Fridays https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13 Thu, 02 May 2024 15:09:30 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) The World Leader That You Think Is Important,Golnaz https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/509-the-world-leader-that-you-think-is-important-golnaz https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/509-the-world-leader-that-you-think-is-important-golnaz

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Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice. There are many important leaders in the world, although some of them are known for their affirmative effect like Nelson Mandela and Mohammad Mosaddegh, they are as much impact as the some who affect the world in negative way, either deliberately or even not such as Hitler or Alfred Nobel. I intend to name one of the most effective world leaders an Indian lawyer Mahatma Gandhi. Not only is he the leader of the India's independent movement, but also the philosopher of nonviolent world. He has become as a symbol of nonviolentce movements because he was against any types of violence as far as he had never eaten a piece of meat till he died. He got India's freedom from the Britain without any bleeding (In those days India was under the British rules that increaseds India's dependencyies in both financial and political areas). Mahatma's fights were copied modeled by many world efficient leaders such as Martin Luther King and Nelson Mandela and so on. Another impressive point/issue/thing about Mahatma is his attitude toward the life. The wide Variety of religions is the main cause of conflict is included in the most argumentative things in the world. Unfortunately sometimes this causes the resentment in people. The people who are irritated can easily turn destine to the violence, as you know many of fights in history are religionous based. Mahatma could overcome this problem , although he was a Hindu, he said that he is a Buddhists, a Muslim, a Jewish, a Christian, and a Hindu. He also said all of them come from same place and if it makes you a better human so it's good enough for you .This point of view makes India as a peaceful country with so many differentce religions. The last thing that I would like to notice is his plain life. Indians paid a lot for expensive Britain made fabrics, while the number of unemployed people was decreasing every day. Mahatma decided to make his own fabric and dressed up just like the lowest laborors. However, he had spent all of his lifetime life times in the way of India's dependency he never entitled himself to get any extra wage. I think his life style is the story of honesty. In sum, I chose Mahatma for his manner and attitude as he said: "happiness is when what you think, and what you said and what you do are in harmony". He is an icon of the patience, the peace and the resi

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:38:41 +0000
Popular Events, Jamshid Rabiei https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/507-popular-events-jamshid-rabiei https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/507-popular-events-jamshid-rabiei

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Over the past decades the modern world has witnessed significant changes in international events around the world. Some people welcome the idea that sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and patriotic emotions in a safer way . In this essay I will look at the both sides of the argument and give my own opinion. First of all , the World cupCap ,Olympics and other international games work for easing tension among different nations. For instance ,in Olympic event south Korean and North Korean could better know each other together and good relationship . These countries could ease easing there some tension after Olympic event in London . Some family in this event met each other together and spent a lot of time together and they could releaseing their emotions in a safe place . Therefore ,after this event could continue their life without tension. In addition , politicians in the World Cup or other international events such as Olympic review inspecting relationship between countries in this time and gathering a lot of data about it. On the other hand , during the Olympics event or World Cup we have sometimes witnessed that some athletes could not manage their temperament and they had fought against each other .As a result , it caused some tensions between countries as well. Therefore ,many experts that athletes should make create an environment for realizing emotions do not work and it will be vice versa and negative effects to the supporters and the relationship among nations . In conclusion , I firmly believe that the merits of this international event will be helpful for releasing patriotic emotions but I suppose that athletes should control their patriotic emotion .

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:36:36 +0000
Personal Joy Rather Than Their Duties, Sahar Java https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/506-personal-joy-rather-than-their-duties-sahar-java https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/506-personal-joy-rather-than-their-duties-sahar-java

