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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students Do you think this is a good idea? Support your' opinion by using specific reasons and details. 1‐ responsibility 2‐ being in society, social interaction experience in resume 2‐ altruism 3‐ although In many countries, teenagers are permitted to work in their vacations or parallel to their studies simultaneously. Nowadays, this issue has become a controversial topic between teaching experts and academic consultants. I myself believe that work can have the same significance of studying lessons at school. First and foremost, what can be better alternative for teaching teenagers the sense of responsibility than working? The prime advantage of working is individuals learn that they have liability for their duties. Furthermore, some attend in altruistic activities such as NGOs or foster home and they learn to be kind and generous towards other people deprived of enough money or a decent family. In addition, they learn to be gratitude of their condition and ambitious to improve their relationships with other members of families and their peers. Secondly, working is a proper experience for exposing students to social interactions. Today, many students try to do some jobs plus their studies, since it will be a competitive advantage when they want to occupy their favorite career after graduation. It is worth bearing in mind that today, emotional intelligence has the same importance of intelligence quotient, especially in some majors like business and policy. And last but not least, although working has some indisputable merits, we should strike balance between studying and working. On the other hand, working should not intrigue students to drop out their schools or be reluctant to do their home works. Quite the contrary, not only can working can be an added incentive to study hard, also it should guide students to find their preferences and contribute in their ambitious professions. To put it in a nutshell, I maintain that working has some positive points like rearing sense of responsibility in teenagers and altruism. Additionally, making social interaction is another outcome of working. Finally, we should pay attention that working does not make students on the verge of leaving school or being unwilling to study their lessons.

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