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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Such are negative consequences of our works on the environment, that many experts agree that significant global warming is devastating. As a result, we need some constructive approaches to solve solving or alleviate alleviating the problem. In this essay we will discuss the reasons why climate change is occurring and we will come up with some solutions to address it. The major issues are the high amount of greenhouse gasses in the earth atmosphere layers and deforestation. due to burning fossil fuel CO2 is released. CO2 emission plays a key role in ozone layer depletion which is the logical reason for global warming. There are myriad power plants around the world which are using fossil fuel. This releases thousands of tons of CO2 into the atmosphere every year. In addition, transportation is placed in as the second source of producing co2. On the other hand, we are dealing with deforestation which is causing larger amounts of carbon dioxide to remain in the atmosphere. As far as co2 emission is concerned there are some solutions for coping with this problem. Firstly, Authorities should encourage companies and factories to use renewable energies instead of fossil fuels. Secondly in terms of individual solutions, we can change our life styles like reducing disposal production as well as using electricity in an optimal way. Plus, installing green energy producing equipment and planting some trees in our house could be some great approaches. To make a long story short, although climate change has had a destroying destructive effect on our life in recent years, we can address this issue and reduce the impacts ofn this problem by implementing some essay easy solutions.

 

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Although tourists in many countries are a significant source of revenue, they are frowned upon for various reasons. For the tourist, however, travelling is supposed to broaden the mind and be an educational experience. In what ways do you think travelling does this? And in what ways do you think travelling does the opposite, i.e. narrows people's mind? The Tourism industry today is recognized as a major source of income for many countries which have particular features that attract individuals to visit them. These features can be the unique nature and glorious weather or indigenous culture or even gastronomy and shopping. All of these attractions are new to travellers so, Inevitably, prompting initiatives intended to heighten people's awareness about this issue is necessary otherwise host countries encounter with irreparable damages. Travellers should be educated well about the destination they are going to visit and also peoples in tourist destinations about hosting travellers in professional ways as well. Because if they do not have enough information tourism can cause many problems such as enormous damage to the ecosystem and serious forms of pollution. In on the other hand, tourism infrastructures have a key role in deterring negative impacts that may endanger locals rights or environmental rights. For example, providing appropriate accommodation facilities and communication facilities. After these basic things/considerations now travellers in a sustainable way can benefit farm from having valuable experiences by getting acquainting acquainted with and immerse immersing themselves in different cultures and getting inspiring inspired from intact nature and also release releasing negative feelings such as stress and anxiety. All in all, my firm conviction is that travelling without having a sufficient knowledge can not only not be useful, there is room to expect achieveand poduce the useful results and broaden the mind or bring tranquillity tranquility but also can cause a lot of anxiety and fatigue.

 

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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write to the manager of the hotel and enquire whether the bag has been found.  Give any relevant information about the bag and its contents.  Ask the manager to contact you immediately if the bag is found.  Tell him/her how the bag can be sent to you. Dear Mr.Thompson, I write this letter to report the loss of a valuable item in your hotel. The item is a holiday suitcase comprising two roller wheels and a telescope handle. Trimmed in snake skin leather, with the brand name in golden letters on the front, the suitcase is definitely one of a kind. This, of course, is often to my advantage to spot it on the luggage carousel. The built-in combination lock, which offers state-of-the-art security provides access to the inside, where there are two zipped counterpartscompartments. In one, I regularly keep my official documents, and the other, which is made from shock-resistant rubber, often contains my electronic devices namely my cellphone and laptop. Last Monday, 19th July, I left my room at 10.00 pm to the airport. If my memory serves me right, I laid it to the kitchen wall when I answered a business call from a customer. Subsequently, I was summoned by my wife to collect our other bags and boxes. This, at to my knowledge, must have been the reason to forget the suitcase. However, I still wonder whether I left it at your hotel. This suitcase and its contents, Sir, is literally all I have in my life, and God knows that I am not stretching the truth, so what I humbly ask you is to take this issue seriously and make your/every effort to find it. I have enclosed my documents in order to help you with any further information if needed. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Reza Parpanji

 

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In many countries the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? The number of criminal activities has risen by leaps and bounds in many societies. While there are many contributing factors for this trend, I would argue that the government could take measures to tackle this problem. There are many reasons which propel a person to commit a crime. Firstly, I am of the opinion that poverty and unemployment are chief precursors to law violation. Earning a pile of money has been one of the strongest motivations for the less fortunate to commit a crime. That the rate of offences among underprivileged people is higher than the upper class ones is an undeniable fact. Secondly, some movies and video games provoke violence amongst individuals especially the youngsters. The youth of today mostly spend their leisure time watching the television programs which are negatively affect them since they depict the life of criminals and gangsters in order to become more interesting and attracting more viewers. Finally, many a country around the world, albeit with financial power, suffers from lack of law enforcement and corruption in the judiciary helping gangster groups to escape justice. However, many steps could be taken to diminish the crime rate. To start with, the government should put alleviation of poverty and provision of a safety net for the disadvantaged at the center of their campaign. Educating people and creating jobs for them, the state can give citizens the chance of earning a living by their own capabilities. In addition, there should be stricter regulation for television programs in order to making make them more suitable and beneficial for members of society. Moreover, the government should introduce new legislation and fines to punish officials who abuse their power/control the country. Imposing more severe punishment could serve as a deterrent and prevent crimes. In conclusion, there are many underlying reasons for the existence of crimes in a society but I believe that the aforementioned measures could flatten the curve of the crime rate.

