Mondays https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09 Tue, 30 Apr 2024 07:21:27 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Amirsalar, Happiness https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09/2873-amirsalar-happiness https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09/2873-amirsalar-happiness  

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences. Joyfulness is a serious parameter in a human’s life that leads to growth and excellence. If one’s feels cheerful, he will have a convenient life and this matter affects everyonethe whole persons in relation to him. Happiness is very difficult to describe;, the definition of cheerfulness varies from person to person and there is no unique description for it. To illustrate, while some people link happiness to economic circumstance, others think that having a good family and well warm relationship with friends are the main cause of happiness. Besides, some people believe that spiritual paths, rather than a material world, are the only way to achieve true happiness. For this reason, happiness has no specified explanation and it is different between each group of people. That is to say, although factors such as life and job satisfaction, good health, being wealthy, and a peaceful environment contribute to our contentment, having all of these parameters is not guaranteeing happiness. Finally, I think we wouldn’t derive a sense of satisfaction, if we didn’t have some basic preconditions. For instance, consider a person doesn’t have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. how can he can feel the joy?. Therefore, our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Furthermore, the greatest joy in life is the sharing of experiences with family and friends, and it is hard to find a person who is content to be in isolation. In conclusion, finding a precise interpretation of happiness is very difficult to achieve because it is particular/peculiar to each individual. But I believe that two factors such as basic needs and well close relationship with family are the most important parameters of obtaining happiness.

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Armin Shirka, Education https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09/2872-armin-shirka-education https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09/2872-armin-shirka-education  

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Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Without any doubt, education is one of the key factors of development, and only a well-educated nation could thrive for excellence and ultimate development. Despite the fact that the education system has a crucial role in the development process of a country, there are other essential factors which are in an obvious correlation. The following paragraphs will discuss the importance of symmetric growth of the factors and how advancement in a single factor would not lead to a desirable result. First and foremost, the education system is considered to be the backbone of a nation and obviously it is quite obvious that education system of a country plays a significant role in the overall development of a country. Most of the developed countries have well-educated citizens and admirable education systems which represent the importance of the education system for the development of a country. However, there are countries like Iran which takes advantage of a great number of educated youths and sufficient education infrastructures, and still suffering from poverty, economic inflationary recession and struggling to supply its people’s basic needs. This indicates that an efficient education system in a country, by itself own/per se could not be considered as development. Furthermore, development of a county would be achieved by the symmetric growth in many crucial factors such as safety, international relationship, freedom of speech and thought, better utilization of internal resources and high standard lifestyle and so otherson. To cite an example, many middleeastern countries recently have had immense growth in the economic aspect and yet their citizens suffer from deficiency of democracy in their leadership. Whilst they have experienced a great progress in some factors, they would not be recognized as a developed country. In conclusion, I believe that a better education system along with a democratic way of leadership, international trade and relationships, a high-standard lifestyle, utilization of internal resources and many other crucial factors are in a direct correlation in the development process of a country. Thus, there are no short-cuts to success, . they have to take the long road or they will hit a dead-end.

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Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree? Conspicuously, nowadays there are a wide range of learning approaches, although half of the people follow the two fundamental groups learning in group or in the private environment individually. Some people argue that learning with others has many benefits while some other people disagree. Accordingly, a couple of reasons in agreement and disagreement will be explored in this essay. One of the advantages of learning in a team is that students can have a golden opportunity to deal with different people with different attitudes and from various walks of life. For instance, people, specifically young generations, have the ability to develop and cultivate relationships with others. Research has showed that working as a team pays off handsomely for many groups. Thus, the more effective approaches teachers, parents and mentors choose for encouraging students to work in participation, the more enhanced their abilities become to stablish intimate relationship with others. Some students prefer studying alone than studying in a group due to some underlying reasons. Firstly, they have their own study style and enjoy studying their own way. They assert that they cannot match their studying style to that of their friends. Secondly, they can maintain a higher concentration when they study alone because they do not get distracted by the presence and noise of others. Therefore, they pace themselves and regulate their study hours based on their own schedule so they can study whenever and wherever they feel up to it. Undeniably, team works have has plentiful gains because individuals can grab a vacant opportunity to exchange notes and pool their ideas with many different classmates of their concerning related course that they have. Additionally, they develop better understanding and insight into course materials cooperatively as well as collectively. It is evident that each person has a limited set of skills and a finite knowledge base. Hence, having everybody on board and setting the right expectations is are absolutely crucial. To sum up, some people believe that the advantages of learning teamwork are uprightoutweigh the disadvantages, while others feel the need to work alone. By Learning as a team, people improve social behavior and every one has different views on the same subject, which is really beneficial to witness as the saying goes, “two heads are better than one” but by learning alone people adjust their time better. I adhere to this belief that depending on each person and the personality, people can choice choose the best way of learning.

