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Some people believe that playing a musical instrument can be beneficial in many different ways. Others think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Playing a musical instrument has a great deal of effect on people's mood, whereas opponents opine that it is useless and wasting time. However, from my point of view, its benefits are legion. First and foremost, a society where people both enjoy and play music is a pleasanted place to live in, by the same token they have completely happy/vivacious/bubbly/delightful right relations with each other. Second, using various kinds of music indicates people's mode mood on many different occasions. As a case in point, in my country, Iran, individuals play bracing electrifying music in Noruz, while a kind of folk music plays in sorrowful days such as Moharram. Finally, people and especially children who play a kind of musical instrument are creative. In other words, using such instruments assists children in fostering the creativity of children and it has a superior importance for their future life. On the other hand, critics have the opposite opinion with the first group. Some of them think choosing proper policies to educate children in schools are is more beneficial than playing music, So that they believe that governments should invest in these areas. Last but not least, in some parents' opinion using musical instruments has not any advantages for their future, due to the fact that they (parents) think their children will earn a meager income and also it is not beneficial for them. In a nutshell, that both listening and playing music are lucrative for everyone's life is indisputable. In spite of critics' belief, the number of people who enjoy music are is on the rise, especially in economically uplifted countries.

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