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Kamal Sadeghi (2nd) Nowadays many families have both parents working. Some believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while other think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both view and give your own opinion Today, a majority of parents are busy with their job. They need someone to care for their offspring. Although some people believe that the best choice is childcare centers, I would say that grandparents are more much better ( to care for children). On the one hand, it is argued that these busy families should rely on childcare organizations so as to care for their kids. It is maintained that sending children to these centers have has some benefits. There are babysitters who are often well trained, so they are professional childcarers. They know that what exactly they should they do for children comfort. For example, if a child needs food or some rest, which way it should have be planned is their expertise. Moreover, those children who are sent to these organizations are more likely to be independent than those of that are not sent. By the time, children who live with peers can handle the life better, independently. On the other hand, some people justifiably think that grandparents are more reliable to care for/ look after grandchildren. Firstly, since grandparents have enough experience through along with raised raising their own children, they can raise kids more easily. They know how to calm/soothe a child when crying or feed them when they are hungry. Secondly, it is the a fact that grandparents are family members. Consequently, those children who are raised under grandparents' supervision are more likely to be family-oriented. In conclusion, although childcare centers are professional and have efficient/nice services in order to for child caring, I personally believe that grandparents are a better choice for child raising. in order to do sth In order for him to do sth So as to do sth Longman exam coach

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