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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Previously, women used to be housewives after marriage, especially when they gave birth to a child. It was their main responsibility to foster the child. But this trend has changed in the past two decades. Participating in different spheres of society, women have entered to the worldwide job market stronger than ever, which brought a controversial discussion up that the mother’s longhours absences from home can cause many harmful consequences for children’s upbringing. In contrast, I am of the opinion that not only do working mothers not affect their offspring negatively, but also they can teach them many life lessons more effectively. In this essay I will elaborate this statement more clearly. On the one hand, some people believe that mothers have a pivotal role in their child’s future characteristics. To make my point crystal clear, they consider father’s role to be a breadwinner. Therefore, all other nurturing matters seem to be on the mother, which is why they think when this mother leaves home for following her ambitious career and social position, she is obviously neglecting her children’s training. From this vantage point, not having an adult supervision on their activities, children, more specifically in their adolescence, are more prone to commit illegal activities, Whilst I think in today’s world both parents must pay serious attention to their children’s nurture steps. In other words, they can both have a job and share the parenthood’s duties at the same time. On the other hand, statistics have shown that educated mothers, who have high positions in different businesses, are considerably more capable of negotiating with their children about their daily issues, as they are in contact with most of these problems themselves. To exemplify, an unemployed mother can barely give a solution to her child who is confronted with a problem at school with his teammates. Besides, there are many jobs outside whose requirements are more fitted to women, two of which are teaching inkindergartens or working in nursing homes, hence the importance of women in society. At last, although the vital role of mothers in children’s rearing is undeniable, were I to choose I would definitely vote for a high-position modern mother rather than an unexperienced homemaker one. However, there must be always a balance between their motherhood’s duties and their professional jobs.