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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. The importance of developing a sense of cooperation in children as opposed to encouraging them to compete is a frequent topic of discussions. To my mind, the most important issue for children is to acquire skills in communication and how to improve it effectively by expanding the collaboration skills. To accomplish this aim teachers along with parents should sow the seeds of seed the sharing , compassion and empathy in their innocent minds. Moreover, teachers have to teach them to develop peaceful manners with their peer students based on team working. They also should be taught have taught to working hard for the mutual benefits all together altogether by teachers. Although although competition motivates both adults and children and more importantly it pushes them to do well, if winning still means that the other person loses, it would be undoubtedly wrong. Sometimes children have been are pushed by their parents to win despite themselves. Parents have to consider that not only should they not nurture the children to be egocentric, but they also have to teach them that there are others around them. To sum up , it is almost impossible to separate these two aspects/parts/sides strands of our lives. In my view we need to develop a win-win attitude , . Furthermore , we need to be not only true to with ourselves and what we need, but also thinking about the other person's people's needs. If we can help our children to do this, we will be doing future generations a huge service/favor.

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