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Nowadays there are many medical surveys of treatments to improve health problems. Who should conduct them, governments, individuals or private companies, in your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience. Physical and mental wellbeing is one of the basics of an advanced society. Recently in many parts of the world different kinds of medical care surveys have been introduced aiming to improve the level of general health. Whether the governmental departments, private sectors or individuals can conduct these surveys is the subject of a heated debate amongst many critics, and this short essay will elaborate my viewpoints on this contentious topic. Thanks to the advances of science and technology especially in medicine, humans are rewarded a better longer life. A large number of people do not follow a healthy lifestyle until they face serious health problems, and therefore many organizations are trying to raise people’s awareness in health related subjects reasoning that prevention is better cure. I, personally, maintain that individuals can lead a survey treatment only under a constant supervision of the officials. My baldness is a case in point that not only does following an herbalist’s remedy not cured it, but it also deteriorated my hair loss. Since a government mostly does not pursue financial profits as the others do, I cite that a governmental department would be the best option for this type of activities. Undoubtedly, not only does a government not conduct such activities purely for financial benefits, but also to the benefit of the populace. Furthermore, a government may be subject of change periodically, but the information gathered in a government will remain regardless of passage of time. I also argue that letting private companies conducting this kind of surveys is an informed decision. Many a knowledge based company can act as the executive arm of a government. Focusing on a specific subject, firms owned by nongovernmental individuals can conduct such activities much too better than a government. By way of conclusion, I believe that health- related activities are so important that only limited institutes can be authorized to be involved in them. Only if this surveys are under a strict supervision can people trust on them, and satisfactory outputs be achieved. I hold the idea that even in an otherwise perfect company financial profits plays a significant role, hence the importance of strict supervisions.

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