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Nowadays many have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative and positive impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? In this modern era there are many available hightech computers on a broad basis and big/great number of children who are extremely keen on playing video games. In this essay some indicators that can produce negative and positive effects will be discussed, followed by recommendations to address the issue at hand. The first and perhaps the most important positive effect (in/with/of) playing video games would be improvement of handeye coordination and visual skills in children. Some games can require a great deal of visual ability and handeye coordination. The player should coordinate cooperate the brain's reaction with his/her hands and fingertips movement. Another positive effect could be teaching children to learn team working when they are playing with others. In this regard, the player should be aware of his duty during the game or doing his/her best through the game. On the other hand, One of the negative consequences of playing computer games would be an increase in aggressive behavior. Computer games with a violent content could lead to misconduct savage behavior in children. Since children's minds are ready to form, they it can be too effective on them in a way that they follow/choose/copy the hero of the games as a role model of behavior and learning his actions in the game, so it can effectively influence them. Another negative aspect could be social isolation. In fact, those children who spend a lot of time to playing video game have no time for playing outdoors or making friends. Therefore, they have fewer less friends than those children who devoted less time to playing video games. The former problem can be effectively reduced by parents. They are able to supervise their children such that . In a way that, it permits them to play for playing one/1 or 2/two hours twice a week and control the time that they are playing. The latter problem would be decrease by combating against those companies that provide the games with a violent content which can aggravate improve the negative effects on children and parents should attempt to replace them it with instructive ones/games. To put it in a nutshell, from my point of view, regardless of advantages and disadvantages of this issue, parents are the most important factors in shaping their children's behavior., if playing video games influences their children in seriously negative way, then So they should survey it meticulously and do their best, as they are responsible for it.

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Some say that for any country hosting an international sports event such as the Olympic Games is costly, inefficient and is a waste of money, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. A wide range of people believe that spending a budget on international sports events like the World Cup or Olympic games is a kind of wasting money and governments can invest this amount of money in on social welfare or invest to create new job opportunities while some are against this idea and believe that hosting such events has a lot of financial benefits besides its cultural positive points. In this essay I am trying to compare both viewpoints and at the last paragraph, I will share my own idea regarding this subject. In some parts of the world and to be more specific in developing countries most people believe that spending on international sports events is not unnecessary so important while people are suffering from lack of basic human needs. They defend their viewpoints reasoning that the governments have to spend country's budget on infrastructures to attack on poverty, provide people with suitable shelter, clean water, public health insurance, welfare and services like these. By spending on sports events, government cannot do not afford to spend on the mentioned services. However, While some others do not agree with the idea above and believe that spending on such events will lead to economic prosperity. The answer is simple and straight, first of all the event owner dedicates an amount of money to the country wherein the event is supposed to be held and with which the they must renew or build appropriate sports complexes, hotels to accommodate sports teams and people who will come to see the games. It is on the host country to provide proper transportation from the residential area to the place where the games are held and all the mentioned items are some sort of investment and will create new jobs and improve the infrastructure of the countries. I personally believe that not only is spending on the sports events a kind of financial investment but also it is kind of positive investment. The host country will gain an acceptable profit from the sports tourists who come to the country and the economy wheel starts running. Local retailers can sell their products and small businesses will grow and these are just a few benefits I could write here and I think we do not have to forget that by hosting an international sports event the infrastructure of the country will be improved and the human's basic needs will be provided automatically.

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Standing at the turn of the new century, we observe that businesses are developing very fast. One important factor, which helps every business, is an advertisements. Advertisements include all age groups. A question, which is the matter of concern, is whether children's advertisements are is helpful for them. I am, to a great extent of the opinion that the media must not involve advertisements for children. Although advertisements help our economy economic to flourishing, those must not be used for kids. To begin with, our kids cannot detect goods' goods quality. Broadly speaking, when a child watches a television teaser, music and visual effects are very important for him. Many of them are attracted to cartoon's charactersistics of these advertisements. To be more specific different toy's factories spend millions of dollars on their advertisements. This helps them to develop their sales and overcome their competitors. All of them follow their benefits and they forget our kids' health. They try to sell more and more and an appealing teaser gives them what which they want. As an illustration, we can see this at many kids' food advertisements whose quality which children do not know anything about their qualities. Of equal importance is the fact that many goods' goods prices are not economical and familiesy cannot pay their expenses. Simply stated, you can find better products with lower prices. To be more specific every company raises rises prices when it appropriates a huge budget for commercial teasers. When you search in stores, you will find economic goods for which you must not pay exorbitant prices. for those. Although our offspring think these products are superior, we know that they those are not economical. However, what I stated cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. As an illustration, sometimes commercial announcements present exceptional products which are economical and have high qualities. To put it in a nutshell, governments must forbid children's advertisements. To wrap it all up, not only do our offspring not know about goods' goods quality, but also some products are not economical.

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