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Topic It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Nowadays, from many individual‘s perspectives, it is a must for young children to understand the difference between right and wrong which could be learned during as a result of a punishment. I agree to a certain extent that disciplinary actions would have many effects on a child’s behavior. however, Being strict parents and teachers and persuade persuading young charges to have good manners by physical punishments can have negative results. Physical punishment is not likely to pruduce that result. Firstly, Once a child is punished for a mistake they he will never try to do the same thing again because they he will be in fear that again they will be beaten. A recent survey was formed between two groups, one group had kids who were never penalized for their mistakes while the other had kids who were punished whenever they misbehaved, so it was vivid that kids who were disciplined earlier for their misbehaviors were behaving more politely unlike the other group of kids. My impression is that physical punishment is one of the parenting tools that can cause more trouble than good. Instead of teaching children how to behave in different situations, adults just make them feel embarrassed to make a mistake and it can lead to being unsuccessful in their professional life in the future. Secondly, children tend to behave like their elder’s elders so parents and tutors should watch their actions in front of them and learning learn various skills which can be useful in manner cultivating. For instance, if a child behaves wrong their parents and teachers can start with talking and explaining the disadvantage of that deed/behavior/ethic and try to encourage him to focus on the beautiful traits that he has. Many of the parents believe that after using these skills, their offspring/toddlers become more considerate. However, healthy punishment (such as sanctions and confinement) is recommended on many occasions, in that cause children become more responsible for their acts. To conclude, most of the time punishment is a wrong method of raising a little one which brings about problems in their life. By contrast, if parents work through the problem and put time for their children, it is proven to be very effective.