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Today there are a wide range of household equipments available (TV, microwave, rice cooker) rather than before. Is it a positive development or negative? ,Thereby Today’s world is filled whit with various appliances. most if not all, people are using modern household equipments which are is designed to ameliorate facilitate lifethe condition of life. When the question arises as to whether different appliances are good or not,. my contention is that for changing our hectic life to an easy going life-styleone, we need to accept some adverse outcomes brought about brings with modern equipments. Although modern development in technology used in equipments to a large in immense degree could have beneficial improvements in our comfort but many critics, also as well as environmental activists claim that there are the adverse outcomes withof new technologies. Privacy observers believe that invasion of privacy happens time and again due to connected devices to the Internet, they believe that we are making a dystopia which everybody should feel anxiety about being tracked. B because even the most banal-seeming data can be mined minded by the surveillance economy. Even data from a smart toothbrush would be interesting for an insurance company which seems to be infuriating not only for people who are concerned about their privacy but also for people who are cavalier about it. To put it in a nutshell, I personally have a moderate view and opine that new devices are the pioneer of making our daily basis easier and they can also entertain us in some ways. We need to admit that for some relaxing moments when our job is done by some equipment we need to spend and share some data. Some people accept to live in a commercial panopticon world but some do not.

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Nowadays, we can see a huge number of online tutorial platforms and courses aiming to enhance humans' knowledge. although the trend of using these online courses is upward but I believe there is always a room for traditional schools. On the one hand, wide spreading Internet and technology and developing the open source data make learning easy and inclusive for everyone around the world which is one of the most important achievements of the 21th century. In contrast, the Traditional system of training have a lot of undeniable superiority, providing government frequently keep it uptodate and revise it in order to increase its efficiency. enforcing to presence in classes is one of the most important advantages of traditional System. as pupils are in class they where are in an atmosphere of learning which causes paying more attention. besides questions that are asked in the class by other Students could help to get/understand the subject better and also having exam makes pupils to study deeply, although, some of the online platforms take give exams, cheating in them is easier than traditional ones, therefore in compare comparison with the online courses licences and traditional courses licences, the latter are more reliable for many companies. Overall, developing different types of online study-based platforms and systems are is useful to increase humankind’s knowledge, providing if a person has no access to university or school and also for people who are eager to learn different topics is ultimately great but I believe it should not take the place of the traditional system of study place.

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Do you agree or disagree? It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends. It is undeniable that ethics are great values and account for people’s goodness. However, in view of our actions’ consequences, a great debate entitled “moral relativism” has been sparked for centuries. This theory holds that moral values are not definite and determined according to the situations. One of these values is honesty. I strongly believe that moral values and actions especially honesty are changeable. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my reasons. First, all of us have our own personal issues and sometimes we prefer not to tell anybody about them, even our closest friend. Moreover, some people and scientists argue that if you want to pursue your goals and fulfill your dreams, you should not talk about them to other people. As a result, if you take such an attitude and other people do not respect your privacy, they force you to dodge sth. Since you do not want to satisfy their curiosity about your life and decisions. In fact, your honesty depends on others’ behaviors and questions. Consequently, I think that individuals are right not to not talk about their problems honestly. Next, it has happened to everybody that they know something about their friends or families which is not obviously for to their benefit. In other words, not knowing that issue is in their favor. Therefore, I guess we are allowed not to tell the truth to them. It should be considered that not telling the truth is different from lying. However, some people do not distinguish between not speaking the truth and white lies. To conclude, I opine that feeling bound to be honest relies heavily on the situation and its result. In fact, you have this right to not adhere to this moral value under two circumstances: First, the topic being discussed is about yourself and your life, and the second one is that the subject is about other people and the truth definitely is not in their favor. To put it simply, your dishonesty is not condemned until as long as nobody’s right is disregarded.

