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Criminals, Amir Adel

2017-05-23T17:56:13+00:00

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Many criminals after serving their time behind bars usually commit crimes again. Why do you think it is so? Give causes and your solution to it. Today, the society's viewpoint on criminals and their rights as a citizens has changed and people are more concerned about this part of the community who owing to known or unknown reasons have to do something wrong or illegal/engage in illicit activities. However, although many methods have been tested in backing these people, the official statistics manifest that a tremendous part of prisoners repeat their criminal behaviour.(reoffend) In the first step, we should review our punishment's methods. For many years, we have sent offenders to jail to punish and keep away them away from society but we had not thought about its effectiveness and in fact, except some advanced countries, others lack have not have any practical plan for this period. Obviously, culprits are required to be been trained during their sentence,. hHowever, the question is that what the kind of training? Governments and institutes must dedicate a budget for empowering offenders to new, useful skills which will give them more opportunities after being released from prison or in some cases like tackling domestic violence, we need some psychologists who help perpetrators to understand their mental problems and control them. Monitoring and supporting criminals after ending their sentence is the importantly, next important, step. When we free these people in society, where usually no one supports them and all the circumstances are available for them to turn to crime again (situations are provided to absorb them again to the crime area), it should not be expected that prisoners convert to the normal citizens. Someone who has been recently released, needs demand to care like a teenager who is faced with a lot of, new problems and in this trend Police, social services, and voluntary agencies are responsible for to these vulnerable people to start a new life. In conclusion, although all reasons why someone turns to crime again have not been identified entirely, I believe that understanding of the real ex-criminals' demand and problems and protecting them whether during punishment or after it are the main solutions for the victims of circumstances.

Field of Study for University Students, Ramin Sh

2017-05-23T17:56:00+00:00

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Cambridge IELTS 10 (Test 2) Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion. The field of study which people choose at the university can strongly affect their future and even their life style. While many researchers believe that students must choose their major based on their own interest, considering future perspective before starting any studies is really/seriously/emphatically/especially recommended by others. I personally believe that choosing our study destination based on our talents, capabilities and maybe/perhaps our previous experience would play the role as a motivator for guiding us through the study path. Despite the right of freedom in choosing the field Files of study, from the view point of many scholars' viewpoint, being able to match that with the future needs and issues in our country is really/extremely important. By having a look and trying to predict the future conditions, we will be able to have a more favorable/better situation in both job opportunities and even in our personal life. According to new findings more than 26 Percent of graduated university graduates students, even in must most developed countries, ought to migrate to other cities or countries for recruitment and higher/better income. Whereas paying attention to our future context of our country is important, choosing a field of study which is fits to our personality, talents and other characteristics is really important. For instance, there are a lot of medicine students who quit their studies because they have blood phobia/otherwise known as hemophobia or many Introverts persons leave their researches unfinished on the psychological majors. To put it in a nutshell, by letting students to choose their field of study, we will help them to find a suitable major which would suit/fit them and even we will help them to have more self-confidence but having a glance on the future could help them to mademake wisely decision.

Rent-Buy Home, Maryam Ghavamian

2017-05-23T17:55:48+00:00

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Some people prefer renting than buying a home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting your home? It is true that some people decide to rent a home for their life instead of buying one for living which definitely has some benefits and drawbacks for each case. Living in a rented home could have some benefits for the person/occupant .Firstly, these groups are free to live in every region of the town and they do not have to limit themselves just to a specific area, so if they change their job, they could easily move to the vicinity of their company which is considerably beneficial to the personal time management wasting in traffic. Secondly, if they are not happy from with the home or the neighbours, they do not have to tolerate the current situation. Consequently, they can find a far more convenient place with the desired facilities triggering the happiness and the inspiration in the life. Living in different types of accommodation during the life gives the opportunity to know more people and experience a richer social relationship. It is undeniable that renting an apartment is expensive .Every month we pay an un nonrefundable rent .Buying a house is economical even if we afford it with a loan ,although we have to repay it back each month, after a specific time we will have our own home for retired years. On the other hand, we have the possibility of planning the decorations according to as our style, while in the rented homes due to constantly moving we cannot perform achieve it. In conclusion, both above cases are dependent to on our life style and our characteristic .Living in a renteding home is expensive but most of the people are happy to experience from experiencing different places near their work., On the other hand, buying a house is economical and also contributes to happiness in retired age but limits us to a specific region.

