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Children Start School before the Age of Seven

2018-09-11T03:37:57+00:00

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Some people think that children should start sooner while others believe they should not start before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Although children usually start their education when they are seven years old in most countries, some believe that they should be taught sooner than that. From my point of view, it is debatable issue, and we should consider children's talent, morale and much more besides. The former group claim that children should not be subjected to rigorous training until seven years old, because they are not old enough to easily adapt themselves to new circumstances. Many a child give up studying/ educating due to their teachers' excessive discipline. I strongly believe that children should not have any serious responsibility for educational concepts. Moreover, parents must allow children to live happy during their childhood. In other words, children should be exposed to free information flow, so that they indicate both their interest and talent. Simply put, with the aid of special training, school principals and parents could raise a successful generation in terms of ethical and educationally. On the other hand, early starts tend to get advantage in most of their lives' scenarios, hence their successful achievements in comparison with their peers. First and foremost, they learn to make friends in their class and are likely to grasp the concept of sharing at a young age. For example, when they meet their classmates in a class, they play various games and also share their food, so this build the spirit of teamwork. Only when they join school in their young age, is it possible. Last but not least, it is much too easy and also lasting for children to acquire various qualities such as discipline, leadership and cooperation in spite of their young age. In conclusion, the sooner they take part in peer groups, the more adaptable people we have in their adulthood, but we should consider their other interest to bring happiness for them.

Countries Similarities, Mosadegh

2018-09-11T03:37:45+00:00

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? With fact of globalization, people appear on the same look and thoughtfulness. These days, we can access to every goods which we need without considering where they are. There is no limitation to catch a new idea, information and data regardless of whether where they have produced. These are an inevitable actuality in the following centuries which human was confronted with. I believe that this situation has positive step towards the global advancement. In the 21th centuries, human is able to make most of the impossible matters which were unreachable before that, possible. There is no doubt that they will obtain more success in the future. As a result of the progress of technology we can offer special and rare drugs by an immediate search on the internet. It takes around one or two weeks to deliver. Another example is to find easily a foreign or local food such as sushi, a kind of Japanese food, for ourselves or our foreign friends in our country. Another example is that in Iran, most of the fleets made by foreign countries and directly imported there or just assembled by Iranian workers. This clearly shows that due to such globalized world everything is possible and accessible. The important effects of globalized world are that all the human beings have the same opportunities to have whatever they desire for. There has seen a broad fair spread out to whole of the societies. It applies to other aspects of developments of countries. In the field of sciences, it causes people around the world to be aware of the new findings in every subject. Accessing easily to the all information and data by scientists, expert and also ordinary people make all human societies excessively friendly. Moreover, the presence of the productive big companies in the developing countries makes opportunity to have some products as the holders of countries and beside that creating job for destination country. Despite the feeling equality among people around the world and declining in racism, there is a pessimistic view that cause air pollution happened and culture shock occurred. To conclude, simulation is inherently suitable for every country and makes the world more comfortable and convenient. It might spread out luxurious life somewhat. I am of the opinion that the advantages of such development outweigh its pitfalls.

Effects of Opinion of Famous Person in Youngs and Olds, Fateme

2018-09-11T03:37:33+00:00

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and .examples to support your answer Many people maintains that the speaking of popular persons have effective influence on younger individuals. But also they have a prejudice on their opinion more than older audiences. Younger peoples are less logical than older ones, They care to some bodies who they are not perfect in each side of life, and they can not make a precise decision. First, young individuals are more emotional than old adults. Therefor, they have no idea when their popular person recommend some advices. They can't make a precise decision when they listened to the speaking of who, they love her. For example, researchers showed that most of the followers of soccer player and actors are teenagers. They consider to the comments and follow their followers. Consequently, they find out those speaking have influenced on these audiences. Second, teenagers pay attention to superficial items and beliefs of famous people are extremely valuable for them because of they see positiveappearance of them. They appreciate the heroes who are just known by many society and there is no different for them that is their thinking useful too or not. When I was younger, a friends of mine loved a Rap's singer and she thought that he is a perfect human too. In elections, she voted whom he had told. However, later she understands that the singer received a lot of money for mention this recommendation and He advertised for the stupid candida. Moreover, young persons are without much experience of judging subjects. They have less knowledge than older adults about critical thinking. They have read less stories, they have listened less news and etc. They can not have an exact judgment, so they use their heroes' suggestions. By the way, adults had opportunity to evaluate their decisions, and they can have a better judgment without much bias. In a country, people selected an excellent government and scientists show that the population of there was full of old persons, In other hand, it has much more old persons than young individuals. In conclusion, the effect of famous people's ideas influences on the younger ones more than older persons. In my opinion, youngers should have chanceto test their options and should being more clever listeners.

