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Standing at the turn of the new century, we observe that technology is changinges the world. Numerous people work every day and they try to live a comfortable life. A question which is the matter of concern is whether we are happier than our ancestors? I am, to a great extent, of the opinion that we are more satisfiedying than our fathers. To begin with, no one can ignore the satisfaction offered by technology. Broadly speaking, technology facilitates life. We have much many equipment which helps us to live better. To be more specific we use automobiles, airplanes, cellphones and the Internet. All This equipment helps us to travel very fast,. we can speak with our friends in other countries. Computers work rapidly, so we can have more leisure time to spend at our free will. New schools are more advanced than the previous ones schools, so our children can learn more and more. Our modern medical centers help us to have better medical care and those increase our longevity. Of equal importance is the fact that Happiness depends on ourselves. Simply stated, if people try to be glad, they will find it in their lives. Although every person has different difficulties in his life,. he must try to solve problems and live to be delighted. We need sport and other positive activities action to make a happy life. Psychologists can help us to understand our conditions and succeed in our lives. However, just as the English proverb goes, "every coin has two sides", the new era has some problems such as stress which annoy every one. To put it in a nutshell, from my perspective we are happier than our ancestors. To recapitulate the reasons, not only does technology facilitates our lives, but also happiness depends on ourselves and it is independent of time

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Health and Fitness Problem,Vahid rafiee https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/515-health-and-fitness-problem-vahid-rafiee https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/515-health-and-fitness-problem-vahid-rafiee

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In some counties average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Nowadays, obesity is one of the problematic issues in many parts of the world. Not only can obesity endanger health levels, but also it can decrease the fitness levels. The main culprit of this problem might be traced to the quality of foods that we eat besides our lifestyles. Firstly, our lifestyles in comparison with the past have changed. For example, Men and women are obligated to works for more than eight or nine hours in a day, so they do not have not ample time for domesticity and cooking. Moreover, to the what extent that I know, in some decades ago, there were no fast foods and people used to eat only some fresh foods such as vegetables and meat that they had cultivated and produced. Secondly, by taking into account some measures such as raising the awareness of people about grave consequences of consuming fast foods, we can solve this problem. It is worth knowing here that scientists have concluded that the rate of some cancers has been increasing due to consuming processed produced foods. Also, they have indicated that every year about to 30 thousand people die because of consuming only 80 grams processed produced food in a day. Therefore, individuals especially those are obesityprone gluttonous should avoid fast foods and others should be conversant with the detrimental effects of eating fast foods on their health. Furthermore, governments should monitor the quality of fast food producers. And if they find any factory ineligible, they have to mandate to ban them. To sum up, from the author's perspective, people should restrict junk foods and consume more vegetables and fresh meat, but it cannot be carried out if individuals do not know how much these kinds of foods are to the detriment of their health.

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Modern Technology,Ayda Pourimani https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/516-modern-technology-ayda-pourimani https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/516-modern-technology-ayda-pourimani

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Num 83 Culture are complex set of knowledge belief art morals laws custom . Modern technology is creating a different world with different cultures. Firstly, it independent of place has without place. in other words , no matter where you are where in the world, technology lifts these limitations limited. Secondly, It has different types of communication and finally it is compressed time. Nowadays modern technology such as social media are available all around the world. I think it is not limited to a certain place it's without place, people can become familiar with language, culture and customs of others without visiting to those places, they can watch documentariesy on in TV or read articles on the in internet so that some word, manner or lifestyle style way of life or clothing are universally or sometimes create a new style for example the style of clothing can be combined between to cultures so it can create a new style sometimes people copy/imitate cheated of celebrities'y manners, they change of their life style without they visitinged them. Have you ever seen this group of people who blindly follow pay of actors? With modern technology you can participate in meetings or congresses conclave without having you have presence in those places you use technology such as Skype ,… for participatinge there The type of communication is different. I think language and dialect are much changed when compared to the past. Today people prefer to use the virtual world to communicate with others such as Telegram , viber ,…. So in people's dialogues dialoged they people use new styles of language for communication, these covering stickers to express feeling or use abbreviations synopsis word or statements in between have created a some new type of relationship which in the past was meaningless. I think time doesn't matter in modern life. It helps to live much more easily easier and saveing time and you don't have any limitation limited in your life you. for example, you can buy something at any time of the day with new technology or prepare food in 15 minutes.

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Modern Technology,Golnaz Favaedi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/517-modern-technology-golnaz-favaedi https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/517-modern-technology-golnaz-favaedi

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Modern technology is rapidly changing the world's living standards which that results in creating a single world culture. New technologies such as the Internet, television, electronic media, transportation, etc has have a great impact on creating a similar culture all around the world. Below Bellow I will list my reasons to support my opinion. First of all, the Internet and e‐mail have changed the way people communicate with to each other and have made make it easy. The Internet has many benefits. It is a new means of communication, a fast access to information and news. We have a great opportunity to find out more about other countries and their history.People communicate with each other, share their ideas, happiness and difficulties. My brother lives in another country. I always keep in touch with him by the internet. We send a messages to each other every time we want and sometimes we have video chat via the net, so by internet.so it has facilitated our life (makes our life easy.) Second of all, the modern means of transportation allows people to move from one place to another place very quickly.we can go downtown in our with own car, by taxi, bus and even metro. Or we can travel and visit around the world by airplane, train or ship. Another use of transportation is saving surviving people's life in emergenciesy time in the least possible time, so technology accelerates our life. Finally, as a result of all mentioned above there are is no boundaries between/among countries, their traditions and customs. Many people migrate during their lives. Some of them are looking for a better place to live in,. others want to get new experience and knowledge or just pleasure, so . So, many families are created by between people from different countries, so .so technology causes link all countries to come to together

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Successful Sports Professionals' Salaries,Marzieh Javadipour https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/518-successful-sports-professionals-salaries-marzieh-javadipour https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/118-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-09-26/518-successful-sports-professionals-salaries-marzieh-javadipour

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successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair discuss both these view and give your own opinion people who choose sports as their occupation and follow it as a professional player make much more money ,since players have limited time in their work‐life and they are more susceptible to injury during their professional‐life, one camp thinks it is totally fair, in comparison to those people who have important jobs and have their huge responsibility in their occupation especially those whose work entails a lot of risk and its dangerous of their job, it is undeniable that they should be satisfied with their income. other people believe that this it is unfair. they earn less than professional players. On In the one hand, it can be said that professional players have a short period for their professional life, even if after that they select to be as a coach in their skill they cannot can not earn as highly as their stardom professional life and one important point is provided that they stay healthy they can continue their occupation, in other words they are faced with a lot of limitations within their work‐life time. On the other hand those people with important jobs have their ups and downs and many problems. to put it simply, they have their own difficulty in their field, for instance surgeons, who are welleducated and well‐skilled persons, they need many qualifications in their work‐life. Likewise, other jobs that save humans' human's life. as a result, it is the first thing that they should be pleased with their salary to sum up, from my point of my view, I think it is better if there is balance to remain balance to of incomes for of each job., I ,myself, believe that each occupation has its difficulty.

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