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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on their school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why? All Children need to have both education and play at the same time. Researchers define an appropriate age for starting education, so it is not necessary that children begin their education at a very early age. On the other hand, we should not be unaware of the fact that the best age for learning is childhood. Hence, they should have some training besides their entertainment. I disagree with both views because of some reasons that I want to describe them in below. First of all, I want to survey about one impact of stating education at an early age that is mentioned in the first view. Some researches illustrate that most of the children have mental ability for education at the age 6. If they begin their education earlier than this, it maybe causes of reluctance for to learning because they cannot understand some issues and they become disappointed. The second reason that I disagree with the first view is that it is not logical that children should spend most of their time on their school studies. Because it leads to boredom and makes them tired. Therefore, they cannot learn very well and it gives them reverse result. They should allocate enough and useful time for their studies. Other people believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Although children need to have entertainment and they should play and involve in physical activities. we should consider that childhood is the best time to encourage children to learn many things that may be useful for them in future and that's why this reason is that my I disagreement with the second view. In conclusion, I personally believe that all parents should consider a proper schedule and program for their children. Also, all children can do both education and play parallel/simultaneously during school time. They learn that how can they use their time for their activities.