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The only way to improve road safety is to impose severe punishments for driving offences. Do you agree or disagree? Undoubtedly, the number of car accidents have has increased in recent years. In this regard, some people think that one of the most effective ways to develop road safety is to put intense penalty for driving violations/offences. I partially agree with this perspective because I believe that the government should take action in order to develop public transportation. Admittedly, strict punishments can help to encourage people to drive safely. This means that severe fines for careless drivers can act as a deterrent and so that they do not repeat it their violations/offences/carelessness/recklessness again. In other words, there are different kinds of punishments such as fine, suspension license, and prison. For example, imagine a person who pays a huge fine because of speed/exceeding the speed limit and this costs him a fortune. So, he does not commit this offence again. Thus, road safety can be developed by putting severe punishment for those who drive in a dangerous way. However, the administration should take responsibility to improveing public modes of transport. This is because the rate of populations have increased nowadays and these transport facilities cannot response respond the populations. So, if the governments improved public transport facilities, people would be encouraged to use public transportation and this can lead to the advancement of roads. For instance, in most countries, people do not use public transports such as the underground or the bus, because they are not developed and they are always crowded and individuals decide to use their own private cars. Therefore, the government should develop public transportation because in this way people do not drive their own cars and roads safety will become improve. To conclude, after analyzing what has been elaborated above,I partially agree with this viewpoint putting introducing/imposing/setting severe punishment for driving offences because I believe that strict fines cannot work alone and we have other problems such as development of pubic modes of transport. It is hoped to that the government will take certain measures in order to improve road safety.