FridaysGMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم
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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide
basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of children playing computer
games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Many individuals have been utilizing computers to such a considerable extent in this day and age.
Furthermore, most children use digital games, issuing negative impacts on their social life and physicalmental health. Some solutions will be submitted to minimize its effect.
Digital games are quite addictive, and children feel trapped in these games. With the passage of time,
children would rather opt for an aloof lifestyle in default of socializing with others or going for outdoor
activities. Secondly, children’s eyesight could be impaired as a consequence of extreme exposure to the
computer games. Thirdly, most of (the) games today’s children play are really/extremely violent, which
might lead to children’s aggressive behavior in the worst-case scenario.
Some measures should be taken to address the severity of these games which are/include: parents
should monitor the time expended by their children not to let them exceed the given time. Only when
children do not play too much, are some of the repercussions of playing with consoles significantly
minimized. In other words, poor eyesight, aggressive behavior are less likely to transpire. Finally, parents
and teachers should shoulder the responsibility to make them interested in outdoor activities, or rather
true-to-life games such as seek and hide play or playing football, and so forth. This could also be
conducive to being more extroverted due to being in touch with others in reality.
To conclude, supervising children during playing with the aforementioned games and allocating specific
time to children’s virtual games could minimize the detrimental influence on children’s societal,
physical, and mental health.
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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide
basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of children playing computer
games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Many individuals have been utilizing computers to such a considerable extent in this day and age.
Furthermore, most children use digital games, issuing negative impacts on their social life and physicalmental health. Some solutions will be submitted to minimize its effect.
Digital games are quite addictive, and children feel trapped in these games. With the passage of time,
children would rather opt for an aloof lifestyle in default of socializing with others or going for outdoor
activities. Secondly, children’s eyesight could be impaired as a consequence of extreme exposure to the
computer games. Thirdly, most of (the) games today’s children play are really/extremely violent, which
might lead to children’s aggressive behavior in the worst-case scenario.
Some measures should be taken to address the severity of these games which are/include: parents
should monitor the time expended by their children not to let them exceed the given time. Only when
children do not play too much, are some of the repercussions of playing with consoles significantly
minimized. In other words, poor eyesight, aggressive behavior are less likely to transpire. Finally, parents
and teachers should shoulder the responsibility to make them interested in outdoor activities, or rather
true-to-life games such as seek and hide play or playing football, and so forth. This could also be
conducive to being more extroverted due to being in touch with others in reality.
To conclude, supervising children during playing with the aforementioned games and allocating specific
time to children’s virtual games could minimize the detrimental influence on children’s societal,
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Niloo, Saving Money Nowadays or Past2021-03-21T06:05:18+00:002021-03-21T06:05:18+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/549-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-29/3888-niloo-saving-money-nowadays-or-pastHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Do you agree or disagree that it is difficult for people today to save
money than grandparents when they were young.
No one can deny that nowadays the economic situation is tough for
most people and plays a paramount role in people's life. The
questions arise as to whether saving money in today's modern life is
easier than pervious decades or not. Personally, I think these days
saving money has some challenges which makes it difficult for some
reasons which I will explain at length in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, living standards has have been changing decade by
decade which causes gap generation, so it is a given that the level of
individuals' expectations corresponds with their time. In other
words, in our grandparents' time people did were not aware enough
to much care much about high education, learning arts, traveling or
dedicating time to their hubbieshobbies, thus they did not spend
their money in these fields, hence they had more money to save. For
instance, during the 1990s the number of universities In Iran was less
than two hundred which prevented students who did not access
education (them) in their town from entering universities who did
not access educational (them) in their town, so in this case many
expenses could be eliminated such as price of home rents.
