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Amir G, Shopping

2018-12-11T06:52:20+00:00

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Some people see shopping as a leisure activity mostly for young adults, while others disagree. Do you think this has a positive or negative effect on economic development? Give your opinion and include relevant examples. People have a variety of ideas about different types of leisure activities, amongst them shopping is assumed to be a constructive choice. Many consider shopping a highly beneficial way to spend spare time that impacts positively both individual and society in various aspects. Many people believe that shopping could be considered a leisure activity because the shoppers have to visit several shopping centers in various places across the globe. Many only travel to visit luxurious shopping malls in other regions or to buy a specific brand which is not available in their country of origin. As shopping can emotionally satisfy many people, many a person finds it a preferable activity for their pastime. Young female young adults are typical examples who prefer to do shopping rather than any other activity. Considering shopping a type of pastime benefits both the society and the shopper greatly. One of the most significant points of considering shopping a valid form of spending free time is the financial turnover it can bring about to society. Not only can shopping create jobs for people from all walks of life, but it also can turn the economical wheels to motion. The more request for commodities, the more cash flow in society. The new shopping center near our home I think is a typical example that despite the drawbacks, led to the economic growth in the area. Thanks to the new shopping mall near my area many people are coming to the new center leading to increase the value of properties in the region. By way of conclusion, I maintain that although, considering shopping has some intrinsic negative points, the advantages outweighs the disadvantages. That spending time for shopping results in prosperity, besides more job vacancies is an undeniable fact, let alone the psychological satisfaction shopping can leads to those who chose shopping to be a way of enjoying their free time.

Beheshteh, Talent

2018-12-11T06:52:08+00:00

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When it comes to rank ranking one’s abilities, in particular those associated with sport, music and art, the question that as to whether the existence of innate talent is of importance or only training plays a determining role is raised. Some argue that any individuals are likely to acquire different types of skills when they are well trained, thereby debunking the notion of different inner aptitudes. This inspiring belief, which persuades any individual to daunt venture and step into the demanding way with the dream of reaching the highest level, is completely admirable but partly inapplicable. Due to the fact of individual differences, not anyno two learners are able to perform the same, even though being equally taught. On the other hand, others believe that some are born gifted and are differentiated distinct from their peers. It literally means that some inherit a talent via genes that facilitate their way of accomplishment. Managing to reach a certain level of a skill, where which others might be less likely to accomplish, ascertains the existence of natural talent. However, research shows that there might be various activities which can be carried out perfectly even in the absence of so called talent, plenty of evidence proves that outstanding musicians and artists as well as exceptional athletes are fueled with natural aptitude that allows them to excel. It is not possible to consider neither instructing nor talent separately influential, since they are inextricably bound up. in the other words, not only do they both exist but they also interact closely in order to pave the way for great success. To conclude, it is reasonable to claim that nurture and nurture are not exclusively mutual. desiring to succeed, one is requires required to be provided with both qualified training as well as inner aptitude.

Boshra, Age Limit

2018-12-11T06:51:56+00:00

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The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and to lower the age limit for elderly ones. Do you agree or disagree? Road accidents have become one of prominent causes of death during recent decades. That is why researchers focus on recognizing and solving this problem. Some of them assume that extending the age limit for youths as drivers and reducing it for elderly ones are the most effective way of tackling this challenging situation. Others, however, assert vice versa. I, personally, maintain that there are numerous significantly more effective ways for reducing the number of car accidents. This short essay will elaborate on this contentious issue. First and foremost, installing some smart devices in vehicles capable of recording and reporting the average speed of cars and sending them to a police center, drivers become careful regarding exceeding speed limits which could be a beneficial policy for decreasing the number of collisions. Further and even more importantly is associated with initiating programs for raising people’s awareness as to the implications of driving recklessness, thereby avoiding driving impatiently and without paying attention to other drivers’ right. Last but not least, as a great number of road events are because of defective cars, not only should authorities persuade car owners to carry out a mechanical inspection on a regular basis, but they also had better consider a heavy fine for wrong doers. On the other hands, proponents opine that through imposing age restrictions, we, in fact, transform an otherwise risky road to a safe place to drive on, for many old people behind the wheel are not conscious enough and have less concentration on what they do. In addition, lower-aged generations are not mature and are prone to act in some unexpected ways while driving, hence their higher percentage of accidents. On the whole, I once again reaffirm my position about the policy of stricter limiting ages of driving which is effective but not sufficient for resolving the problem of high rate of car accidents in roads.

