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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co‐operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. One of the main concerns for educational systems and parents has always been grappling to find a more efficient learning method with the aim of educating children effectively. Engendering a competitive atmosphere into children can be one of these methods, although it may lead to reducing a sense of partnership among them. Some assert that winning winging in rivalry is a natural inclination among individuals and it should be used by us in order to prompt children to apply themselves to learn more than before, in which case they are able to become excel at attracting others' attention and be cherished by others, especially their parents. Other people maintain that children can take more advantage of collaboration with one another as a team rather than competing with each other. It can improve their teamwork and teach them how to assume a responsibility in a group and focus on their capabilities which can be different compared with their peers. Moreover, acquiring this skill can help them to be transformed into a more successful individual in various periods of their adulthood like working life. I, personally, think that we can enhance both competition and cooperation among children. for this purpose, children should be encouraged to form various groups and compete with each other as a team. In this case, they can enjoy an advantage of a sense of rivalry and collaboration too either. In conclusion, although both of approaches have their own pros and cons, we should find an effective way to combine these two factors and take full advantage of them to rear an active future generation.