Another point to consider is that, the rate of technological
advancement in the modern age has risen sharply which people
should update their gadgets (Tech devices) to get along with their
circumstances. For example, families who theirwhose children study
abroad should have smart phones to communicate with them
efficiently. Besides, nowadays social media and advertising gravitate
individuals to materialism and consumerism which causes people to
spend their money on their unnecessary goods. The best example is,
that Instagram propels teenagers to the fashion industry which is
one of the most expensive ones and therefore, they have less money
to save.To recap, even though some people believe that nowadays people
are more acknowledgeable in this field which is conducive to saving
money easily (being more homo economics), I strongly believe
otherwise maintaining that this way of thinking is nothing but a
tunnel vision which ignores the importance of the abovementioned
facts.
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Do you agree or disagree that it is difficult for people today to save
money than grandparents when they were young.
No one can deny that nowadays the economic situation is tough for
most people and plays a paramount role in people's life. The
questions arise as to whether saving money in today's modern life is
easier than pervious decades or not. Personally, I think these days
saving money has some challenges which makes it difficult for some
reasons which I will explain at length in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, living standards has have been changing decade by
decade which causes gap generation, so it is a given that the level of
individuals' expectations corresponds with their time. In other
words, in our grandparents' time people did were not aware enough
to much care much about high education, learning arts, traveling or
dedicating time to their hubbieshobbies, thus they did not spend
their money in these fields, hence they had more money to save. For
instance, during the 1990s the number of universities In Iran was less
than two hundred which prevented students who did not access
education (them) in their town from entering universities who did
not access educational (them) in their town, so in this case many
expenses could be eliminated such as price of home rents.
Another point to consider is that, the rate of technological
advancement in the modern age has risen sharply which people
should update their gadgets (Tech devices) to get along with their
circumstances. For example, families who theirwhose children study
abroad should have smart phones to communicate with them
efficiently. Besides, nowadays social media and advertising gravitate
individuals to materialism and consumerism which causes people to
spend their money on their unnecessary goods. The best example is,
that Instagram propels teenagers to the fashion industry which is
one of the most expensive ones and therefore, they have less money
to save.To recap, even though some people believe that nowadays people
are more acknowledgeable in this field which is conducive to saving
money easily (being more homo economics), I strongly believe
otherwise maintaining that this way of thinking is nothing but a
tunnel vision which ignores the importance of the abovementioned
facts.
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Parents and School2021-03-21T06:04:58+00:002021-03-21T06:04:58+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/549-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-29/3887-parents-and-schoolHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of the
society. However, it is believed that school is the place to learn this.
The manner of children is important for when they will grow up and enter the society. In my
opinion, both parents and school play important roles in children’s behavior and attitude.
First of all, parents have a major roles because when a baby is born at first by nature it is like
itstheir parents, so they show the behavior of their parents. Therefore, parents have to be
suitable models for their children. For instance, the parents should behave well with toward
other people, so their children would learn how they should behaveior.
On the other hand, school is the same as a second home for children and these times/in this
era teachers have very important roles. In school the behavior and attitude of children will
be complete. Children play with their friends or do some activity in groups. Therefore, they
learn how to work in a team and behave with toward other people when they will become
adult.
In conclusion, parents and school both are important for behavior of children and if they
learn to behave well toward other people, they will be a good member of the society.
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of the
society. However, it is believed that school is the place to learn this.
The manner of children is important for when they will grow up and enter the society. In my
opinion, both parents and school play important roles in children’s behavior and attitude.
First of all, parents have a major roles because when a baby is born at first by nature it is like
itstheir parents, so they show the behavior of their parents. Therefore, parents have to be
suitable models for their children. For instance, the parents should behave well with toward
other people, so their children would learn how they should behaveior.
On the other hand, school is the same as a second home for children and these times/in this
era teachers have very important roles. In school the behavior and attitude of children will
be complete. Children play with their friends or do some activity in groups. Therefore, they
learn how to work in a team and behave with toward other people when they will become
adult.
In conclusion, parents and school both are important for behavior of children and if they
learn to behave well toward other people, they will be a good member of the society.
