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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Today, with the rapid pace of advancements in the virtualization like e-commerce many people shop via the internet. This, however, can cause shop owners to close theirs all around the country. I, personally, argue this phenomenon will happen soon. Development of internet-related technologies has been cited as the main reason for the increase in online shopping. Many choose this since not only is it convenient, but also they have access to many different choices just with one click. They effortlessly can compare various brands’ products with each other by benefiting from many straight forward features on websites. Also, this approach can prevent them from wasting time on city trips (wasting time traveling around in the city) to find a properly desirable product which they seek. Online shopping is popular among those who are pressed for time which, nowadays, many of us struggle with, hence the variety of online shops. On the other hand, this common occurrence, using the internet rather than local stores, can lead many shops to shut down. With the decrease in the number of retailers, many lose their jobs. People are not eager to go outside in order to buy, and they prefer to stay at home to order it in pajamas through a website when are sitting behind their desk and drinking a cup of coffee. This behavior encourages many stores to establish their own website to preserve their revenue from reducing. Consequently, although many shopping stores have many customers these days, I believe that they will be the seemingly imminent sacrifice of online shopping in the near future by new generations.

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