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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why? This essay argues that although schools play a crucial role in the development process of one’s character, most of the time, it is observed that the person’s character is massively impacted by his or her family and friends and when is it comes to being a good citizen, personality always comes before education. The main duty of schools must be to help students to experience different social communication skills in a safe and somehow isolated environment. Besides, schools teach pupils some topics such as mathematics and physics so they can get educated enough to play a productive role later in society. but in schools, the science on its own should not be assumed as the final purpose of going to school. In from this point of view, teachers, parents and siblings are all responsible for a kid’s misbehaviors. They are all involved in the process of nurturing the child at least to the point he or she enters high school. After that, it is hard to develop a student’s personality traits as he or she now has some friends having a huge impact on him or her. On the other hand, if a student doesn’t have a well-developed foundation for his/her academic career before getting into college or university, he/she would face serious obstacles finding a decent career to pursue. However, adults are able to overcome such issues by applying hard work and discipline which are personality traits obtained in their childhood. To conclude, the main goal of sending kids to junior schools and middle schools must be character development instead of learning scientific subjects. Later in high school, where youths’ character is well shaped, schools may pay more attention to science rather than developing students’ personality.