boshra, Job

2018-12-21T05:11:29+00:00

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The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare for work in the future. Due to living in a high-tech era, our lifestyle has completely changed. This issue has numerous effects on our life, such that the way of doing our duties at work has changed and mostly individuals have more than one career. This short essay will elaborate on the causes of this phenomenon and some ways of being ready for job in the years to come. First and foremost, in the past individuals used to do so arduous a task regularly, and suffer from burn out syndrome. That is why rarely did they tend to have a second job. As opposed to now, when they are mostly educated and hardly do they carry out a project manually meaning that they do their work by highly technological devices and they have more spare time which leads to them having another job, and being capable of making more money. Further and even more importantly, nowadays, members of the public enjoy higher levels of information regarding different scientific issues such as managing time or doing work in a shorter period of time. The more knowledge they have, the more beneficial ways of spending free time they choose. Considering making people ready for having a decent job in the future, authorities had better formulate a plan for under-aged generations at school. For example, providing them with some practical courses for developing their sense of responsibility. In addition, by raising parents’ awareness as to the importance of their role in their charges future, we, in fact, transform an otherwise unsuccessful person to a gifted and prosperous one. On the whole, in my opinion having more than one job is because of broadening people’s horizon. What is more, the best way to help children to have a suitable job and being prosperous is providing them with an array of related courses based on their age and ability.

Eslami, Music is Played in Every Societies

2018-12-21T05:11:14+00:00

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to the individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. In all eras, music was has been one the integral part of individuals and societies. It plays an important role especially in modern societies. Furthermore, it hasthere is a controversial debate about/as to the merits and demerits of music to the community. In this essay, I am going to clarify both views and finally drawing a quick conclusion. First and foremost, music is one of the vital and crucial parts of each society. Each community has specific and traditional music that shows all aspects of related community and it is like a symbol for that country. Some countries are defined as by their famous music like the Scandinavians regionarea whichthat when you listen to it, immediately you will find out that it is related to northern part of Europe. In addition, each country in all over the world has dedicated national anthem which represents that country to other nations. The second merit of music is directly connected to our moods and states. Fast-paced life brings us more anxieties and stresses but when you are listening to a calm or relaxing song, your mind has positive reaction to this kind of music, so you will feel better. On the other hand, some believes that music has side effects on both people and societies. Nowadays, some music persuades young people to follow crime or rape. Explicit music especially has tremendously negative worse effects on teenager’s teenagers’ mind to in performing illegal activities. To draw a conclusion, the advantages of music regarding to individuals and societies are outweigh of its disadvantages and without music or songs our community will miss huge connections between generations easily.

Farshid, Public Health

2018-12-21T05:10:58+00:00

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. It is undeniable that citizens’ well-being has numerous advantages not only for themselves but also for the whole society and even country. Building more sport facilities in public places would be one way to reach public health, while many a person says that other incentives are required. In this essay I will elaborate both sides. First of all, providing sport infrastructures in every corner of cities such as parks would be an encouraging strategy to motivate people to do physical activities. Although nowadays in many countries gyms and sport centers are available everywhere, free sports facilities building built by governments play a key role in reaching public health because of many people who are not able to pay excessive amounts of money for going to the gyms. On the other hand, many a person believes that other ways such as creating awareness about the health is one of the main concerns of governments. In other words, authorities should try their best to open citizens’ mind about their health as much as they can besides building sport facilities. To exemplify, governments can use advertisements to teach people the way that they should choose their daily food to avoid obesity and other physical harms. At last, the main conclusion to be drawn from this discussion is that providing more sport infrastructure, though helpful, is not enough to reach public health. Thus governments must put other measures into consideration, one of which is advertisements to improve people's knowledge.

Forough, Change

2018-12-21T05:10:46+00:00

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. In this time and dateday and age, some people refrain from any changing in their daily routines., however, others believe that individuals need venture in some worthful worthy situations. In my opinion, there are some positive sides to changing our daily activities. This essay will discuss the pros and cons. Some people tend to do the same things without change. perhaps they are already comforting. They trow maintain/hold/argue/posit that Passion is the strongest reason why people stay on doing the same activities. In some others, they would not take a risk action because they believe it could make their life changes even become worse than before. For example, the risk of economic problems in change changing jabjobs. When a couple became become parents, they must provide a tolerablean acceptable standard for their children. They might think that change changing jobs, would give pose a high risk for family finances. On the other hand, some people argue that change is very important today. Some people have a tendency to always find a new challenge in their life. Any new situation a person encounters with can be an opportunity to learn and improve the personality. Besides them, change can represent a breakwith an old daily routine which has become predictable and stuffyboring. As well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for physical and mental health. To put it in a nutshell, both sides have their own value. I think change is always a good thing for people to run their life. They would take more opportunities if they can adjust their life with the dynamic life.

