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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Improving the sense of competition in children is one of the key issues that parents should concentrate on. However, children who are able to co-operate with their peers also benefit of its advantages, so it would be better for them to have an adequate ability on the two skills. In this essay, the compelling reasons for both arguments will be discussed. The sense of competition has been playing played a pivotal role in paving the way for success for centuries. This feeling has persuaded many a people person to take risks, so that they might achieve their goals in comparison to their counterparts who have not tried hard due to the lack of this sense. In other words, competition can incentivize individuals to surpass others, and making them more successful. If parents try to develop the sense of competition in their offsprings as they growing up, these children will be more likely to gain success in future. Being eager to be more productive and useful members of society, people need to learn how to co-operate with others in addition to have a fair competition with them. Having a strong sense of competition may well result in disappointment for those who lose the battle to their counterparts, yet others find out the causes of this failure owing to their believe in co-operation. This means that people with a deep/profoundhigh understanding of both competition and co-operation, have a stronger tendency to apply their past experience in taking their future’s decisions. These group of people are also able to use others’ experience through co-operation. In summary, although there are cogent arguments on both sides of the controversy, parents had better have a balanced concentration on both senses as they are rearing their charges. (286 words)