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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder. Factors that affect people’s working efficiency vary from financial issues to their personal preferences. While some believe that money is the ultimate motivation for one’s hardworkinghard work, I believe that public recognition plays a considerable role in one’s hard trying/diligence because in that case they will establish a better reputation for themselves, receive admiration and set a great example. First of all, carving a niche in a working environment is something that needs to be taken care of, since individuals should show their true potential to others, especially managers. The case is seen clearly for those who work as an apprentice. Although working as a trainee does not bring any financial benefit, many other advantages will come along. Hardworking, being disciplined and responsible are among the factors that will impress everyone. In that case, if the person apply applies for this job as a formal employee, everyone in the company will confirm his/her capabilities. Besides, the more a person makes a name, the better working positions he/she will be offered. As a consequence, not only higher positions will be available for them, but also they will establish a deep rapport with their colleagues. Moreover, not all the motivations for one’s working is limited to money. Part of our human nature is to show off in a way that we receive admiration from our surrounding area. That even explains all the educational methods which are based on providing powerful incentives. The same goes for the working environment. Receiving a compliment, not only can bring more opportunities, but also results in deep happiness and more satisfaction. The examples are seen even in our daily lives, where one is playing an instrument in the middle of the street without asking for any money. Receiving loud applause for their sensational performance brings high joy and satisfaction, making them work harder to improve themselves. As a result, one’s self-confidence will boost dramatically in the long run. Finally, what guarantees a society’s survival comes from its citizen’s citizens’ alliance. The one clear example is the presence of charities for various purposes. Many join such institutions to make their contribution to those who are in desperate need. Volunteer members, not only do make a huge difference, but also set a great example for other people who are impressed by their deeds. When/once such people realize that their actions has have drawn public attention, they become more encouraged to do their best, making a difference which will benefit the whole society. If only each member of society exercised his/her responsibility toward others, the world would be a nicer place to live. Therefore, the general standard of people’s life will increase. To sum up, I believe that in general, people care about their public recognition more than earning money. because in this way there will be strong relationships, higher confidence and better welfare.