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School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In this day and age the educational system plays a crucially important role in fostering the learners. While many believe parents are more responsible for their children’s progress, others, however, argue that it is incumbent upon teachers to improve next generations’ competency in a way that they can face their life independently. Although there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I strongly believe that both the school teachers and the parents have the same authority to nurture the pupils. School children spend most of their time at schools, hence the significant role of teachers. I believe not only do the teachers have a deeper influence on their mental progress, but surely they have an extreme impact on their spiritual point of view. Furthermore, teachers are specifically trained to work with children. They know how they have to react with aggressive children or those who suffer from different kinds of mental disorders. Mostly student trust their teachers rather than their parents, and this is another special privilege of teachers with which they can have long-life impact on their students. Having said that, no one can deny the highly significant position of parents. If parents do not spend enough time on their children, they cannot expect to see a successful result. Wealthy children whose parents spend most of their time with their job are a case in point. Although these days perhaps both parents work out of home to make a leaving, I believe at least one of them must reduce his/her working hour to dedicate that time on his/her children. Alone and in some cases angry owing to the absence of their parents, children nowadays rarely see both parents together. Social and individual development of children is once again under the spotlight. Although I would tend with the ones who are in favor of importance of teachers, my votes does not go completely to them. I would argue that the role of parent is an undeniable fact. In other words, both the teachers and parents have equally importance role in development of pupils.

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