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Part Time Work for High-schoolers2021-03-21T06:04:50+00:002021-03-21T06:04:50+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/549-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-29/3886-part-time-work-for-high-schoolersHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Part time work for high-schoolers
One of the most challenging dilemmas for parents is whether to give the chance of working in society to
their children in their teenage yearswho are before they becoming an adult. As teenagers are extremely
vulnerable, some people profoundly feel that working in at this these ages could exposedisposes this
sensitive age group/our teenagers to perilous mental damages. Nevertheless, I personally believe that it
is very astounding rare/golden opportunity for adolescents to improve their abilities by working parttime jobs and finally it can prepare them to reach the zenith of their future profession. Following an
appropriate job have has some outstanding privileges which are indispensable for this these ages.
The first privilege is having self-confidence which will be attained by working in this ages. It makes sense
a person who believes in himself would be prosper in his future career. For instance, my cousin is an
astonishing example for this. In his adolescent adolescencehood he worked as a photographer assistant.
Meanwhile, he was studying photography in school. Today he is adjunct professor of photography, with
huge wealth and impressive prestige.
At the second, I think a teenager who closely is in touch with society can earn some essential skills for
adult life. In another words/simply put, in adolescent ages with by obtaining some crucial abilities like
relating properly with people and regulating our relationship in overwhelming circumstances, we
undoubtedly will experience a more healthy adult life. For example, a teenager who has been deceived
by others, will be prepared in adult life to anticipate the danger and prevent it. Furthermore, we can
instruct him to manage this damages and we can develop his skills to cope with the problems what he
will face in his future. virgule
eventually, I strongly believe that not only is doing a part-time job is not hazardous but also it can
vaccinate the teens’ brain effectively from varies mental diseases in their adult life. It seems to be great
if we encourage teenagers to learn how to protect themselves from dangers which they may face
to.face sth/be faced with sth
not only am I
not only can I
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Part time work for high-schoolers
One of the most challenging dilemmas for parents is whether to give the chance of working in society to
their children in their teenage yearswho are before they becoming an adult. As teenagers are extremely
vulnerable, some people profoundly feel that working in at this these ages could exposedisposes this
sensitive age group/our teenagers to perilous mental damages. Nevertheless, I personally believe that it
is very astounding rare/golden opportunity for adolescents to improve their abilities by working parttime jobs and finally it can prepare them to reach the zenith of their future profession. Following an
appropriate job have has some outstanding privileges which are indispensable for this these ages.
The first privilege is having self-confidence which will be attained by working in this ages. It makes sense
a person who believes in himself would be prosper in his future career. For instance, my cousin is an
astonishing example for this. In his adolescent adolescencehood he worked as a photographer assistant.
Meanwhile, he was studying photography in school. Today he is adjunct professor of photography, with
huge wealth and impressive prestige.
At the second, I think a teenager who closely is in touch with society can earn some essential skills for
adult life. In another words/simply put, in adolescent ages with by obtaining some crucial abilities like
relating properly with people and regulating our relationship in overwhelming circumstances, we
undoubtedly will experience a more healthy adult life. For example, a teenager who has been deceived
by others, will be prepared in adult life to anticipate the danger and prevent it. Furthermore, we can
instruct him to manage this damages and we can develop his skills to cope with the problems what he
will face in his future. virgule
eventually, I strongly believe that not only is doing a part-time job is not hazardous but also it can
vaccinate the teens’ brain effectively from varies mental diseases in their adult life. It seems to be great
if we encourage teenagers to learn how to protect themselves from dangers which they may face
to.face sth/be faced with sth
not only am I
not only can I
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Railway2021-03-21T06:04:38+00:002021-03-21T06:04:38+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/549-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-29/3885-railwayHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money
on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the
money should spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both this views and
give your own opinion.
There are two different notions regarding investing in whether . Or …. Some people believe
it is better to be improved or developed the existing publics transportation such as regular
trains and buses while the others prefer high-speed railways which are connecting between
cities. From my point of view, both of these ideas have their advantages.
