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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. It is widely acclaimed that showing encouragement is a promising practice for students' success in every education system. This award usually was given to top students who were managed to gain the highest academic attainments. However, many believe that those who show progress during the semester or year should be commended instead. While being the best student requires lots of stamina and talent, I am of the latter view which will positively affect the mediocre students' future. On the one hand, it is true that the education system should draw a distinction between those who undergo hardships in order to excel at academic performances and others. It is worth mentioning that many a significant scientific discoveryies such as vaccines or cancer medicines has been made by high-ranking specialists who were by and large the most talented and diligent students in schools. That is to say, awards can provide an incentive for young students to set their goals and try harder to achieve the best results and improve their academic skills. Many books are published many a book is published On the other hand, not every student has the natural aptitude for gaining high scores in exams and a comprehensive education system should appreciate all learners not only based on their talents but also based on their efforts. I am of the opinion that individuals should be compared with themselves and any sign of improvement reserve deserves getting recognition in the form of reward. This practice will incentivize mediocre learners/underachievers, who found themselves unable to compete with top students, to strive to increase their academic competence. In conclusion, showing lots of perseverance and making concerted efforts, some students come in top in academic exams in the current cut-throat competition which is definitely worth rewarding. However, paying compliment as the recognition of the efforts which was were made by less smarter students is of paramount significance for their self-esteem and future.

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