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435 words - tpo 45 The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Agree or disagree? Determining whether celebrities’ viewpoints are more important to young people than to their older counterparts, is considered a controversial debate. Some believe that /celebrities’ ideas have a bigger impact on young people than on their older counterparts/young people follow celebrities’ opinions more directly than older ones as opposed to other people who frown upon this idea. However, I am of the first idea and I have two points in support of my point of view which I will mention as follows/upon hereunder. To begin with, in general, adults are too busy with their responsibilities to follow celebrities’ news to find about their opinions. To my mind, they would rather to engage in works affairs they enjoy than care about entertainers and their ideas. On the other hand, minding athletes’ opinions and talking about them with friends afterward, have been seen as an interesting hobby for youngsters since last few yearsforever, especially in the past few years. Sometimes they care too much about popular people’s opinions as if they have had nothing more important to do than following celebrities’ news. To my mind, depending too much on others’ opinion regardless of their social class can be dangerous. My own experience is a compelling example of this idea, when I used to go to high school, my friends and I vied for people’s attention, so by following well-known people’s ideas and the way they dressed, there was no time left for us to study and our grades dropped abruptly which is why I reckon that athletes and famous people’s opinions are more important to teens than adults. Secondly, a vast majority of people are more emotional in their puberty age and crave for seeking out popular people’s opinions in order to find the best personality for themselves and following famous people’s lifestyle and opinions seems a decent way to find out which personality would fit them best. having said that, older people may have done this in their teen ages. Moreover, young people are less experienced than older people. That is why they tend to follow these kinds of people’s opinions and life routine. For instance, my sister payed paid attention to Michele Michael Jackson’s point of view in every aspect of life when she was in her early twenties, but when she entered university, no longer did she care about Michel Jackson’s stuffs and she stablished her personality based on her new experiences. To cut a long story short, abovementioned ideas and examples indicates that actors’ and athletes’ opinions not only are important to teens but also plays a key role in their life and choices. By following famed people’s opinions, they try to feel their free time and pick up the right personality according to their idols’ opinion.

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