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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Participating in some jobs while studying for students as a schools’ course sometimes has been argued. I disagree with this kind of unsalaried job for teenage students during their education. In my opinion, charity working should not be a mandatory course in secondary school. The students’ curriculum is full of many necessary courses such as Math, Literature, and Physics. Putting another timeconsuming course in the timeline can have deleterious effect on other courses. It may discourage some students who dislike working at that age and they may leave the school for good, while the main reason of education is teaching children some basic and scientific knowledge and prepare them to either pursue their education or step into a job. Therefore, with this information, I think that making them do a job unwillingly is not a rationally sensible decision. On the other hand, voluntary work when there is no obligation can be cited as one of the extremely effective ways to improve other aspects of life in motivated students. Those teenagers who are prone to pick a charity service to help the neighborhood or younger pupils can benefit from this choice. It will put a strong edge in their CV, and pave the way for getting a job after graduation or credit them to get an admission from a prestigious university. For instance, when students join an some optional work, they, compared to their counterparts in getting a job, are more experienced and can be one step ahead in the list because the experience has enhanced their skills. In conclusion, forcing students to do a job as a compulsory course as a school’s program, in my knowledge, can cause negative effect rather than any improvements, so I beg to differ.

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