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Some people say that a person’s success depends on his/her upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples from your own experience. The important factors in an individual’s prosperity vary from other people's s’ point of view. However, some experts are of the opinion that the effect of parents’ nurturing method in everybody’s achievement is undeniable. Some people believe that the manner which parents use to bring up their children plays a vital role in their future success, financially or socially. They assert it has been observed that not only can a smart child can thrive under the supervision of a systematically organized family, but also weaker ones could produce an impressive performance if properly conducted. Beyond a doubt, well-rounded children are inspired by their parents, and family can pave the way for individuals teaching them to make every effort to succeed. On the other hand, opponents claim that intelligence and connections which people establish as mature ones are more important than their nurture. Although being sharp seems to be highly effective, a conducted research has revealed that having numerous friends is the most key booming factor in leading which leads people to become successful. In other words, the more relationship a person has, the more opportunities he will enjoy/be faced with. Fortunate people have used their relations to make their goals feasible (achieve their target). I, personally, believe that individuals’ education which has brought them up is the key to all their achievements. This includes all instructions they have had, especially those of their formative years which have a considerable influence on a person’s future career and life. I have seen a number of gifted people who had failed to flourish as a result of being weakly instructed by their parents. Besides, some skills such as perseverance which are extremely effective in helping people to pursue their plans and succeed will only be enhanced through a proper upbringing. In conclusion, the way parents use to raise/rear/bring up their children can enlighten them to choose and chase the appropriate path to a brighter future, (and without it) without which even talented ones are susceptible to of losing their success. Hossein Talebi

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