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TASK 2 It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? In today’s world children’s behavioral treatment is becoming at the center of attention for many parents. Many questions remain about whether punishment at an early age is helpful in their learning period or not and also if it is useful, children can benefit from which kinds of punishment according to the rules! Some people believe that suitable punishment can positively affecteffect on children’s behavior specifically in their future life. What I am trying to say is, they will become more sociable in society and overcome all of their problems that they will be faced with , but it doesn’t mean parents can do any kinds of punishment towards their kids. For instance, when parents put some rules and restrictions for their children such as, they cannot play any computer games if they do not do well their homework. Another benefit of right punishment is, children automatically lead to doing their responsibilities better than usual and learn more about time management. However, other people have been claimed that punishment at early age not only adversely impacts on children’s mood, but also they will be more aggressive in the future. In fact, some parents in spite of the strict rules they still tend to do/administer wrong punishment. I this case, most of the young people’s violence is attributed to the wrong way of punishment in their early age, such as physical and mental abuse during their childhood. To sum up briefly, I think the first argument appears more logical and it is important to achieve a balance between the rules and the way of punishments. Parents play a vital role in their children’s behavioral treatment. Importantly, parents should find the best way to teach them their responsibilities and prepare them for the future life.