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People nowadays spend time on their personal enjoyment rather than things they should do. Nowadays, many socialists are debating on the this controversial issue as to whether people tend to spend time doing their personal enjoyment or the tasks/issuesstuff they have to do according to their roles as parents or husband or wife or even as an employee. The statistics indicate/showdeclares people are becoming engaged in their own affairs rather than their roles and rules. I, myself, believe in this report and I will illustrate the reasons as below. First of all, society has to spend time and money educating its adolescents in order to acquire their peculiar role both in society and family. The psychologists cite teenage as a significant period in learning to learn the roles and responsibilities. Moreover, they admit as the teenagers get older, they will become more self‐absorbed. Accordingly, since the educational system as well as the parents have not focused on this issue, we may see people having difficulty accepting their roles and rules. Secondly, people, nowadays, have grown/become more selfish in comparison with their ancestors and the first and foremost for most reason, social psychologists have admitted that people tend to have a shorter for this attitude is the less life expectancy people tend to have today compared to rather than the past , so, people have become more obsessed in their time as they see themselves more prone to the vast variety of diseases or catastrophe. Thirdly, many city dwellers are engaged in " Nine to five jobs " in order to have a better chance of paying for their expenses in accommodation and food, whereas in traffic reports, we see that the rush‐hours are increasing year by year. Therefore, people are short for time. Given this dilemma, how can we expect people not to become selfish? In conclusion, all of the studies have been implemented on the city dwellers not the rural ones. We can indicate that people in the village are still more selfless and accepting their obligation to the rules. There is a piece of evidence showing rural people are on the verge in the vicinity of changing their priorities

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:36:11 +0000
Parents or Schools Responsible for Child Upbringing, Marzieh Javadipour https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/505-parents-or-schools-responsible-for-child-upbringing-marzieh-javadipour https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/505-parents-or-schools-responsible-for-child-upbringing-marzieh-javadipour

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however,belive that school is the place to learn this discuss both these views and give your own opinion some people believe consider that parents should train children how to be useful members of society since parents have their duty of training their children in a suitable way and teach them to be good in their social life. also, other people accept that school is the right place for teaching this., obviously there are many educational methods in school for teaching and affecting on children for this point and no one can deny that. it can be clearly said say that it is parents's responsibility to give their children good/decent upbringing since they are young childe and teach them how they can find found distinction between wrong and right, in particular they should know some basic information about the environment besides these children will search for how to be responsible and be important persons in their social life. as a result, parents are models of behaviour and effective teachers for their children before school. on the other hand, there is difference between school life and personal life. ,in school they learn the ways of being useful and reasonable. in other words, being worthy in society with the methods that have proved effective they are proven and we can rely on them,methods that have been experienced are full of experience and knowledge so they can show and teach children how to be wellbehaved appropriate. to sum up, I personally personality believe that children need both of them together.,they need to learn from their parents while they should get ready to be in society with knowledgeable ways.

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:35:42 +0000
Nature and Nurture, Jalal Asghari https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/504-nature-and-nurture-jalal-asghari https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/504-nature-and-nurture-jalal-asghari

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with, have much more influence on our personality and development than any experience we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? By: Jalal Asghari 940913 Our existence and its development are influenced by our nature that we inherit from our parents and by our nurture that we retrieve receive from the environment. These two major factors are affect our personal development and these factors influence each other together. The Human instinct nature is necessary for his fetal life and after that in mundane life. Inherited characteristics of humans lead him to a special life style. Some of our behavior and our reflections to pathogens are genetically controlled and any none of our acquired characteristics can cannot modify them. Nature is as our inner child and you can never live without it. You can only hide it while it's controlling you. Nurture has different effects. It makes you better or worse. It's necessary for adaption to with the environment and each skill we combine, affect our relations to society and people around. Scientists say that the difference between our brain and other living relatives' brain, is our ability to respondse to environmental influences and organizing the experiences experiments. Although the environment influences our functions, it can't supplant/replace human nature. Our nurture is influenced by our nature and the reverse is not true because we experience everything such that our inner child likes. To conclude, the human's genes genetic (which are is) called nature and his nurture which is environmental experiment, are in a crucial relationship to develop the human's existence. However, nature has the major rule because of its simultaneous physical and mental effects. Good luck!