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Mohammad Falahi, Happiness https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09/2867-mohammad-falahi-happiness https://ieltstoeflcenter.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/401-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-02-09/2867-mohammad-falahi-happiness  

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Number of words: 307 Happiness is a mental condition, and everybody can experience it in a specific situation. So I believe it has probably an ad-hoc definition. Each person in a specific age group has different kinds of needs and I reckon that satisfying each of them can result in happiness. It is worthwhile to mention that there are some humanistic needs which might be contradictory, from the happiness point of view, as earning a high income and spending time with your family and friends. Both of them are the source of happiness but can we reach them simultaneously? I believe that of course not. That is the reason why the definition of happiness might be difficult and is completely personal. An individual may prefer spending time with his friends and try not to work extra hours for extra wage and he is happy and the other completely in reverse. In addition, it should be emphasized that happiness is a holistic subject and cannot be assigned to a specific aspect of a person’s life. So there are several factors contributing to the conception of happiness. Although the before-mentioned point can be almost true for different generations, modernization of the world and the way humankind looks at the life, significantly affects the definition of happiness and makes it pretty complicated as opposed to that of a few decades ago. The people who were living some decades ago, might not be mindfulness about happiness but their way of living was simpler than it is today one and probably that is the key reason why they were more satisfied with their lives. In conclusion, happiness and achieving that are some ad-hoc matters which highly depend on a person’s goals, attitudes and way of life, so. So there is not a general and universal definition for happiness and it varies as a person gets older and also experienced.

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Transportation is becoming an issue in majority of countries. Some believe in order to solve this problem, new railways for superfast trains should be constructed. However, the option of investing on in the existing transportation and advancing them it should be considered. a Plethora of countries are facing over population growth. As a consequence, many major cities are having traffic jam problems all day long. And most of people’s valuable time is wasted in itthem. Not surprisingly, workers and students probably will be late for their jobs and classes and due to the stress and tension caused by traffic, they will be less efficient and more tired. Investing on in constructing highspeed trains railways might save people’s time. Not only this would this be beneficial to the city residents, but also it may decrease the difficulties of rural travelling as well, since many employees who work in the city live at in the countryside side. Kuala Lumpur as a salient example, dedicated a vast budget on to this type of transportation over a decade ago. People living there are spending less time in traffic now and are more active and efficient at work. Workers who do not live in the Kuala Lumpur are getting to their work on time more often. Although investing on in fast trains could be the answer, some people believe this is an act of wasting money. Building new lines for high-speed trains and people becoming used to using them, is are a timeconsuming process. Therefore, with this high rise in population growth, this might not be a proper solution. Since the result of tackling the traffic problems should be immediate, it would be more adequate to improve the public transportation that the countries already have. By substituting the old taxis and buses with new ones and dedicating special lanes to them, would be more beneficial. As major cities are facing environmental problems, if these new transportation vehicles are either hybrid or electronic, not only would they help with less emission of toxic gasses, but also due to their technology and using the special lanes, they will reach their destination faster. Therefore, people who have this type of view, think this option is more efficient than the previously mentioned one.People’s need of for public transportation is rising every day. The faster and more suitable the transportation vehicles are, the more chance there would be that they opt for this one. Since one of people’s concern is using a type of transport that does less harm to the environment and also gets them to their destination faster, they would choose the one that has both of these properties. Thus, investing on in the existing public transportation would be more proper.

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