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Amirhossein, Talented People

2021-04-10T16:43:56+00:00

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Anna, Children`s Decision

2021-04-10T16:43:46+00:00

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. There is a notion that children should be allowed to choose their decisions such as what they wear, eat or select for their hobby personally. Others believe this trend is more likely to help children just consider themselves and become selfish people in society. On the one hand, when parents and teachers allow children to choose their daily issues, children are more likely to learn to be independent people. To put it clearly, children who have been allowed to make their choices will feel both a keen sense of responsibility and self-confidence that are the vital factors to in become becoming an independent person. Take children who are allowed to choose their clothes as an example; firstly, they should consider the weather and Predict it for the following hours. Secondly, they try to match their clothes together so they have to consider these factors carefully that not only will they make them more independent, but they also feel more responsible when they are shopping or taking care of their clothes. On the other hand, if children always do not let their parents or teachers guide them sometimes in their choices, they will increase chances of becoming selfish. That is to say, they are always concerned just about what they want, and they do not consider other people. For example, the family has been invited to a party to whichthat they should wear special clothes or a tuxedo, so if their child insists on wearing his favorite clothes, the family could face a challenging situation due to his selfishness. In conclusion, it is essential for children to learn to make choices in their day-to-day life and parents must teach them to respect the decisions and choices of others.

Gelareh, Bad Situation

2021-04-10T16:43:37+00:00

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Some people accept a bad situation and they do not want to try to change it such as life or work, but some people try to find the best way to improve/ameliorate these situations. In my opinion, we have to try and improve such a ssituation. Some people live in a bad situation, they get used to it/these situations so they think it is not possible to change them. Sometimes, someone change wash their mind about a culture or rule and they do them for many years therefore they accept it without any thinking. For instant, I work in a company and I am not satisfied with my job but I continue working there for several years. Why? Because my manager says this company is the best one in Iran and you I cannot find a better one or he destroys my confidence then I cannot leave this company and find a new job. After several years the life is routine and it is very difficult for me to do take/run risks. These people do not enjoy their life after sometimes and maybe suffer fromget psychological problems. On the other hand, some people try to improve a situation and all the time they are fighting and doing/engage in risky activities in their life. They never get tired and they believe they are successful in their life. For example, in Japan after the second war, they were living in miserable conditions/a very bad situation and they lost plenty of/a lot of many equipment but they tried and they believed they couldcan rebuild/reconstructmake their country another time and better than last time. In conclusion, I believe people have to try and improve this situation until so that they can make build the best life for themselves/ theirself.

Mina Ghafari, Reading

2021-04-10T16:43:29+00:00

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Is reading fiction a waste of time? Why or why not? Explain your answer using specific reasons and examples to support your position. In this writer’s opinion, if you think that you’ll waste your time by reading fiction and unreal stories, you had have ignored many aspects of human beings, such as imagination and dreaming. These two notable sides are more important than they might seem. Human flying is a case in point, as we all know it was an unbelievable story that came true many years ago and imagination was the first step of this achievement. Stories help us to improve our imaginations and to meet new goals, as we’re now living in our ancestors’ dreams. Fiction can brought bring us a fresher and more active imagination and further an innovative mind. Fiction also helps us to understand ourselves and each other, with by telling many stories about other human thoughts and lives and bringing us into the inner world of its characters, so that we can see the world by their vision and understand others’ situation/other situations. Stories can make the world a better place which means that we will be kinder and more understanding with the information came coming through them and itwhich will influence the whole world. To sum up, our life is not based on fiction, but it will be so attractive with it. Stories would be vital for a more colorful life and for being a nicer and more creative person.

Mohamad Hossein, Money

2021-04-10T16:43:19+00:00

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Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade they get in school. Agree or disagree? It is a controversial question whether to encourage our children with money to get good marks in school or not. Some parents firmly oppose this idea because they think that their children ought to study their lessons spontaneouslyof their own accord. Nevertheless, I personally believe that it is an outstanding idea because of three reasons. At the beginning of this, I speculate it is an appropriate approach because reinforcements like money have an important impact on the learning procedure of our children. If we offer them money we will prompt them to love studying their lessons and science more and more. I can illustrate it with a real example. My father always gave me some money if I have been acquiring acquired impressing success. Thereby he constantly has been inducing induced me to be innovative and be a conscientious student. Secondly, money gives children a sense of control and they will attain self-confidence. They can prove themselves by doing work like studying. In the future, they will have more self-esteem and will have this belief that if they endeavor hard they will reach the zenith of their profession. Eventually, If children love books they will spend their money for scientific purposes. So, if we give them more money they can have more access to vast knowledge by buying books. In the conclusion, we can say that not only is offering money to children is not harmful to them, But ratheralso it can help them to prosper in their academic goals.