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:35:14 +0000
Improvement in Health, Sahar Ghasemi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/503-improvement-in-health-sahar-ghasemi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/503-improvement-in-health-sahar-ghasemi

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Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations , however ,the government of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, authority figures argue that we are all humans, and powerful and developed countriesy must support poorer ones to reach the united world union universe. Some advocates state that in according to human rights, all humans are equal to each other and we must not put any discrimination between them. All of people have the right franchise to use facilities ,it is not fair that just some special individuals use facilities .if I had infinite power of world in my hand ,I would share all of the amenities premium in the world. In my opinion, our first priority must be finding rethe source of poverty and try to recovery serious problems. Powerful and wealthy states must negotiate with each other and make a decision to send help for them in best way. Secondly, the governments of richer nations have a lot of trained stuff like teachers and tutors and skillful doctors and original medicine and a lot of welfare and equipment to assist poorer nations in to changinge their life and destinations. Poorer countriesy are in danger of dangerous disease because of lack of food and nutrition and good ingredients in their meals. Todays, we see lots of diseases that break out breakdown because of lack of suitable remedy, hence with sharing facilities we can reclaim life of lots of people. Thirdly, they could organize some places to educate them to promote the whole country to promote widespread literacy in every place for now and next generation. literacy has a lot of bad consequences and it causes lot of danger and increases culturale poverty. On the other hand, poverty can cause a lot of crime. We were not born criminals, but some situations make individuals to do/commit felony, most teenagers have high expectation from life ,many fathers become thieves thief to cover the protect expenses of the family. To some sum up ,for having a healthy world both in mentally and physically it is better to advise advice rich countries to help the impoverished them for nurturing our next generation in welfare and show the union that we are one and remove class distinction.

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:34:42 +0000
Historc Buildings Should be Preserved in Their Original Forms, Hanieh Eftekhari https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/502-historc-buildings-should-be-preserved-in-their-original-forms-hanieh-eftekhari https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/502-historc-buildings-should-be-preserved-in-their-original-forms-hanieh-eftekhari

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Some people agree that historic buildings should be preserved in their original forms others argue that this is both inadvisable and impossible discuss both these views and give your own opinion Changes which have been occurred in recent decades, are an inevitable fact and cannot be either denied or stopped. To put it simply, all aspects of life are changing during the time which that is not exceptional for construction field. Some believe that the old buildings should be remained with their previous fundamental designs because of their sense of nostalgia nostalgic and historical values. They emphasized that if authorities do not change the buildings and just try to repair some destroyed sections, not only will the new generation get familiar with history of cities and countries, but also tradition might be saved and appreciated. If all historic buildings and monuments are destroyed, any history trace of cities which definitely ately is root of their culture may not be remained and it is clear that nobody is allowed to ruin culture and tradition completely. On the other hand, some others who are interested in modernism maintain that in this rapidly changing world, changes happen would happened in all aspects of life, so it is seemsed that it is likely to be impossible to obstruct modification in architecture and civil areas. modern life needs modern cities and buildings and it is unimaginable to use new technology in old buildings. Besides, new inventions and recent changes are making our life more comfortable. consequently, living in the past is not rationale. According to their beliefs, we should proceed in all aspects and take steps with time. Therefore, preserving old buildings is meaningless and waste of money. To sum up, some individuals assert that old and historic buildings required to be preserved in terms of their initial design and shape, while others prefer modern buildings for all cities and agree that we should try going forward along with development of ing technology. I truly believe that governments should try to repair some special historic buildings to save culture and tradition for future generations. Meanwhile, we should try to use technology in construction to facilitate life for all citizens.

