Fridays https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29 Sat, 04 May 2024 08:53:27 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Communication, Sanaz Nasr https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1253-communication-sanaz-nasr https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1253-communication-sanaz-nasr  

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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree? Due to modern communication devices, people can easily get in touch with each other. one of these platforms which is the short message service. Although people have welcomed this way of connecting for its promptitude, in many views it is an improper way of socializing because it will destroy the rules of grammar. First and foremost, people are sending text messages through small sentences and even eliminating the words. To exemplify, they are typing 'LOL' instead of laughing out loud or 'SMS' for short message service or 'wud' instead of would. This sort of typing will only save a few seconds, whereas in the long-run 'wud' will stick in people's mind and ultimately will leads to destruction of words' right dictation. In addition, it is embarrassing that typing shorthand is becominge not only a trend, but also is being added to well-known dictionaries. For instance, the word 'OMG' meaning "Oh My God"oh my God is being added to the Oxford dictionary. Many argue that this is the legacy that we want to left leave behind. Admittedly, when an individual uses short sentences gradually the person will forget the formal phrases. A clear example is, most employers are complaining that the majority of their staff are not able to send an official email or using use formal words in meetings. By way of conclusion, the text messaging service provides a quick and efficient method of communicating. However,, people have forgotten how to use proper grammar and spelling. I opine that what our ancestors left behind, in other words, our language, deserves more attention to pay.

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Educating Children, Ramin Shahzadi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1252-educating-children-ramin-shahzadi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1252-educating-children-ramin-shahzadi  

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to teach this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. There is a controversial issue that a great number amount of people put children's social behavior teachings as responsibilities of their parents while in contrast, schools are going to be considered as the place of forming students to be good members of for society. Many scientists argue that school help kids to learn essential skills for better performing, not only as an individual but also in the role of a society member. They believe children have been achieving this ability by being in multicultural places like schools and even more, they think social education should be counted as school teachers ' responsibilities. According to new findings, more than 46 percent of humans's personality will be shaped in family and each children spendt more most of their time at home rather than being in school. Although the role of school for social training is not negligible, children's behaviors mostly will be affected by their parents' manners. For instance, a mother whose who is suffering from social society phobia/introverted/reserved should not have the expectation of having sociable kids. This statement is generally correct, but time to time a few expectations have been seen/observed/witnessed by researchers. in conclusion, I agree with those findings which insist on the consideration of parental teachings in higher priority rather than school's roles in social teachings for students, for being better members in their society. Parents are the first teachers for each kids and for sure they have the most effect on their behavior.

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Going Abroad, Atanaz Shams https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1251-going-abroad-atanaz-shams https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1251-going-abroad-atanaz-shams  

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students going abroad for studying. agree/disagree Going abroad has different aspects.i think it depends on your own country , your country 's university , the quality of education , work , society and all situations that makes you against your feeling ,leave your common life and make a new one in a new country with a foreign language . In light of this topic subtitle, I can say positive and negative points . that people aren't able to study in any field they want ,They feel that the level of education is not enough and can notcannot satisfy them., I think the better way is immigration and going abroad to find a university that can convince them . For example some fields don't have a phd or a master's degree because they are new and in our country this field is not as much known as other fields . In this way staying in their own country makes the People who that have many wishes and much potential many potancial to work hard and improve in their life can be surpass suppressed. I think for going abroad personality is more important . As I see for example there is aare people that are so sociable that go in other countries where there are not have any sociable people and they re going to be depressed. At the end I think this is an important disicion decision that we should make . And of course having distance is so hard for families and they should just have communication with the internet and social programsm like telegram , skype , viber and …. . I think it's hard to grow up 20 years with your family and suddenly make a disicoin decision to go abroad and be alone .in my opinion iff if you intend want to go to study in overseas you should have financial support , because I think if students go there and simultaneously study and at work, it is so hard, at least for the first year because you just jast go and try to adjust yourself you self . If we have the courage to change our lives and we are not satisfied we can go abroad . Of course many people are never be satisfied and always complain about their situation . I think as to what people what should do is its better to be consulted with someone one like a consultant or somebody body that knows all things about your own personality or your country's university. At the end I think we should do something that our heart and brain together cover it and try our out best and improve so that we never regret it sigh for that .