On the one hand, nowadays thanks to high costs of accommodation and daily expenses in
big cities, people tend to live further away from city centers. Also, some people work around
or out of their city, so high-speed rail could be both the safety and efficient. To put it clearly,
people traveling to or from work could save a large amount of time on the road, . besides,
they are more likely to have safe travel in comparison with when they drive their car. Take a
person who travels every day between cities as an example; they he not only should
concentrate on the road to prevent an accident but also they he can spend more time to
commuting due to traffic.
On the other hand, unlike high-speed trains, which connect the cities, public transport
enables citizens to travel within the city. Not only does public transportation decline reduce
the traffic in a city, but it also has a huge effect in reducing the pollution created by fossil
fuels of cars. So the more personal vehicles are existing in cities, the more pollution could be
created. In addition, people commuting to and from work feel less exhaustion due to the
less traffic. So they could dedicate their time to resting or studying instead of driving.
In conclusion, I think in the a metropolis, the government should invest equally in the fast
rail system and public transportation. However, it is also reasonable for the authorities to
invest more money into the existing public transportation, especially in small cities.
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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money
on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the
money should spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both this views and
give your own opinion.
There are two different notions regarding investing in whether . Or …. Some people believe
it is better to be improved or developed the existing publics transportation such as regular
trains and buses while the others prefer high-speed railways which are connecting between
cities. From my point of view, both of these ideas have their advantages.
On the one hand, nowadays thanks to high costs of accommodation and daily expenses in
big cities, people tend to live further away from city centers. Also, some people work around
or out of their city, so high-speed rail could be both the safety and efficient. To put it clearly,
people traveling to or from work could save a large amount of time on the road, . besides,
they are more likely to have safe travel in comparison with when they drive their car. Take a
person who travels every day between cities as an example; they he not only should
concentrate on the road to prevent an accident but also they he can spend more time to
commuting due to traffic.
On the other hand, unlike high-speed trains, which connect the cities, public transport
enables citizens to travel within the city. Not only does public transportation decline reduce
the traffic in a city, but it also has a huge effect in reducing the pollution created by fossil
fuels of cars. So the more personal vehicles are existing in cities, the more pollution could be
created. In addition, people commuting to and from work feel less exhaustion due to the
less traffic. So they could dedicate their time to resting or studying instead of driving.
In conclusion, I think in the a metropolis, the government should invest equally in the fast
rail system and public transportation. However, it is also reasonable for the authorities to
invest more money into the existing public transportation, especially in small cities.
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Shaghayegh, Moving2021-03-21T06:04:28+00:002021-03-21T06:04:28+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/549-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-29/3884-shaghayegh-movingHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a
negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
After the revolution in technology, providing a unique situation has been provided in which people
have more opportunities to experience living in other countries for various purposes, particularly find a
job. Whereas many subscribe to the belief that immigrant children may experience difficulties that
have a psychological impact on them, others argue the positive effects are substantial.
Admittedly, relocating to other places means that considerable changes may occur. Initially, children
generally encounter plenty of unfamiliar situations that may contribute to insecurity which means that
they are constantly in fear of losing something in their minds. For instance, when a child moves to a
new place, he should leave their his old friends, and startingmaking a new circle of ones. Moreover,
their patriotic feeling and sense of belonging to their country could weaken since they miss a lot of
opportunities to celebrate their national events.
There is a deluge of merits of moving to different nationscountries for adolescents; the most
significant one is that a new language could be quickly acquired by constant exposure in an
environment. In other words, grammar, vocabulary, and structure easily are conveyed to children
from new places and individuals. Furthermore, children have a chance to expand their knowledge
about varied cultures, the way people think, and life; as a result, this unparalleled condition may
result in the intellectual ability to evaluation evaluate alien situations. The latest surveys indicate that
many successful people are capable of making decisions in tough situations.