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:34:13 +0000
Early Education, Sina https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/501-early-education-sina https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/501-early-education-sina

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. The education system is constantly changing and its policies are reconsidered almost every year. A hot debate is yielded from these modifications regarding when the best time to begin formal education is. Statistics show that many countries believe seven or eight is the most appropriate age while others tend to reduce this number to four. To begin with, the sooner a child starts communicating with other children, the deeper he understands social matters, even in their small society. Moreover, their brains will be trained to be active and open to new information. However, Although, in early ages, the majority of the provided courses have to be fun with games included. Following this pattern patent, instructors can subtly inject proper scientific subjects in the middle. For instance, basic mathematics is are not too much to grasp for a four year old. However, a number of parents are concerned about with their children's emotions. They do not want to put their dearest in tough environments and tend to believe that a seven ‐ years old could easily handle the student life comparing to the younger ones. Furthermore, parents prefer to have their children's company when they are busy learning via entertaining computer softwares programs so that all members of the family can spend more time together. All in all, I would like to reiterate that early studying, if preformed correctly, is beneficial. There is no doubt that it has its own pros and cons, but the advantages definitely possibly outweigh the disadvantages. The drawbacks should be thought of as a certain price that parents need to pay due to the characteristics of current education systems

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:33:41 +0000
Children Learning a Foreign Language at Primary School or Highschool, Hengameh Bazrafshan https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/500-children-learning-a-foreign-language-at-primary-school-or-highschool-hengameh-bazrafshan https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/500-children-learning-a-foreign-language-at-primary-school-or-highschool-hengameh-bazrafshan

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Several years ago, there were basically mathematics, science and literature, which were the core subjects being included in elementary schools' curriculum. However, we have all witnessed and none can deny the recent remarkable change in of most primary schools' trend toward adding a foreign language to the weekly schedule. I am optimistic about such promotions to pave the way for our next generations to push back the boundaries of science more internationally. Students in elementary schools, nowadays, have a lot of free time during school hours most of which has been allocated to remedial courses for math or other science more than needed. I argue that learning another language aside from rather than their mother tongue is a necessary skill to achieve. Therefore, not only could they make a use of their leisure time applicably, but it provides an apt ground for their future learning, since it is obligatory in secondary school. But maybe it will be more desirable for kids not to be obliged to do the task so the course had better is entitled to be optional. The Other two profitable benefits which children are able to get from learning the language in 'elementary school' relates to both 'elementary', since it refers to early ages and 'school' by emphasizing on teamwork. Experts assert that if you would embark on learning any task at an/from early ageachievement you wish, you could easily master it in much less time than you would in adulthood .get from your childhood, you had definitely achieve it in twice more speed than your adulthood. They cite the preference of being taught tought in school rather than homeschooling because of the important role which working with peers plays in affecting children more impressively in comparison with keeping in touch with parents all the time at home. In conclusion, from my point of view, the advantages in learning any skill from early ages outweigh the disadvantages as we all confirm that 'the younger you are when you enter a course, the better you perform serve by means of efficiency

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:33:12 +0000
Being a Good Parent,Babak https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/499-being-a-good-parent-babak https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/117-fridays-writing-workshop-1394/writing-workshop-friday-94-09-13/499-being-a-good-parent-babak

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Being a parent is an extremely huge burden. Anyone who is going to accept this responsibility should be prepared for it. Some of these related skills can be educated in schools or universities. Some believe that school is the place where students should just learn some particular subjects issues like physics, math and chemistry, whereas I am opposed to with it. I maintain that these subjects do not suffice and some psychological and rearing courses for being an efficient parent is necessary for the raising of the future generations and the younger less age we learn about it, the more success we can reach. although it seems that we it had better discuss these issues in higher levels of education like universities where individuals would find them more seriously, there are some who cannot not entering universities. As a result, in my opinion, the best time to this end is teaching them at high school period careers. With the advent of some sciences such as psychology in early twentieth century nowadays, our knowledge has increased become more about child rearing. There are some behaviors which we should deter like discrimination, corporal punishment, comparison, humiliation, offense which engender difficulty in our children's future personalities. We should strike a balance. In other words, neither being strict nor lenient seems reasonable. In order to provideProviding facilities for our children, we should have sufficient income. That is to say, what is our children's right is enjoying a safe place for living and being fulfilled their basic needs being met. To sum up, it seems that school is the best place for teaching how to become acceptable parents and we should observe some points as I mentioned above

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Writing Workshop Friday 94.09.13 Fri, 04 Dec 2015 16:32:48 +0000