 

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Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money. This practice can act as an incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others. To what extent is this style of management effective? Are there better ways of encouraging employees to work hard? In this day and age, keen competition among labor at the workplace can be seen significantly obviously in comparison with the past. Paying more money to some employees having extra contribution is a moot point by which other members might feel discriminationdiscriminated against. First and foremost, positive reinforcement through bonus has much of a role to play in increasing jobholders’ motivation provided it would beis done judiciously. In other words, some employers regrettably give extra money to their labor who are more obsequious or even possess higher positions. Therefore, not only can unfair bonuses be destructive to the whole system but also can render employees disappointed in psychological terms. My firm conviction is that fair bonuses besides other job perks by and large leads to encouraging the workforce which in turn brings about higher productivity. I opine that the measures employers take so as to raise the labor’s motivation is are a main factor in this regard. For instance, they can promote the position of their staff working hard after a while or consider satisfactory pay rise for their next contract. In addition, providing some voluntary works with specific bonuses can drive employees to work more. thisIt is actually quite effective, particularly for those who are indeed inclined to be more active in life. Last but not least, I strongly believe that only if employers create a healthy competition among the staff at the workplace, will an efficient system be achieved. In conclusion, further to the above explanation, even though the manner of jobholders’ encouragement is absolutely important, fair bonuses can have a positive impact on employees’ outcome.

 

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Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? No one can ever deny the significant role of schools in the children's life and always parents look for some ways which can encourage their children to study superbly. Although there is are various ways, people seek convenient ways which is paying money. I totally disagree with this idea for some main reasons which I will explain with a couple of examples. For the most and main reasons which can be on the top and covers other reasons is "responsibility". I believe that children have some responsibilities one of which is educating studying and by paying money they cannot figure out the responsibility concept and they must learn it when they are younger because in that case they can be more successful and independent persons. Besides, in my opinion parents work because they want their offspring to have a more comfortable life and study because in that circumstance they might have a brighter future, so if they offer some money for earning a high score in fact they pay a “ransom” which is completely unjust and studying properly is the least that children can do to compensate their parents, so they should do it in the best way. Another point is that, when parents pay money for each grade of their children, they get used to doing anything against some valuable aspects such as money which is not acceptable because sometimes we must do several objects tasks without any expectations such as helping poor humans and feeble animals. In addition, nowadays the economic conditions have variable fluctuant effects which means maybe be some parents do not have not extra money to inspire their kids to studying perfectly. For example, when I was at a elementary school, one of my friends told to her friends which that her parents did implemented this idea, so her friend became despondent/sad because she talked's talking about her family paying for better grades, developing complexes for her because she was did not have a good financial position. On the basis of the reasons which were mentioned above, in my experience this idea cannot be beneficial because children cannot understand the responsibility concepts and it causes constants expectations for them and also all individuals do not have the same situations, some of them have extra money while on the other hand some of them live in genteel abject poverty.

 

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You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. 1) Describe the problem 2) Explain why you are unhappy. 3) Say what you would like to happen next. Dear Sir, Here is one of your regular customers. While I have found most of the gourmet menu and excellent service here quite satisfactory thus far, I wish to lodge a complaint about the last night when I was there for my birthday. As usual aslike every year, I decided to celebrate my birthday at your restaurant and order a stake. Even though I told the waiter about my allergy to pepper, when the dish arrived, I found it too spicy. Furthermore, when I informed the waiter about that, he reacted rudely claiming that I was wrong. Although eventually, the dish was replaced, I had to wait for them it for more than one hour, which I found totally unacceptable; besides, the pepper caused me some health problems the day after. According tobecause of the issue mentioned above, given the fact that this foul-up was entirely the fault of your staff, I feel that I am entitled to request compensation in the form of reimbursement for my money, and suggest you to kindly investigate and take action against the staff on their duty. I would greatly appreciate your assistance in this matter. Should you have any further information, please do not hesitate to call me, and I have supplied my number for your convenience. Yours faithfully yeganeh

 

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phenomenon of the world’s culture shrinking and expanding at the same time Increasing the Increase in international trips and the incredible effects of the communication media throughout the world have led to the public become becoming familiar together especially in their life styles. Societies have relations and information interchanges with themselves that have widely merits and demerits. To my mind, though this development has some drawbacks such as fading of some of the traditional cultures, it will greatly benefit both individuals and society especially in exchanging of ideas and helping each other. Nowadays, people have many a lot of information from other countries’ life such as foods and those recipes, traditional clothes, hobbies and ceremonies which are very interesting for them. Because of this they have imitated other social customs and attitudes, which they find useful or enthusiastic for themselves. Some long-term traditionsal may be forgotten in the face of more new methods from other cultures that were populatedpopular. For example, fading and going to been forgotten, one of the Iranian traditional foods –Kaleh josh- and was replaced with fast foods. In spite of the above mentioned, some individuals or start- up companies are able to learn how to do new methods that are implemented outside their countries in their own jobs. For example Tapsi Tap30 as a taxi service that are is working by mobile applications are an Iranian version of international transportation Network Company which whose name is Uber. This kind of following are is very useful not only for the personal real and legal entitiespeople or company, but also for societies and economies. Moreover, because of this relation, societies can help others in solving solve the problems which are faced facingwith them especially in alleviate alleviating poverty and raise raising living standards. For instance the campaign to help the girls who have are not allowed to study in Pakistan or women stereotype stereotyping in Afghanistan that are so effective for them. To sum up, apart from some minor bad points that are inevitable as result of information interchange, it this is a useful trends for societies. The ease of international travel and the spread of various kind of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantage?

 

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