In conclusion, in my view living in a different country positively affects children in all aspects.
Obtaining new languages and being an open-minded and faster decision maker are just few examples
of many possible benefits.
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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a
negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
After the revolution in technology, providing a unique situation has been provided in which people
have more opportunities to experience living in other countries for various purposes, particularly find a
job. Whereas many subscribe to the belief that immigrant children may experience difficulties that
have a psychological impact on them, others argue the positive effects are substantial.
Admittedly, relocating to other places means that considerable changes may occur. Initially, children
generally encounter plenty of unfamiliar situations that may contribute to insecurity which means that
they are constantly in fear of losing something in their minds. For instance, when a child moves to a
new place, he should leave their his old friends, and startingmaking a new circle of ones. Moreover,
their patriotic feeling and sense of belonging to their country could weaken since they miss a lot of
opportunities to celebrate their national events.
There is a deluge of merits of moving to different nationscountries for adolescents; the most
significant one is that a new language could be quickly acquired by constant exposure in an
environment. In other words, grammar, vocabulary, and structure easily are conveyed to children
from new places and individuals. Furthermore, children have a chance to expand their knowledge
about varied cultures, the way people think, and life; as a result, this unparalleled condition may
result in the intellectual ability to evaluation evaluate alien situations. The latest surveys indicate that
many successful people are capable of making decisions in tough situations.
In conclusion, in my view living in a different country positively affects children in all aspects.
Obtaining new languages and being an open-minded and faster decision maker are just few examples
of many possible benefits.
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Travelling2021-03-21T06:04:19+00:002021-03-21T06:04:19+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/549-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-29/3883-travellingHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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People benefit more from travelling in their own country than travelling to foreign countries.
Travelling broadens one's perspective towards the world. It adjusts desires with reality and confronts
individuals with the other ways of living. From ancient times, people were encouraged to travel, not only
within their home country but also the unseen foreign countries. However, some people believe that
spending time exploring their country would be more beneficial. I personally go for the second which is
travelling to foreign countries for the below mentioned reasons.
From my point of view, travelling to foreign countries can give you the opportunity to experience the
culture which cannot be found in your home country. People who are living in the same district tend to
have common thoughts and approaches towards the world. Confronting with a new culture is a great
source to expand one's outlook. For instance, a person coming from an industrialized country can find
his or her meaning of life in a less modern eastern country with a rich culture. He or she may find this
new culture full of happiness which is/may be rare in his or her country with all the emphasize emphasis
on money.
In addition, each region has its unique natural reservoirs and scenic landscapes. By only travelling
withing domestic regions, we are missing the chance of realizing the true beauty of Earth. Imagine if
Markopoulos marco polo refused to go for the unseen world and explore beyond his comfort zone. How
many beauties What a beauty would have been remained undiscovered.
In summation, I strongly believe that people should consider travelling to foreign countries due to the
importance of experiencing new cultures which can broaden their perspective and also to enjoy the
beautiful natural scenes that cannot be seen in their home countries. I am'm looking forward to
witnessing a new era in which/where travelling to foreign countries would be embraced warmly with by
people and facilitated specially for my home country.
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People benefit more from travelling in their own country than travelling to foreign countries.
Travelling broadens one's perspective towards the world. It adjusts desires with reality and confronts
individuals with the other ways of living. From ancient times, people were encouraged to travel, not only
within their home country but also the unseen foreign countries. However, some people believe that
spending time exploring their country would be more beneficial. I personally go for the second which is
travelling to foreign countries for the below mentioned reasons.
From my point of view, travelling to foreign countries can give you the opportunity to experience the
culture which cannot be found in your home country. People who are living in the same district tend to
have common thoughts and approaches towards the world. Confronting with a new culture is a great
source to expand one's outlook. For instance, a person coming from an industrialized country can find
his or her meaning of life in a less modern eastern country with a rich culture. He or she may find this
new culture full of happiness which is/may be rare in his or her country with all the emphasize emphasis
on money.
