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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Nowadays it is carried out in some countries that the young people work or travel between finishing highschool and starting university studies .Travelling to other countries can give some experience to students and working is very useful for them. According to travelling is very difficult for students because they have to be far from their parents and their countries , and they should Have a lot of money.Some students who aren’t rich can’t travel. However, they can work for somebody , but some employers don’t give salary to them because they are very young. Sometimes they miss their family .Some of the students have never been abroad ,so they get afride . On the other hand, when students go to trips for a year , they become independent .It can be clearly observed that students must be alone ,and they have to perform their personal taks . Also,they can learn diverse languages ,and see different culture.They can go to industrial countries and get lot of ideas .If they work or travel for a year ,they will figure out what they want to e in the future .They can improve their abilities ,maby they make decision that they don’t go to university or some of them want to get accepted into the university in other countries. Althogh I agree with this opinion because each doing has a lot of advantages and disadvanteges , but I think some parents don’t let their children go abroad for a year because they think if they go to jureany they will face a lot of problems that the young people can’t solve .However, one day they should find their waeis and this way can be useful. In conclusion, young people can be encouraged ,but it isn’t enough. They need to have money or abilities to be alone and live without their parents in another country.All in all , these waeis are very good to getting experience and becoming independent.

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