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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In this era, the main factor is money to meet the needs of humans’ life. A group of people believes that just the rich individuals are successful. However, others included me included believes that money is not the only success element. First of all, some people who earn less money can be successful in their business or own life. For instance, the teachers have lower income than engineers and doctors. However, they patiently teach to their students for to entering into the universityies and passing the exams. A number of teachers are successful in raising children and have a deeply influence as a better human being in their society. Furthermore, sometimes people with experience are more successful. For example, if a person without education such as repairer/repairman and he is not rich but he has unique knowledge and experience and people trust him, often he can make better money just because of trustful/trustworthy character and from my point of view, he is a successful. Another example is an individual who loves animals and makes an effort to save animals that are on a path of extinction may think he has gained success although he may have expended all of his money on his career. On the other hand, some people are very rich and they have their own business but nobody pays attention to them due to since they behave rudely and obsessively; from my vantage point, they are not successful just because they have a large amount of money. Will Smith says:” Money and success do not change people: They merely amplify what is already there.” All things considered, money is the most powerful possession in one`s life. Also, success is the ability to do whatever one wants to and to be satisfied. Success is not measured by money or power; success is measured by your inner peace.

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