In addition, each region has its unique natural reservoirs and scenic landscapes. By only travelling
withing domestic regions, we are missing the chance of realizing the true beauty of Earth. Imagine if
Markopoulos marco polo refused to go for the unseen world and explore beyond his comfort zone. How
many beauties What a beauty would have been remained undiscovered.
In summation, I strongly believe that people should consider travelling to foreign countries due to the
importance of experiencing new cultures which can broaden their perspective and also to enjoy the
beautiful natural scenes that cannot be seen in their home countries. I am'm looking forward to
witnessing a new era in which/where travelling to foreign countries would be embraced warmly with by
people and facilitated specially for my home country.
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Armin, Literature2021-03-12T18:29:11+00:002021-03-12T18:29:11+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/548-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-22/3882-armin-literatureHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Some people say that school children should be mainly taught about the literature (e.g.
fiction and poetry) of their own country because it is more important than that of other
countries. To what extent do you agree?
Some people are of the opinion that pupils should be chiefly educated at local literature rather than
worldwide 's literature. I sympathize with the notion that students had better get accustomed to
international literature. However, there are some merits in the study of domestic literature, as will be
explained in this assay.
Due to globalization and the information age, everything hinges upon technology and
telecommunication in this day and age. School children can get the most of their lives; only if they are
taught global literature do they enable themselves to expand their communication with foreign people
and lay their hands on cutting-edge and recent data that could be utilitarian for them. As an illustration,
in first-world countries, school children have been studying curricula with respect to other countries'
literature; That is why they have a better comprehension of other foreigners than that of less-developed
countries.
If students are cognizant of the literature pertaining to the poem, fiction, culture of their own countries,
they will benefit from that. In fact, patriotism and a sense of belonging to their own countries might be a
product of learning indigenous literature. For example, in Iran, due to teaching students concerning
national literature, students take pride in their country profusely as it can be. As it can be rarely noticed
rarely in the nations that deal with national literature to such an extent.
To sum up, although a few advantages can be obtained by getting student school children acquainted
with the literature of their own countries, the study of Worldwide literature outstrips the opposite side.
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Some people say that school children should be mainly taught about the literature (e.g.
fiction and poetry) of their own country because it is more important than that of other
countries. To what extent do you agree?
Some people are of the opinion that pupils should be chiefly educated at local literature rather than
worldwide 's literature. I sympathize with the notion that students had better get accustomed to
international literature. However, there are some merits in the study of domestic literature, as will be
explained in this assay.
Due to globalization and the information age, everything hinges upon technology and
telecommunication in this day and age. School children can get the most of their lives; only if they are
taught global literature do they enable themselves to expand their communication with foreign people
and lay their hands on cutting-edge and recent data that could be utilitarian for them. As an illustration,
in first-world countries, school children have been studying curricula with respect to other countries'
literature; That is why they have a better comprehension of other foreigners than that of less-developed
countries.
If students are cognizant of the literature pertaining to the poem, fiction, culture of their own countries,
they will benefit from that. In fact, patriotism and a sense of belonging to their own countries might be a
product of learning indigenous literature. For example, in Iran, due to teaching students concerning
national literature, students take pride in their country profusely as it can be. As it can be rarely noticed
rarely in the nations that deal with national literature to such an extent.
To sum up, although a few advantages can be obtained by getting student school children acquainted
with the literature of their own countries, the study of Worldwide literature outstrips the opposite side.
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Niloo, Eating Restaurants or Cooking Home2021-03-12T18:28:59+00:002021-03-12T18:28:59+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/548-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-22/3881-niloo-eating-restaurants-or-cooking-homeHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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In areas where there are many restaurants, some people prefer to
buy their meals in restaurants very frequently, rather than cooking
and eating meals at home. Other people prefer to cook most of their
meals at home and only rarely eat in restaurants. Which one would
you choose why?
