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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. While a vast majority of parents prefer their children to find their way by leaving parents’ their home at a certain age, others argue that this can lead to irrecoverable damages to both the youth, and society. When it comes to this notion, I maintain that children’s companionship of is a priceless gift that hardly can a family achieve it again. Many a parent holds the idea that children would rather leave their parents’ house after they grew grow up, and could take care of themselves. They claim that only if children leave their parents’ house at young ages, can they can find their themselves and find their role in society. That is to say, the sooner they leave parents’ home, the sooner they become independent. Furthermore, the advocates of this viewpoint believe that not only does is this so called early left departure is to the benefit of children, but also it has myriad merits to society. Those who leave their first home need accommodation, furniture, and household appliances, and thiswhich can create more cash flow and jobs in society. On the other hand, those who are against the above-mentioned stance reason that the early move out from family house may bring about a variety of physical harms and mental disorders with long run impact on either children or parents or both. While at parents’ home more often children are under severe scrutiny by their parents, and thus the probability of misuse of drugs/substance abuse and unwanted pregnancy is less than living alone. Inexperienced and in most cases naïve juveniles, are mostly a soft target for criminals to mislead them. Hardly a month goes by without an innocent teenager young trapped into unwanted criminal activity. To cut a long story short, considering human characteristics, I maintain that this is a controversial subject that itswhose impacts differ from person to person. In other words, a child young adult may leave his family at a certain age and achieve his goals, and whereas another person, even his sibling, that age might be adversely affectedharmful for even his siblings to leave their parents.

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