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Governments & Environment, Sarvenaz Rashedi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1250-governments-environment-sarvenaz-rashedi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1250-governments-environment-sarvenaz-rashedi  

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Task: Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, how to conserve conserving the environment from global damage is known as an area of concern among many individuals. Experts have different views about whether it is incumbent upon governments to take responsibility or individuals have to take action personally in this regard. I, personally, believe this problem will be resolved (settled) with cooperation of both. On the one hand, I think governments play a vital role in protecting the earth by introducing some kind of laws. From my perspective, governments should create laws to require large corporations to reduce their carbon footprints which are is produced by using fossil fuels and causesd the depletion of the ozone layer,. also they can support the factories which manufacture Hybrid, electrical and biofueldriven vehicles. In addition, statesmen should develop the infrastructures in order to harness solar energy as well as the power of the wind to generate electricity. On the other hand, the role of the members of the public's role should not be neglected in this regard. Nowadays, due to the huge amount of waste which is produced by mankind, soil and water in many areas around the world are contaminated (polluted) which is a major threat to the environment, so considering proper methods that can control this trend is a must for any individual; for example, using recyclable products besides renewable resources can reduce the water pollution. Simply put, the less garbage in water, the less extreme damage to nature. In conclusion, I believe the best approach to have having an environment with less ecosystem damages is just provided by close cooperation and coordination between governments and individuals. In other words, the more cooperation, the less our catastrophic environmental footprint.

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Help People, Boshra https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1249-help-people-boshra https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1249-help-people-boshra  

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We cannot help everyone In the world that need help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Human beings are created from an unique material and then they were are sent to diverse parts of the world, hence all of us have a similar background. There is a question with regard to makinge a contribution to others. Some researchers believe that it is better to help others regardless of their living places. For example, whether they live in the same place with us or not and some others assume that we had better just help fellow- citizens. That making a contribution to inhabitants who live in the same country with us is a major cause to increase the quality of our life too is an undeniable fact, hence not only are we helping them to tackle their problems, but also it leads us to have a better living condition. In addition, due to the acceptable idea that we can understand the problems of the members of the public's difficulties much more Effectively than abroad citizens abroad, receiving money from others who live in some unknown places is unacceptable. On the other hand opponents opine that because of technological progress we live in a highly modern tech-time. Besides, the world has become like a global village. what is more, We can collect information regarding people from all over the word easily. The more we realizeing the people's difficulties, the more we rush to their aid.beneficial favors to them. For instance, if a city was hit by an earthquake, authorities from all over the world would go there and evaluate their situations or predict their current and future needs and help them in an effective and useful way. In a nutshell, I, personally, claim that governments should found an organization to predict people's requirements in some unexpected events without considering their nationalities.

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Leaving Home at an Early Age, Sara Kasaei https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1248-leaving-home-at-an-early-age-sara-kasaei https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1248-leaving-home-at-an-early-age-sara-kasaei  

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Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience. Experiencing some level of independency has become more common among the young generation in order to following their passions. Whilst I tend to agree that this trend have has drawbacks, I strongly concede that from a broader point of view, it could be way more beneficial. Those frowning upon leaving home at a the young age consider the high risk of making lifechanging ( )یا جبران ناپذیر؟mistakes as its major consequence due to the lack of experience. Being immature might result in making uninformed choices which could have negatively affect their both personal life and as well as their career. For instance, homesickness-as an unavoidable side effect of living far from home especially among the youth- might contribute to short,ly unhealthy, emotional relationships without any supervision from their parents. Such activities could aggravate their mental condition and result in addiction or even suicide. Moreover, despite the great sense of having your own self-income by working right after graduation from high school, these young workers are wasting their best years of their life just applying themselves in futureless demanding positions without prospect like being a waitress rather than having tertiary education. However, independency could provide a brilliant opportunity for youngsters to develop their skills and reach a high self-knowledge in that they are being forced to manage miscellaneous tasks from doing dull chores to handle their budget parallel to developing their social communications in unfamiliar environments. What is more, not only does would this life style would contribute to maturity, such people would be are more likely to appreciate and grab chances which plays a major role in their successionsuccess. Despite the less free time they have compared to their counterparts who live with their parents, they are able to perform different responsibilities simultaneously with higher productivity specifically in stressful situations. In brief, although starting an independent life at a young age might be overwhelming and emotionally heart breaking at some points, as a new step to adulthood it is completely worth tryingto try. Parents should encourage their kids to accept this risk and assist them so that they could take fully advantage of this golden period of their life journey.

