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Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? No one can ever deny the significant role of schools in the children's life and always parents look for some ways which can encourage their children to study superbly. Although there is are various ways, people seek convenient ways which is paying money. I totally disagree with this idea for some main reasons which I will explain with a couple of examples. For the most and main reasons which can be on the top and covers other reasons is "responsibility". I believe that children have some responsibilities one of which is educating studying and by paying money they cannot figure out the responsibility concept and they must learn it when they are younger because in that case they can be more successful and independent persons. Besides, in my opinion parents work because they want their offspring to have a more comfortable life and study because in that circumstance they might have a brighter future, so if they offer some money for earning a high score in fact they pay a “ransom” which is completely unjust and studying properly is the least that children can do to compensate their parents, so they should do it in the best way. Another point is that, when parents pay money for each grade of their children, they get used to doing anything against some valuable aspects such as money which is not acceptable because sometimes we must do several objects tasks without any expectations such as helping poor humans and feeble animals. In addition, nowadays the economic conditions have variable fluctuant effects which means maybe be some parents do not have not extra money to inspire their kids to studying perfectly. For example, when I was at a elementary school, one of my friends told to her friends which that her parents did implemented this idea, so her friend became despondent/sad because she talked's talking about her family paying for better grades, developing complexes for her because she was did not have a good financial position. On the basis of the reasons which were mentioned above, in my experience this idea cannot be beneficial because children cannot understand the responsibility concepts and it causes constants expectations for them and also all individuals do not have the same situations, some of them have extra money while on the other hand some of them live in genteel abject poverty.