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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?93 ******************** Nowadays, the issue of teenagers who are working for money is a contentious subject. Supporters believe it is an immensely precious event that leads them to learning how to deal with their duties in society; conversely, sceptics think it is absolutely harmful and improper for children. To my mind though children can update their social skills and understand the value of work and money, paid working has many harmful effects and we have to avoid allowing children to have a job. Firstly and foremost, sexual and physical child abuses are very common in working offices. Also, they are not paid as much as fair other adult employees. There are many cases in the world which where the children have been exploited especially whom those who are orphans or do were not bring brought up in a suitable decent family. Charles dickens who was one of the famous novelists in the world wrote the "Oliver Twist" and explained the situation which where children worked and were abused. That is why in some countries employers are not allowed to recruit under 18-year-old boys and girls as well as some groups are active in the society to raise social awareness regarding those problems. Secondly, there is not a suitable physical environment for children’s working because that was prepared and adapted originally for mature people. For example, chairs and tables which are used are not designed for children statures which renders their poor posture. Also the safety criteria’s which are implemented in working places are not suitable for teenagers who are more vulnerable, such as air quality or disturbing sounds, and if children are working in these places, they will be suffered/will be impacted both physically and mentally. The last but not the least, juveniles have to strive on for their education and working out not only will prevent them from those aims, it would also encourage them to in money making and leaving school, particularly those (who are) living in poor familyfamilies. To sum up, I believe that having many profoundly effects, children’s work/child labor take its toll on children and it is necessary to forbid going to work for children. ************************* strive immensely Naivety and lack of experience manipulated

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