Eslami, Unpaid Community Service

2018-12-11T06:51:45+00:00

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? In this day and age, fast-paced life is one the main reasons that cause less communication between people in society, so some believe that mandatory unpaid community services should be considered in school curriculum to tackle this problem. In this essay, I will discuss the main benefits of the mentioned action and clear my side. There are huge advantages behind unpaid community services. First and foremost is related to becoming righteous members of society. If pupils learn how to treat with less fortunate or disabled people during high school, not only will they learn empathetic empathy but also kindness simultaneously. In my opinion, it is much better to consider one day completely per week to spend children’s time in charity centers and teach them the proper way of treatment with old or disabled people. They will thank god God to have created them healthy so they can help other people. There is yet another reason for making social work compulsory. Nowadays children are becoming too full of themselves. They have little time for others. They are glued to their cell phones or played playing video games especially after returning from high school to home. If the charity activities are arranged after regular school programs, they will communicate with other portions of the community and spend their leisure times with them. In conclusion, from my estimation, preparing children to be a helpful perfect part of society is one of the main goals of training systems and adding unpaid social work as a compulsoryive program in school curriculums helps children to discover their society at an early age.

Malihe, Technology Skills

2018-12-11T06:51:32+00:00

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Parent allow their children to play by tablets and computers, because they believe children need more to know about technology skills. Do you think its advantages are more than disadvantages? In the digital age this is an unavoidable truth that children spend a lot of their times on playing computationalcomputer games. Actually the usage of tablets and computers comes to be a habitat in children’s life and this is a worrying fact. However, computationalcomputer tools can be both useful and harmful. The key point is that we can direct children to use of these tools in appropriate way. Certainly, the power of language learning of children can be improved by playing computationalcomputer games. In other words, in terms of its educational role, the literacy of them can be increased and they learn about technology skills through these games and tools. Nevertheless, we cannot ignore the disadvantages of using computers or tablets by children and the effects on children’s healthy. For example playing computationalcomputer games deprive children from physical activities and consequently sitting down for a long time not only leads to become fat but also it has negative effects on their life-time. Every minute that children are playing game, means they keep out from running and burning calories. In addition, the dry eye is a growing problem in children that doctors believe this is related to long-term use of tablets and other digital equipment. Also these kids will not have a regular and comfortable sleep’s plan especially if they play before bedtime. To sum up, there are both some advantages and disadvantages to use technology tools especially for kids. However, parent should manage their children’s computationalcomputer games play for a limited time and under their supervision. In this way, children can benefit positive effects of these skills and enhance their knowledge in the different fields of technology skills.

Mosadegh, Public Health

2018-12-11T06:51:19+00:00

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both those vies and give your own opinion. During recent decays, public health has been a controversial matter and had innumerous issues in its way to tackle. Its importance is to the extent that jeopardizes National Security of all countries. The fact of this issue is directly related to people’s daily lifestyle. Without a doubt, sports play a key role in humans’ life and affect people health and help them have a sense of happiness and gladness, but these are not the only way to having a healthy society. In the following, some beneficial measures to reaching that will be discussed. However, ordinary people believe that the sport has a huge impact on public health, scientists say that this is not a complementary approach to being healthy. They cite that an oil free food regime, being on time for all meals during a day, having a stressrelief lifestyle, a proper water sanitation system, equipped hygiene centers and hospitals bring about a communication without health issues. In some countries in the Middle East due to occurring a variety of wars happened, there is no hope to survive for being alive and meanwhile saying about sports is just a luxury and not logical. It is important to consider through modernized society, there may not be access to a pure or organic food which has not any additives. This is a vast responsible for the media, not only should they have informed people about how to have a properly healthy habit for living, but also they should force governments to pay attention carefully to the public health and allocating some financial for it. On the other hand, there are some who argue that just through doing some daily exercises, people can be healthier than before. They claim that governments should prepare some free facilities in the public places such as parks or some recreational centers, but according to scientific researchers, this is not a one way method to solve this issue. In conclusion, I would say that there is not just one method to coping with health problems of a society and obviously, it is complicated enough that cannot discuss through a short essay. From my point of view, only doing some exercise or taking some sports classes are not enough to limit all people disease. For coping with these, we need to observe the issues from different other respects.

