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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Today the development in medical care and the enhancement in quality of public health causes people to live more and the average of life expectancy has been going up. Although it has several good influences, some problems probably are raised by increasing the life span of the people. I generally agree with this idea that the advantages of this improvement are a lot more than its disadvantages and then it was will be discussed in the following lines. First, it is obvious that people need medical services more as they get older and there are financial burdens on the governments to cover the cost of the medical services as the life span is increasing. There have been several instances in which some countries encounter with problems of growing the population of aged people. In these cases involving insurance companies to cover these expenses is the best solution, although, it is needed necessary that people should have paid their insurance premium in the years before they wanted to use it. On the other hand, increasing life expectancy has some advantages for society. First, as people are living longer their experiences in their work and life go up and others can fully utilize the experiences of each old-man as a lesson learned. Secondly, the talented people usually obtain their best achievement at the age over 50 years old and increasing of the life span lets them this opportunity to gain more success during their life. Third, by increasing the life expectancy the elderly people must and can use their retirement period. Encouraging aged people to enjoy their lives and spend their time with their families has a lot of advantages such as increasing exhilaration and happiness in the whole of society. To sum up, I contend that if the government can satisfy the old age needs such as medical care by the insurance industry and support people financially and also emotionally as they are living longer, the increasing increase inof the life span will have positive results for the society, but if not, living more longer will not seem like such a good choice!