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Some people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal? Through in such a modernized and technical world, the increasing rate number of commodities is evident. There is no doubt that living in the progressive world with an excessive population requires mass production, as a resultleading to in globalization. The country which has huge natural raw resources, probably, does not need to have productive factories, while it can sell its raw materials such as oil, wood and minerals to other producers from other countries. It is true that having thrived economy needs enormous industries, but it is not an absolute way. Through expending various and countless goods, some think that money will come in to their country and it can pave the way to create some jobs opportunities for the people of their country too. The necessity of the global business is mass production. The more products each country produces, the more money achieves. The country which has the most amounts of goods with the less expenses of labors’ wages like China will win in this area. There is a direct relation between more production of commodities and thrived economy and it is also acceptable for all types of countries which have a communism communist system. As a result of this, it has been seen that the gap between poor and medium classes with high ones in society will be increasing in the near future as now it has beenis seen. Besides, there is some controversial debate between some opponents who claim that raising the gap of poor and wealthy individuals among in society due to mass production which brings about more consumption that is required to encourage ordinary people to follow new- fashions and the current trend of markets and also producing much amount of waste that needs to be disposal is not suitable for the economic systems as a whole. Within such an inevitable cycle not only should raw materials be extracted a lot, but also there is a need to use up mutual sources of energy for both production and transportation which is consequently a real threat to our planet. To sum up all the statements above, I believe that both excessive goods and consumption exacerbate our environmental issues, for instance, global warming as a result of using more fossil fuel as energy sources for factories and for transportation, the water, soil and air pollution which take their tolls on our life. Importantly, growth of commodities should not be the main reason for making creating career opportunities and an efficient economy for countries all over the world.

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