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Tpo 40 _ second part of writing. 377 words Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade they get. agree or disagree? When I was younger, I would definitely have said that offering money to children for each high grade that they get is not right. due to the fact that parents should serve their children unconditionally. However, no longer do I think that way. First of all, school-age children are quite sensitive and they need to know that their parents are supportive and they prize them when they make an effort and do their best in their exams but I reckon that it is up to their parents to choose their gift and it can be anything not just the money. It also can vary from a family to another. For instance, my family preferred to offer me some money instead of toys and so did I. As opposed to my friends who preferred take toys or even candies rather than money. On the other hand, offering money to children who still study in school not only is not a bad idea but also it seems so beneficial and it plays a key role in teaching them to be more responsible for their future finance issues and money management. For example, I can remember that when I was a 10- year- old kid I deposited all of money that I have(had) gained from my parents and learned how to save the money and how to spend it in a logical way. I may(might) have lost my money in some circumstances or even spent it in a wrong way but at the end, I learned how to take care of my money. The last but not least about offering money to children is that parents give the right to children to decide if they want to purchase something with the money or they want to save it or even lend it to one of their friends. thus, they can pick out/select/opt for the way that they want to spend the money and let them buy something they have always wanted. In conclusion, this hypothesis has it is own opponents who think that we should not restrict our children and must be openhanded with them in order for our children to grow up with love of their parents because it is a way to show them how much we care about them.