Mohsen, Punishment Allowed or Not

2021-04-10T16:43:09+00:00

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? This essay argues that, whether as a parent or teacher, penalization is not an acceptable method of teaching kids/childreninfants how to become a good member of society. It reflects rage and causes different serious problems later in theirkids’ life; instead, there must be good role-models around them to show them what’s good and what’s not. On the other hand, throughout the last century, researches have shown how this sort of negative behavioral patterns can impact the unconscious mind. Firstly, parents should teach their kids how to act “right”. After that, kids can differ differentiate between what’s correct and what’s not. However, to teach a child is to show him. It’s said that humans absorb 70% of their information through their eyes. Thus, in order to nurture/civilizeing kids, parents must behave while kids are around. Kids mirror adults’ actions. So, if there’s someone who should get punished, it’s not the child. Secondly, there is plenty of researches on “psychological problems of adults”, rooting rooted into their childhood. Despite regardless of how people usually treat their kids, there’s there are always memories buried deep in their minds until their deathbed. These memories can include danger, loneliness and not being loveable or they can contain safety, love and attention. It must be considered that too much too positive memories might lead to laziness and narcissism so it must be controlled. However, negativity have has a much bigger effect on the brain. It can destroy people’s personality on the long run. Low selfesteem, unnecessaryily attachments or detachments, anger angriness and other anti-social behaviors are mostly caused by punishment in early ages. To conclude, this essay disagrees that triggering negative feelings after a kid’s bad misconduct may lead him to act better in society. Instead, infants they can be thought taught painlessly and more effectively by observing and mirroring good behaviors of adults surrounding them; The better they are, the better kids become.

Niki, Natural Talent or Training

2021-04-10T16:42:59+00:00

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Nature/nurture In this day and age, it has been a common practice for plenty of children to be in keen competition so as to excel at specific skills, so the importance of innate talent or efficient training is the main issue for most of the parents and teachers which should be analyzed carefully since it will affect the individuals’ future life considerably. The question of which one takes priority is a serious concern for many…. First and foremost, I opine that the attitude approach of education systems towards pupils’ abilities has been fortunately upgraded all over the world during recent years, particularly in developed countries. In other words, they believe most of the students have competence of acquiring new skills and techniques in a variety of fields to get professional through quality training and hard work irrespective of natural aptitude. In addition, teachers and parents have much of a role to play in giving positive reinforcement to children in order to put their every effort into boosting such skills. Therefore, in terms of success, not only can children be trained well to achieve their goals but also they may outperform their counterparts who are merely genuinely talented. However, some groups of people argue that becoming professional in a various array of specializations is inextricably bound up in innate talent of individuals. Their firm conviction is that only when everyone has natural talent and aptitude, will they be quite successful in their professions. In fact, this factor drives them dramatically and leads to paving the path to enhance their ability which in turn brings about outstanding features, so this essential factor cannot be denied. By and large, from my standpoint, interest is another major factor by which everybody will become motivated so as to succeed in each field. Therefore, even though the mentioned items meaning effective training and natural talent positively affect the children’s prosperity, I strongly believe instinctive/intrinsic interest is the main reason why individuals become master at their specialization faster because it inspires them significantly. Therefore, recognition of children’s own strengths and fostering them is are a vital factor which should be fulfilled carefully at schools and in immediate family. Last but not least, most of the successful people are hard-working ones, although even without specific natural aptitude, so this phenomenon has a crucial role in this regard. Consequently, further to the above explanation, all the mentioned factors have their own effects in succeeding and they should be applied along with each other to provide the best productivity and outcome of individuals. As a result, in my opinion, the role of both training and hard work generally outweighs that of the innate talent.