Study Abroad, Nazak

2017-05-23T17:55:36+00:00

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you Think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems? Recent years have witnessed the growing number of students going abroad to have the chance of a higher quality education. Although studying overseas has various issues to tackle, I believe the advantages will eventually overcome the drawbacks. That developed countries consist of numerous, world-known, successful universities which are dreamed- destination for smart students is an undeniable fact. Many students try their best to reach one of these study and research centers in which they it has provided high-level facilities for students which is do not exists in developing and undeveloped countries. I consider this to be the first and the most significant benefit of moving to a foreign country for studying. Graduating from a popular/well-reputed/prestigious university or college helps people to find better/decent jobs opportunities. It is also This also is indisputable that having a better career leads to a more comfortable, wealthy life. Moreover, moving to another country helps youths grow up faster. They learn to live undependably independently and cope with all the living issues thoroughly on their own. For instance, they have to cook, go shopping, rent a house and pay the bills which all result in transforming them from a young person to a mature one. Besides, by living in a new country not only do the students expand their knowledge of life and its problems, also they learn different cultures and customs belonging to the destination country and the new international friends while they become an expert on a foreign language. On the other hand, considering all advantages above, we should mention some disadvantages that this new life style can bring. Namely, some of the new arrivals, specifically those who comecame from a very different culture or from undeveloped/developing countries, may not be able to deal with the new situation which may leads to homesickness and worse than that, depression. Even moreFurthermore, studying a major in an unfamiliar language has its own hardships. What's more, studying abroad is extremely expensive and perhaps is not affordable to many (for everyone's pocket). Sometimes the new students have to work in night shifts in order to pay the education's fees.Generally speaking, if a student is determined to promote his/her future life by studyding in a high-level college or university abroad, he/she should tackle all the problems that this choice may contain when the merits are outweigh its the downsides of it.

Teaching, Sara Kasaei

2017-05-23T17:55:24+00:00

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? tThroughout the recent decades, teaching has become a less in demand demanding a job compared to other careers due to various reasons. The moot question to be addressed is what measures could be implemented to encourage the youth to choose teaching especially in higher grades like high school. I opine that requiring lots of energy as well as earning low-salaries are the two major factors of this reluctance. The former indicates asserts that the process of educating is so overwhelming specifically in secondary school in that it necessitates so many hours of preparing for the upcoming subjects for each course and marking the papers. Moreover, the young generation has become more informed than that before thanks to vast access to the Internet. Communicating with these kids demands a huge amount of adaptation to their ideology and interests. The latter is commonly postulated as its unfair income. Unlike ordinary employees who receive a regularly convenient wage, school teachers' earning could hardly cover a decent life. Hence, they are constantly under a financially huge burden and stress. That governments should invest in this field for the sake of the whole community is indisputable. Allocating funds to the teaching-related university majors could usefully contribute to more tendency. Not only would high education usefully contribute to raisinge the future teachers' professional knowledge in their fields such as mathematics and history, but also these courses could offer some psychological subjects in order to address facilitate the communication problems caused by the age gap. Furthermore, increasing the wages would enable these dedicated teachers to have a higher quality lifestyle. The less fewer financial concerns, the higher concentration on their job and subsequently the more efficiency in the process of learning. Each government would desperately need such successful educational methods so that they could guarantee their future prosperity. In brief, I concede that numerous difficulties have negatively affected the youth in becoming to become a teacher. Authorities, however, could implement a wide range of supporting schemes so that they could encourage people to consider this profession it as their lifetime career.

You have Enough Money to Purchase either a House or a Business

2017-05-23T17:55:10+00:00

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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. It is common knowledge that in these days, buying a house is a much safer way to invest money. But this is only a one-dimensional way of thinking. When it comes to talking about wisely spending money wisely, It is my firm conviction that buying a business includes upsides such as having a prolific investment, creating jobs for others and pursuing personal interest that not only outweigh but also outnumber its downsides, on the following grounds. First and foremost, it is necessary here to clarify exactly what is meant by having a "prolific investment." Compared to buying a house which will bring bought to you a stagnant finance, if you buy a business, you will be able to have your money in circulation which will be definitely meritable more profitable/lucrative in comparison with buying a house. In the second place, I need to be explicit about creating jobs for others. By means of acquiring a business you are capable of establishing a wide spectrum of fields of working for other people, which is hardly seen through other ways of money investment. The last but not least, I feel obliged to account for pursuing personal interest. Certainly each of us has some inner passions and goals in our field of occupation. In from my point of view, through having a personal business, it will be easily practical to follow these particular objectives. To make a long story short, although buying a house would sound like a much more comfortable way to spend your money, but it will not be able to provide you with noticeable circumstanceswonderful opportunities as purchasing a business does. 263 words