Fast food, Niloofar Rastegarfard

2018-09-11T03:37:22+00:00

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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. The bar chart illustrates Americans who had dishes in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Overall, it can be clearly abserved , that American people ate meals at fast food restaurants once a week or several times from 2003 to 2013. According to diagram ,in 2003,the percentage of those who had meal at fast food restoraunts once a week and once or twice a month were the same present ,around 30%.However,eating fast food once a week increased slightly in 2006.In addition,having dishes once or twice a month decreased 15%,but it had increased sharply in 2013.Americans who ate food a few times a year ,didn’t have significant change in 3 years , it was about 15%. In conclusion, around 5% people who had never went to the restourants every day in all years , and about 20 % of people pereferd to go restaurants several times a week .All in all , about a quarter of the people who lived in the USA used to have fast food in the restourants once a week or once a months from 2003 to 2013.

Home in Countryside, Amir G

2018-09-11T03:37:10+00:00

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? In many parts of the world people are suffering from a lack of a suitable place to live. This leads to the city planning department allowing construction of the green areas outside cities to house the ever growing population. While many consider this a positive step in urban development, I personally believe the urban sprawl can adversely affect our physical and mental health. This short essay elaborates on my viewpoints regarding this controversial topic along with relevant examples. The provision of suitable accommodation is one of the main problems amongst people wanting to live in large cities. Coping with such a widespread problem, residential developments are built in the countryside in many parts of the world. I personally believe this is simply a temporary remedy for such a significantly complicated problem especially in the developing countries where the facilities are mostly concentrated in metropolises. In other words, not only are these constructions ruining the green belt of our cities, they also invite more people from villages to live in newly built residential areas. The more facilities that are built in metropolises, the more people are attracted to live in them. The constructions in the countryside have destructive impacts on the natural environment. The green belt outside big cities plays a significant role in purification of polluted air coming from the metropolises. People in large cities hoping to find fresh air enjoy spending their time in the countryside out of cities to inhale the fresh clean air. Only when we preserve part of the natural environment in large cities can we expect economic growth by a healthy work force. By way of conclusion, my opinion is that the negative impacts of construction in the countryside far outweigh its drawbacks. Although (vertical and horizontal) expansion of cities to the countryside is a solution for home shortage, I hold the idea that this will face civilians with more complicated health related problems sooner or later. Word count is 322 with the changes to your essay. I suggest making all of the red changes and taking out some of the comas. I would like to see what your English teacher corrects.

Host Country, Saeedeh

2018-09-11T03:36:58+00:00

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Saeedeh,Host Country My writing.3 Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that host country should welcome cultural differences. Obviously, as life has improved day by day, majority of people tend to travel more frequentely now than in the past. It is argued that visitors to another countries should accept the host country’s traditions and behaviour. However, there is an opposite idea saying that the host country should welcome cultural differences. The focal point of humanity should be moral values which are common in all regions rahter than customs and behaviour that are diverse in different areas. Clearly, if the host country cannot adopt visitors’ culture than its participation with another countries in economic, financial and other activities, will be hampered. In my opinion, it is ethical responsibility of visitors to respect important beliefs and customs of their host country, but some individuals believe that it is really hard for travelers to follow the local culture because it is compeletely different and they may not able to adapt to it. On the other hand, if the host country welcomes travelers’ behaviour and traditions despite all differences, they will feel comfortable. Besides, it will be very beneficial for the local people to experence a new culture in their home country. Consequently, the host country should greet varied customs. To sum up, I suppose that while traveling to another country, people should try to follow the local culture and behaviour to have a more enjoyable trip. On the contrary, the host country should respect guest people’s beliefs.

Human Activities, Saleh

2018-09-11T03:36:46+00:00

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Human activities has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion. It is true that human activities have damaged animals and plants all over the world. Although some people believe this is unchangeable, some claims there are many solutions to solve and change these wrong behaviour. Now, I can consider both points of view without any prejudices. At a glance, it is obvious that during the history people have ruined ecosystem with their wrong decision, exploiting animals and plants due to reach their goals and comforts. Humankind always needs eating some types of plants and animals as a food to be alive, using some animal’s skins to make clothes, cutting plants for firing and using in the industrial to produce some furniture. Thus, some people believe that we need using them for being alive. On the other hand, the others are opposed to exploit the nature by destroying it. Not only do they accuse people who damage the nature of using them for their own profit, making money, but also in some cases they resist them and put pressure on them to stop their activities. They assert, with changing the way of life people can replace the right method to rescue ecosystem. For instance, there are a large number of different species endangering to extinct which must keep safe and it is the main people’s duty to ecosystem by preventing to illegal hunt and cutting the tree or, in other words, destroying nature. Hence, they believe with some actions we can look after our nature. Finally, from my point of view, we should follow the second groups’ believes who try to protect the ecosystem by searching to find some ways. We have to think about our next generations, putting somethings entirely intact for them as our ancestors keep them for us. Moreover, by saving the nature, the world will be more beautiful than before.