Mahta, Giving Gifts to Friends

2018-12-21T05:10:33+00:00

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Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. Offering a present has always been a symbol of love in human’s history. In this regard, there is a controversial debate as to whether or not giving presents is the best way to express one’s feeling. In my opinion, although exchanging gifts plays a significant role in human’s relationships, it might not be sufficient to illustrate correctly the way and amount that people care about each other. To cast more clarification the following seems indispensable. On the one hand, some people argue that presenting, ones can fully demonstrate his feeling toward his beloved person. To be more accurate, not only does the present have its practical aspect but also it shows how much he care about his person. For instance, when an individual spend a considerable time and effort to find a way to surprise his girlfriend with some valuable piece of cloths, which she needed exactly, he could clearly show that she is nothing but the first priority of his life. The question however is, what if his normally routine behavior shows the opposite? On the other hand, based upon recent researches, there are some people trying to compensate for their unforgettable errors by showering their partner with various gifts. To exemplify, many a spouse tries to cover up his affair with gifting some lavish jewellery to his wife. At first, the woman might be deceived by this gift, but ultimately luxurious jewellery cannot replace the missed commitment in their married/matrimonial life. At last, the main conclusion to be drawn from this discussion is that though pleasant, presents cannot guarantee the true affection. Thus, they must be accompanied by reasonable behavior.

Maliheh Hassanzadeh, Equal Role for Women

2018-12-21T05:10:22+00:00

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion. There are some kinds of occupations that for which gender separation is considered for them such as joining a country’s police force or military force. The dispute over this discrimination always is argued between some groups of people and has not been settled so far. In my opinion, women should have the equal opportunity as men to join a military force or police force. First of all, the same rights between women and men can have positive effects on the life and emotions of a female in society. In other words, restriction in career choice not only will limit their job opportunities but also would lead to a negative impact mentality on them even in other professions that where they work. Consequently, they may not act put as much as effort into their work. In second however, some other people believe that women do not have physiologically and physically appropriate ability for these kinds of jobs. However, women who work in men's environments suffer from gender-based attitudes more than those who work in women's settings. It should be noted, that women have another important and crucial responsibility as a mother at home. In addition, in order to do this kind of jobs, they have to be away from their children and family maybe for a long time. Therefore, they have to create a possible balance between their duties and parenthood.I personally think the inconsistent expectations in family, jobs and gender discrimination roles are the most serious troubles that women are challenge facing them. To summarize, the equal role’s advantages for women as a rule clearly outweigh its disadvantages. To make a long story short, women must be given the right to choose themselves like men to play their role in a country’s police force or military force.

Mosadegh, Language Die out

2018-12-21T05:10:08+00:00

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Around the world, humans communicate with variety of different languages which are the unique and professional essence of humans. These days, due to growth of modernization and development of societies, the diversity of languages will decrease as a result of the fact of globalization. I personally, believe that the mentioned fact is inevitable, even all of the countries try to maintain their traditions and languages alive. In the following, the whole of situation among humans’ civilizations will be discussed. Although some of sociologists claim that presence of various races and diversity of humans’ genes bring about different humans’ societies with specific languages, cultures, manners and fashions of lifestyle, globalization and modernization with scientific progress of humans alter the way and style of people’s life to a unanimous society in the world. Today’s life needs simplicity, speed and precision for some who have to live a life through this hectic world. Language changes because people need a better and an easier communication way. Fewer languages reduce cultural barriers between countries. It is a necessity for every individual to learn an international language which is formed characterized by the most comprehensible grammatical grammar and comprehensive lexical resources properly and whose learning is that must be easily obtained for them. On the other hand, some argue that there must be some protective rules to protect prevent the elimination of different languages, because languages diversity relates to different tribes, countries and cultures and with the death of those people heritages will be collapsed and through such horrible situation human beings will lose their history at allaltogether. To sum up all the statements above, I have to say that diversity of languages and cultures is a magnificent occurrence among individuals but with development of humans’ societies, the presence of some international languages for communication is an essential fact.

Pejvak, History or Science

2018-12-21T05:09:55+00:00

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Schools are facing a controversial issue as to which courses are more beneficial to children and in this context, History sometimes is seen as a less important subject than Science and Technology. This article reviews the benefit of both courses while giving the writer’s idea about this issue. There is always a saying that everyone must know about his their past and where he they comes from. Being familiar with history of the country and the world helps humans have a better impression of what is going on in their surrounding world. Histroy reveals not only the reason of countries’ success but also the root causes of their failure. This provides invaluable lessons which can be applied by every individual to their life. Meanwhile governments’ officials are able to reap the benefits of historical information and take them into account in their decisions. On the other hand, in this day and age, no one can ignore the importance of science and technology in human’s life. Compared to other subjects presented in schools, Science and Technology are more acceptable in parents’ view. These courses provide the builders of the future the opportunity to be more engaged in new science from early ages and help them, as they get older, decide the major they want to continue at university. In conclusion, although the benefits of History courses and having information about your past are not covered to anyone, I, personally, believe that Science and Technology subjects are more necessary to for nowaday’s today’s kids and more time must be allocated at schools to these courses.