Parinaz, Learning a Foreign Langauge

2018-12-11T06:51:06+00:00

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 Some Experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? There is a belief maintained by experts that learning second language would be easier in the early years of life. Accordingly, some other linguists suggest teaching second language at the primary school rather than secondary school. I concur with this view that advantages of learning a foreign language at primary school outweigh its drawbacks since they can be minimized. First, advocates of learning a foreign language at the early age partially believe in localization in human brain, which gives the ability to learn a language at the an early age. In addition, some experts note that learning a language can be more successful while your subconscious mind is more active than your conscious one, an ability that is in its highest potential in childhood. In other words, learning a language will be acquired easier and faster when it is a peripheral subject. Therefore, it can be perceived from these two theories that children’s mind are much more ready and agile for learning than adults’. From other point of view, primary school teachers are generalists and may not be adept in language teaching. Moreover, since the early ages of learning is critical for children if they learn something wrong it may be internalized in their mind. However, this drawback can be avoided through rigorously educational plans. And also, it is evident that an improper method of language teaching can make language learning an unpalatable experience for kids. In conclusion, I contribute to the idea that merits of learning at primary school outweigh its demerits. It is claimed that children are at their pivotal period oflearning which can help them have better experience in language learning and have their peak performance.

Pejvak, Too Many Choices

2018-12-11T06:50:52+00:00

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W03: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Looking for better quality of life drives human develops better solutions for his problems which translates into a variety of options when it comes to deciding. Some are on the opinion that these choices are more than what we need while others believe that it is quite fine to consider a lot of choices. This essay seeks to review these ideas. At first glance, having a lot of choices in hand in order to select the most appropriate one seems beneficial. There will be not just a single way to choose because others have thought and make up a long array of them to take into account. Take the example of a local university which provides many different majors to study, and high-school students need to be introduced with to them before deciding about their future major. Not to mention that the decision you make can differ based on your personality, the circumstance and not last but least the situation. On the other hand, in this situation people may get fraustrated and spend more time on deciding, which may lead to losing the opportunity. At this point, the importance of training is revealed. People need to be trained and prepared for this situation almost from their childhood. This will help in identifying the most convenient solution based on environmental factors. In conclusion, although numerous choices may lead to complexing the issue and the development of technology and equipment puts us in an unexperienced situation, a lot of options are made for us for a better life and what we need at this stage is to be trained to select the most suitable options.

Roxana, Holding Events

2018-12-11T06:50:41+00:00

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion Throwing parties on different occasion is always a controversial topic. some considered it as an unnecessary event while there are some persons who strongly believe it is crucial to hold such events. In these days which we are living deeply with technology and internet-based products, holding and participating in parties definitely would be one of the best ways to gather with the others and be in communication. Dancing and singing have a direct influence on revealing stress and decreasing the level of depression in societies. Holding job-related parties by companies is a great chance to break the ice among colleges and significantly make improvement in teams’ outcomes. By employing people in (the???? ) party planning business we contribute to growing and increasing more job opportunities. without a shadow of doubt the best chance to spend your time with your beloved ones is when you altogether participate in a party and every family have a great picture which is taken on those events. On the other hand, spending an unreasonable amount of money is a waste,. it should always be taken into account that we should keep the balance in everything. Once you plan to throw a party you should consider all items such as the ones who have a problem with loud noise or ones with special disorders that don’t have the ability to be in congestion. Exaggerating in those feasts in some cases leads to disturbing neighbors. Based on the mentioned above from my point of view celebrating and celebration are essential for every family and society but do not forget that you should avoid holding and being in bizarre parties.

Vahid, Tourist

2018-12-11T06:50:28+00:00

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What are the benefits and drawbacks of tourism? There is no doubt that nowadays the number of people who travel as a tourist has significantly increased. However, it is crystal clear that tourism brings about both advantages and disadvantages for the tourists and the host country in a way that impacts the economic and cultural situations of that. In the one hand, tourism has a considerable financial effect on the host country. People travelling to different countries usually spend a great amount of money there and an undeniable fact is that the more tourists go on a trip, the more money is spent on their travel. For example, Turkey’s government announced that more that 30 million people have visited the country in 2018 which means foreign people have brought a huge amount of money to Turkey. In addition, tourism is inextricably bound up with direct employment; therefore, the individuals' life quality would improve. Moreover, it has some benefits for visitors; People with diverse religious or cultural backgrounds can broaden their horizons and in consequence find out more about different people's traditions and beliefs. On the other hand, that tourism impacts the destination in a negative way is an inevitable truth. Not only do the tourists make a difference in the environment, but also they adversely affect the nation's culture. Visitors do not normally care about the host people's traditions insomuch that they might not respect them, thereby giving rise to the potential tension among the local and the foreign people. Furthermore, air pollution and traffic jams are other potentially harmful effects that could be taken into consideration. In conclusion, the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks in a way that they drive almost all governments throughout the world to provide special circumstances to host foreign travelers.