Hardly ever can anyone call into questions the significant role of food
in people's health in their life. The questions arise as to whether
eating at a restaurant for meals can be beneficial or cooking at
home. Even though nowadays people are coping with their hectic
lifestyle and having a meal at restaurants can be more effective for
them in terms of time-saving, personally where I want to choose
between these two options I would go for latter for some reasons
which I will explain at length in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and most obvious is, being healthier. In other words, a meal
which cookeds at home is healthier since it would include high
quality ingredients. The best example is, not only use do restaurants
use low-quality oil based on money-saving but also they use it for
many times which culminates in individuals' overweight. Therefore, it
goes without saying that cooking meals at home is more useful for
humans' health.
Another remarkable aspect which I should point out is about the fact
that eating at restaurants is not economically. In apposite words,
fundamentally, having high value-added-tax and giving tips makes
leads to losing a lot of money compared to cooking at home. Besides,
in my opinion cooking is one of the sources of escapism which is
conducive to expressing feelings. As we all know cooking is love.
Moreover, when I am cooking at home, I am away from hustle and
bustle of streets which means when I go out for eating at
restaurants, I almost always get stuck in traffic but by having a meal
at home I can vegging out/collapse in front of TV, so it is a given fact
that cooking at home is more convenient.In final analysis, although some people prefer to eat at restaurants
for their meals in terms ofdue to saving time, I strongly believe
otherwise maintaining that this mindset is nothing but a tunnelvision which ignores the importance of the abovementioned facts
and also from in my view the advantages of cooking at home greatly
outweigh the drawbacks and I behoove urge people to cook their
meals at home to save their money and being healthier.
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In areas where there are many restaurants, some people prefer to
buy their meals in restaurants very frequently, rather than cooking
and eating meals at home. Other people prefer to cook most of their
meals at home and only rarely eat in restaurants. Which one would
you choose why?
Hardly ever can anyone call into questions the significant role of food
in people's health in their life. The questions arise as to whether
eating at a restaurant for meals can be beneficial or cooking at
home. Even though nowadays people are coping with their hectic
lifestyle and having a meal at restaurants can be more effective for
them in terms of time-saving, personally where I want to choose
between these two options I would go for latter for some reasons
which I will explain at length in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and most obvious is, being healthier. In other words, a meal
which cookeds at home is healthier since it would include high
quality ingredients. The best example is, not only use do restaurants
use low-quality oil based on money-saving but also they use it for
many times which culminates in individuals' overweight. Therefore, it
goes without saying that cooking meals at home is more useful for
humans' health.
Another remarkable aspect which I should point out is about the fact
that eating at restaurants is not economically. In apposite words,
fundamentally, having high value-added-tax and giving tips makes
leads to losing a lot of money compared to cooking at home. Besides,
in my opinion cooking is one of the sources of escapism which is
conducive to expressing feelings. As we all know cooking is love.
Moreover, when I am cooking at home, I am away from hustle and
bustle of streets which means when I go out for eating at
restaurants, I almost always get stuck in traffic but by having a meal
at home I can vegging out/collapse in front of TV, so it is a given fact
that cooking at home is more convenient.In final analysis, although some people prefer to eat at restaurants
for their meals in terms ofdue to saving time, I strongly believe
otherwise maintaining that this mindset is nothing but a tunnelvision which ignores the importance of the abovementioned facts
and also from in my view the advantages of cooking at home greatly
outweigh the drawbacks and I behoove urge people to cook their
meals at home to save their money and being healthier.
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Niloo, Young LeisureTime Off School2021-03-12T18:28:32+00:002021-03-12T18:28:32+00:00https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/548-fridays-writing-workshop-1399/writing-workshop-friday-99-12-22/3880-niloo-young-leisuretime-off-schoolHamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-transitional.dtd">
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Some young people have free time in the evening after school or on
days off from school. Which of the following activities would be
most beneficial for young people (age 14-18) to do in their spare
time? Why?