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Over Population of Urban Areas has led to Numerous Problems, Arshia Shoghi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1247-over-population-of-urban-areas-has-led-to-numerous-problems-arshia-shoghi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1247-over-population-of-urban-areas-has-led-to-numerous-problems-arshia-shoghi  

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Over population of urban areas has led to numerous problems Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle this problem The phenomenon of overpopulation has become a deeply entrenched problem for most of the cities and countries and especially for the industrialized ones with a huge number of companies and factories. In my estimation,s there are two reasons for overpopulation. one is the increase in/of the birth rate or decrease of/in the death rate in a particular area. the second reason and the most important one is people's migration into other cities or countries because of their own living place problems such as and shortages in job vacancy working areas or low quality of life. There are so many difficulties raised by this problem for instance: overpopulation in urban areas puts an excessive burden on transport systems and as a result various types of public transportation are overcrowded and people have to spend a remarkable amount of time in the streets and crowd. another issue is housing and working shortages for the local people of that area and they won't have the welfare they used to have. one way of tackling this problem is that governments evenly spread the features in all cities of a country so people don't have to emigrate to improve their living conditions. they also can localize the universities so that students don't have to change their living place and with improvement of transportation systems so people will not need become needless to travel through the city with in their private cars and this will remedy the traffic situation to a large extent.

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SOP, Mahshid https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1246-sop-mahshid https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/214-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-02-29/1246-sop-mahshid  

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I would like to take this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for Master's Degree at prestigious Middlesex University London. I have chosen the media management program as I have long been interested in this integrated field and I believe that I have the qualities to forge a successful career in this area. I am honored to apply for the master of Media Management program at the Middlesex University London. As long as I remember I always had love affairs with both Management and Media .This interest may refer to my father's job. He was managing several cinemas in Tehran, after that he worked in a movie and series making company. Ever since I was in school I saw would see my father managing one of the biggest series and movie making companies in the Middle East. what was so interesting to me was his work environment as he was dealing with artistic projects. I have always considered my father as my mentor who he is so disciplined and I have always admired his skills in management. He encouraged me to improve my managerial skills as they are keys to success for any career, so I decided to study Business Administration. I am a very adventurousrist person and always look for new challenges in life .In order to develop my life skills and experience life in a new environment; I decided to study abroad .After doing many researches I found an international university in Cyprus. The reason I chose Eastern Mediterranean University was that it was an international university with a good reputation in its business faculty and Cyprus is close to Iran, so my parents could easily come to visit me as I was just seventeen and they were worried about me. During the program I was feeling I should have found a way to connect management with arts and media. I talked to my course adviser and informed him about my enthusiasm in media and communication. I took some courses from media and communication department such as : media literacy , advertising design and layout and creative advertising . I was feeling so satisfied while taking the courses. Finally I graduated in Business Administration with 3.60 CGPA in 2014. After graduation I came back to my country, I wanted to continue my education but promised myself to wait until I find found the program which I really liked , so I applied for a job as a sales expert in a company which they produced explosion proof products but after a year I found decided I was not making progress in this job although I learnt quite a bit.it boring and not matching with my personality . After that it's been two years that I have been working as a commercial coordinator in a trading company importing that imports chemical products from different suppliers all around the world .Besides, I dance in one of the biggest dance groups with the most famous chorographers in Iran ,I perform in dance concerts and theatre. Even though I am satisfied with my job, I think I should follow my favorite subject of study which is Media and expand my knowledge in this field. As a result, I looked for some master's degree programs/postgraduate in Europe but none of them inspired me in my desired field as they were so general. I searched for management courses in UK which where I could find the combination of management and media and I found this amazing program you offer. I have been to London and it seems like a very nice place to study and explore new things. In my opinion the media managementprogram gives the opportunity to students to develop analytical skills as well as learning research methods and necessary skills for both management and media studies. In addition, students have this opportunity to present what they have acquired . a Variety of optional courses are also offered in the program by which I can decide which topic to study more about. I am sure that my passion, curiosity and business background will enable me to succeed in this e greatly sought-after claiming program. Eventually, I deeply believe that the excellence of your program, along with my capabilities and motivation, will help me to attain my destination which is either puruing to a PhD program or alternatively find a decent job.

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