Niloo, Advertising

2021-04-10T16:42:50+00:00

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For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising. Agree or disagree? August 2020/July2019 Hardly ever can anyone call into question the significant role of advertising in running a business. The question arises as to whether by investing money in what ways a business can reach success and spending huge costs on advertising by businessman can achieve that end or not. I personally think advertising is the only way which can be beneficial, if created correctly and some main reasons persuade me to put forward this view which I will explain at length in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, advertising is the best way to introduction introduce of a new product to the market which gravitates people to purchase purchasing it. In simple terms, individuals cannot get familiar with novel goods regardless of advertising. For instance, I afraid to try new products, so without advertising I never buy a new shampoo which I see in the store. Besides, advertising stimulates people to purchase the manufactured goods. In other words, people would be encouraged to buy materials by whereby watching their advertisement which is conducive to increasing sales. Nowadays people veg out in front of TV more often which shows various kinds of advertisements, so people by watching colorful commercials are motivates motivated to purchasingpurchase, thanks to technology. The best example is, children are regular customers of toys, so they force their parents to buy everything they see in the advertisement. Therefore, it goes without saying that advertising not only introduces manufactures to the market but also raises sales which are boththese two points are critical to the success of any business.Second of all, advertising is a peaceful way to defeat rivals owing to the fact that it is an appropriate opportunities for people to compare diverse goods. In apposite words, fundamentally if a product is produced from two different factories, people can compare it them with each other, thereby advertising can find a more suitable option. For example, iPhone and Samsung which are longtime competitors, can boast their products strengths to each other by advertising and people can have a reasonable choice based on their interest. Moreover, advertising can eliminates customers' concern which is a one of the important points of being successful. Most buyers are doubt which the product is worth to buying or not especially if it is expensive, so advertising could remove the concern. For instance, I decided to buy a new laptop but it was extremely important to me that it be portable, thus I bought last series of Microsoft laptops by watching its advertisement. Hence, as is clear advertising not only removes users' concern but also crushes rivals which are practical issues to being successful at different businesses. To recap, on the basis of reasons that I were mentioned above, I think advertising is a beneficial way to being successful at each business and I behoove urge businessman businessmen to invest a lot of money in it.

Niloofar Karami, Education

2021-04-10T16:42:39+00:00

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? In the modern era, education plays a major role in every individual’s life. The controversial question which arises here is whether the focus of curriculums should be on practical skills or on learning facts. As far as I am concerned, studying facts and rules and memorizing them will be of no use in any kind of occupation. Therefore, I firmly believe that not only should educational institutions cover the academic subjects but also they have to prepare the means of employing theories in life. The following paragraphs will illustrate my perspective. The first aspect to point out is that learning facts from a textbook will not guaranty that one can use it in the right place and right time because they may be forgotten soon after memorizing them. Accordingly, receptive information should turn into productive knowledge by practicing right after learning, researching and analyzing. Take a personal experience as an example., back in university, I had gained a top score on tunnel engineering course and a couple of years later I was assigned to design the main subway tunnel of our city in my company. I couldn’t remember a word! I mastered the course again for that project and despite passing years from then, I can still remember the whole procedure and even the details. Another noteworthy point to mention is that there are a wide variety of jobs that should be learned by experiencing and using hands. As an example, for a career in plumbing, a vocational course is absolutely essential. Hence, children in schools should be susceptible exposed to different kinds of academic and vocational courses so they will best recognize their passion and goal for the future. On the other hand, in higher studies, on-the-job trainings and internships should be included in all majors. To sum up, enough time and energy should be allocated on to practicing and using skills in graduate and undergraduate studies. It is highly recommended that politicians and authorities pay special attention to educational programs because it is the main path to the prosperity od of a country.

Parisa Barani, Right and Wrong

2021-04-10T16:42:30+00:00

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Topic It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Nowadays, from many individual‘s perspectives, it is a must for young children to understand the difference between right and wrong which could be learned during as a result of a punishment. I agree to a certain extent that disciplinary actions would have many effects on a child’s behavior. however, Being strict parents and teachers and persuade persuading young charges to have good manners by physical punishments can have negative results. Physical punishment is not likely to pruduce that result. Firstly, Once a child is punished for a mistake they he will never try to do the same thing again because they he will be in fear that again they will be beaten. A recent survey was formed between two groups, one group had kids who were never penalized for their mistakes while the other had kids who were punished whenever they misbehaved, so it was vivid that kids who were disciplined earlier for their misbehaviors were behaving more politely unlike the other group of kids. My impression is that physical punishment is one of the parenting tools that can cause more trouble than good. Instead of teaching children how to behave in different situations, adults just make them feel embarrassed to make a mistake and it can lead to being unsuccessful in their professional life in the future. Secondly, children tend to behave like their elder’s elders so parents and tutors should watch their actions in front of them and learning learn various skills which can be useful in manner cultivating. For instance, if a child behaves wrong their parents and teachers can start with talking and explaining the disadvantage of that deed/behavior/ethic and try to encourage him to focus on the beautiful traits that he has. Many of the parents believe that after using these skills, their offspring/toddlers become more considerate. However, healthy punishment (such as sanctions and confinement) is recommended on many occasions, in that cause children become more responsible for their acts. To conclude, most of the time punishment is a wrong method of raising a little one which brings about problems in their life. By contrast, if parents work through the problem and put time for their children, it is proven to be very effective.