Letter, Mehdi Mohamadifar

2018-09-11T03:36:34+00:00

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---------------------------------------------------------------------- --------- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -say why he/she would not enjoy going to college -explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her -suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her 20 mins ---------------------------------------------------------------------- --------- Dear my friend Reza, I hope you are doing well. I have got your email yesterday and was surprised of the question you asked me. As far as I know you, it is not enjoyable for you, going to college. Long classes, boring lessons and old teachers with their out of date notes!! Just believe me you can study all of them yourself. Do not waste your time. If you get a job in a field you love, sure you will have it all. ofcourse you will start with low salary but surely, as you are a talented person, will be promoted very soon. you can selfstudy about the field working in, and see, you do not lose anything. I recommend you start it with teaching software programming , VB or C#, in an ordinary institude. No doubts, you are a master in these languages but you need some exprience in controlling the class and the students. Hope these information can help you out to make up your mind correctly. By the way, do not hasitate if you need any recommendation letter or anyway I can be a help. With Best, Your old friend, Mehdi ---------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------ Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information. Such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 40 mins ---------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------ All of us have encountered a long questionair when we are applying for a job. All of these companies gathere all these long informations, seems they beleive to have something is better than not to have it!! Generally, I should agree withthem but I think in this case we should check it out in more detail. Most critics to these extra asked informations are related in keeping people's privacy. Somehow these information are personal and may bother the person to talk about it. Besides he/she comes to work in your company and expects his/her knowledge to be checked and not the personal information. So far it seems they are right. But I think we should see this from another aspect. Consider it in new modern companies, do not want just a normal output but they want to get the most efficiency out of the employees. As they understood that the employees are not robots, the more information about the charactrestics of employees they have, the more they can make them to work more efficiently. So they try to know you better and get familiar to your characteristics by asking extra questions.(I have seen companies do not know the purpose and just they want to have more information like, name of father) Business is Business! In this fast pace competition, companies are fighting for their lives and I agree with them to do these things to survive. Also I think they should keep these information confidential and just use it in moral way!

Parents Children, Amir G

2018-09-11T03:36:20+00:00

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Many people believe parents have to persuade their children to participate in group activities organized by valid educational centers. Others, however, believe it is significantly important for children learn how to spend their time in a useful way. This short essay elaborates on both mentioned viewpoints in addition to my own perspective on this controversial subject. How children spend their time has been a matter of controversy for many parents. Group activities are usually planned by a team of experts aiming specific targets. Improvement of social skills for example is one of the main targets organizers of such activities are looking for. Helping children to find their talent is another high important feature children hardly can find it by themselves. That many a talented kids flourish in this kind of group activities is an undeniable fact. A case in point is the public classes in day-care centers where children automatically follow what they enjoy. On the contrary, many individuals though, argue that children would rather find their very own ways to fill their time. This group believe the more time children spend with themselves, the more they find about their talent and field of interest. Mostly drown in attractions of cyberspace, children whose parents do not encourage them to take part in group activities spend most of their time in the virtual world. Only when a child learns how to occupy his time he can find his true talent and develop it. Many a child who attends planned group activities without an acceptable outcome. By way of conclusion, I personally, opine that convincing children attending team activities is more beneficial than learning how children occupy their time by. Although group activities have its inherent drawbacks I arguably maintain its benefits far outweigh its demerits.

Public Event Invitation Letter to Friend, Yavar

2018-09-11T03:36:09+00:00

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Dear Ady, It’s been so nice long since we last were in touch, but I didn’t forget all of the wonderful events which we had to gather. There is a public event upcoming here and I wanted to invite you over to stay in my home for this event. Nowruz is traditionally celebrated in my hometown on the first day of spring; moreover, it is the first day of the Persian calendar and we have 5 days holiday upfront. Not only people are happy for new year holidays, but also, weather is incredibly nice to have a walk outside the city. After New Year party with our common friends in a friendly environment, you could enjoy yourself with a sort of delicious Iranian foods and fantastic fireworks. We will continue the holidays with off road driving in nearby desert if you like and we could stay overnight there as well. Furthermore, there is a natural Spa in outskirt of city and I’m sure we will have lots of fun there. I really hope you accept my invitation and it will not be the same without you. All The best Yavar