-Gaining practical work experience either at a part time job or
by volunteering in the community
-Learning to play a sport
-Learning to play a musical instrument.
Hardly ever can anyone call into questions the significant role
of students' activities in their future life. The questions arose
arise as to which of these options can be beneficial for their
life. Even though all of these choices have positive effect on
young children's life, I think the second ones can be more
effective for some reasons which I will explain at length in the
subsequent paragraphs.
The first and most obvious is, in today's modern life the
number of technology users is increasing especially at in/during
adolescent adolescence (with the advent of the technology
especially the internet the number of it users is raising rising
especially at in adolescentadolescence) which causes their
overweighing overweight that derives from inactivity, so
playing sport at in their free time can decrease it. In other
words, nowadays young children have a less physical activities
activity because of being involving involved with a modern
technology, so learning to play a sport makes them gravitates
them to have more healthy life which impacts not only on their
bodies but also their minds. Therefore, it goes without saying
that playing a sport for leisure time can release young people
from hustle and bustle of life for some hours which hasadvantages for them based on mental and physical health
(bodily).
Another aspect which I should point it out is about escapism. In
apposite words, fundamentally children by playing sports on
their days off from school can take the edge off an education
pressure which is vital for being neither discouragement nor
tired from studying. Besides, playing sports can be useful for
teenagers to not only boost their creativity but also also being
more socialize, thereby meeting new people and making novel
friends. From my own experience, when I was at high school, I
had quite tough time owing to the fact that I had to take a
university entrance exam, so there was plenty of pressure on
me from myselfmy own and my family which by doing yoga I
could clear my mind and not lose my patient patience in my
goals.
In final analysis, although some people believe that the
advantages of the other two other points is greatly outweigh
than this one, I strongly believe otherwise on the basis of the
reasons that were mentioned above and personally, I urge
behoove parents to encourage their young children to play
sports on their days off from school.
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Some young people have free time in the evening after school or on
days off from school. Which of the following activities would be
most beneficial for young people (age 14-18) to do in their spare
time? Why?
-Gaining practical work experience either at a part time job or
by volunteering in the community
-Learning to play a sport
-Learning to play a musical instrument.
Hardly ever can anyone call into questions the significant role
of students' activities in their future life. The questions arose
arise as to which of these options can be beneficial for their
life. Even though all of these choices have positive effect on
young children's life, I think the second ones can be more
effective for some reasons which I will explain at length in the
subsequent paragraphs.
The first and most obvious is, in today's modern life the
number of technology users is increasing especially at in/during
adolescent adolescence (with the advent of the technology
especially the internet the number of it users is raising rising
especially at in adolescentadolescence) which causes their
overweighing overweight that derives from inactivity, so
playing sport at in their free time can decrease it. In other
words, nowadays young children have a less physical activities
activity because of being involving involved with a modern
technology, so learning to play a sport makes them gravitates
them to have more healthy life which impacts not only on their
bodies but also their minds. Therefore, it goes without saying
that playing a sport for leisure time can release young people
from hustle and bustle of life for some hours which hasadvantages for them based on mental and physical health
(bodily).
Another aspect which I should point it out is about escapism. In
apposite words, fundamentally children by playing sports on
their days off from school can take the edge off an education
pressure which is vital for being neither discouragement nor
tired from studying. Besides, playing sports can be useful for
teenagers to not only boost their creativity but also also being
more socialize, thereby meeting new people and making novel
friends. From my own experience, when I was at high school, I
had quite tough time owing to the fact that I had to take a
university entrance exam, so there was plenty of pressure on
me from myselfmy own and my family which by doing yoga I
could clear my mind and not lose my patient patience in my
goals.
In final analysis, although some people believe that the
advantages of the other two other points is greatly outweigh
than this one, I strongly believe otherwise on the basis of the
reasons that were mentioned above and personally, I urge
behoove parents to encourage their young children to play
sports on their days off from school.
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